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SURROGATE RELATIONS Thread 3, part 27 updated 16/9 - Page 27

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

omg!!
what a sweet update!!
cant wait for maan to be back!! im sure geet will miss him like hell!!

continue sooon dear!!

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

What an update dear.. How can anybody not love maan.. He is so considerate when he wanted to kiss geet he controlled his feelings keeping geets feelings in mind.. Wen her leg went numb he made her feel better.. He sweetly confessed that he will miss her and told her that he will expect the same.. And the kiss.. I never knew such a type of kiss would be romantic.. Maan told her to dream abt him...aww.. Hope this week passes by soon..and maan tells her everything.. The best part of how and what u write is the simplicity... I just fell in love with ur story again...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

omg!wonderful update...

maan in romance mood...

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

from yesterday to today, hogayi na 1 week ?? 😆 ...

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misty_drastifan

@misty_drastifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

awesome update

wow Maan want to Geet to dream about them

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

even we will miss maan haina na geet 😉.cute and short update . loved the way whe n maan said ' he will miss her '😍.i was imagning how gc oops maan will say these lines . ahhh, i am blushing .😉

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

loved the update...

wow maaneet moments...

the way maan said he will miss her and asked her miss him and the gud bye with a sweet gesture of kiss...

pl cont soon

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anjani-pagli

@anjani-pagli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

oh wow!!!!!!!!! simply too good! so dreamy😍

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

chooo chweet

i loved this part..very cute n lovely dear

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: jasraj123
omg omg i am first one to reply😆. never thought it will be me

awesome update as usual. short but sooo nice. hayeee maan wanted to kiss geet😉😉😉 arey u have to wait. first confess ur love to her lol then dream of kiss😉. love the way he made himself not to kiss and think what he was doing. they drive back is aweee. hayee the sadness in geet's voice took my heart away with maan.

and maan saying he will feel good if she will miss him and then saying by to her omg bindu sooo nicely written yaar. it sooo full of emotion means touch his lips and then her cheek. a different way to say him feelings and kissing.

ufff he is going for week😭. pls make it fast bindu.

so i've prepared u for an update without Maan.😃..with Geet has to be gentle, coz of her past...and he is hinting that there is options other than Rudr available!!😆