If It Had Been Like This...(MG ff) Thread 1

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys i have read many ff's of india forums so thought of writing one i am not sure if u all will like it or not but there is no harm in trying right guys...my ff will start from the seen of maan and geet engagement where our gc got ill and the script got change so i have imagine if it had not happened so what the story would be so its my thought of the part of the story would have been turn in to ...here it is guys plz comment and like and do tell me to continue or not and u r point of veiw... plz ...

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IN THIS FF WE HAVE OUR OLD TEAM...

character sketch :

DADIMA

same as show sweet and lovely.

MAAN

Angry young man loves his dadima and younger brother dev a lot but hate naintara dev 's wife dew to her evil mind and he hate woman's expect his dadima bcz of his past he thinks them to be money minded and weak but at the same time he also respect them as thought by his dadima has his on rules and regulation strict from out side soft from inside . But one day his life change when he fall in love with a girl geet who work as his secretary whom he saved from her own brother respects her more after knowing her past love her a lot and takes care of her and her child as his own child for him its geet's child her past does not matters to him but wanna punish the guys who did this to his geet but cant voice it as geet said she has moved on with him and does not want to remember her past and maan can not she her sad remembering her past so he let it go as per her wish...for him geet wish is his commend .unknown to the fact that dev his brother is the person who had ruined his love geet life will he be able to punish his own brother for his sin will he be able to digest the truth...lets see...

GEET

same as show simple and bubbly love maan a lot .her family had abounded her dew to her past. Has only maan and his dadima who loves her like her own daughter and she to loves and respects her a lot .Her best friend is adi sir and pinky from her office but she knows pinky from her childhood as their father r friends .

ADI SIR

same as in ghsp.

PINKY

same as in ghsp

SHASHA

same as in show .

TASHA

same as in show.

dev

love his dadima and brother is married to nt love marriage but had done a great sin by spoiling a girl (geet) life and is guilty .He is a poppet of his wife.But is good from heart want to repaint for his sin by asking for forgiveness and is ready to go to jail if it is what it takes for geet's forgiveness.will he be able to forgive him self after knowning about maan-geet relation.

naintara

dev's wife selfish and money minded married dev bcz of his money .Hates dev flirty nature and can not trust him bcz of it.

merra

dev's collage friend secretly loved him in collage days still did has left him bcz of it after college. But hate him after knowning what he did to geet .Is helping him to come out of his guilt and get forgiveness from geet by finding her .she is doing this as a friend not bcz of love as she cant leave her friend in his bad times.

AND YAA OUR DEAR MR.MANCHANDA I REALLY LIKED HIS ROLE AND THE WAY HE TRUSTED GEET...

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part 11

PART 12

PART 13

PART 14

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Thread 2

SORRY FOR MISTAKE...PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice dear cont soon

and i will surely comment

please send me pm when u update

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PART 1(a)

Here in the hall everyone including our maan is waiting for geet and everyone wanna see the girl that has capture the heart of the great maan singh khurana most of the girls are thinking who is the girl who had done the magic of wining the stone hearted person heart and what does she have that they dose'nt all in all every girl is jealous of our geet and here upstairs our geet is getting nervous (guys every girl gets nervous so its normal)

pinky: yaar geet dont worry everything will be all right and dont be nervous if anything happen then maan sir is their for u right so no tension ok here lets talk to papaji he wanna wish u ...

pinky hands the phone to geet ...and go out to give her space to talk to mr:m as per her father's wish ...

geet :hello uncle ji ...(mr:mancanda=mr:m)

mr.m:hello geet beta i am really very happy that u had decided to move on and forget u r past but beta does maan known's that u r pregnent did he knows about u r past and u r family ...(he is asking it in a + way as he dont want her to suffer in future )

geet: ha uncle ji i had told him everything he told me he dose'nt have any problem with it but i am very nervous i need u r blessing uncle ji ...

mr.m :u have my blessing with u in each n every step of u r life beta i was worride if maan knows the truth or not but now after u said u had told him everything my happiness has no boundries u have got u r sole mate geet god bless u dear and yaa dont be nervous ur babaji is their with u and all the best for u r future geet now go everyone must be waiting for u ok...bye...

geet :thanks uncle ji u have all ways been with me like my father and for me u r really like my papaji thanks for everything ...bye...(she cut the phone after talking to mr:m for some more time)

Here everyone is talking in the hall while waiting for geet suddenly everyone has gone nub looking upstairs where geet is come out and is looking breath taking maan is staring at her without blinking geet is decending the stairs and is getting more nervous by everyone's eyse on here maan can see her getting nervous as she is not looking at him and her eyes r glued to the floor so maan thinks and started taking steps towards her and reaches near the steps as geet as came down he offers her his hand and as geet looks towards maan all her nervousness is gone she takes his hand and now both are looking in each others eyes and promising each other to be their for each other in every ups and downs in their life ...they are lost in each others eyes dadima sees these and think they r made for each other and goes to wards theme and breakes their eye lock and tells them to come with her ...and everyone moves towards the center dadima make both maan and geet seat together and then tells geet that see is looking really beautiful

dadima : maan beta i am very happy today my wish as came true u had chosen a life partner for u and i known that geet is perfect for u and will always keep u happy ... right geet said dadima looking towards geet ...

geet : jee dadima

geet promise dadima that see will always try and keep maan happy ...and dadima says that she has full trust in her ...and maan just smiles at both of them he is happy to see the bond they both share ...

**** THE END******

THAT'S IT FOR NOW GUYS HOPE U ALL LIKE IT ...DO TELL ME SHOULD I CONTINUE OR NOT AND IF U LIKE IT OR NOT PLZ GUYS ...SORRY FOR MISTAKE ...

next part :

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love4all
nice dear cont soon
and i will surely comment
please send me pm when u update

THANKS I WILL SURELY PM U ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love4all
nice part
update soon

THANKS FOR LIKING IT DEAR...

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PART 1(B)

geet: jee dadimaa

Promise dadima that see will always try and keep maan happy ...and dadima says that she has full trust in her ...and maan just smiles at both of them he is happy to see the bond they both share ...

maan is looking at both of them with his eyes full of love and happiness at the same time he admires both of them for the fighting spirit they both have they r his sole his reason of living maan cant think of his life with out both of them...they r his life...

dadima then excuses herself and live maaneet alone both of them look at each other and again get lost in each others eyes (mahi in background ) adi and pinky made their way to maan and geet to wish them ...maaneet r lost in each other

Adi :congratulation maan sir and geet...

maaneet :no response (lost in each others eyes)

Adi give pinky a q look and then his sweet laugh heheheheh

maaneet came out of their eye look and maan give a deadly glare to adi which instantly make adi shut his mouth...and glup his salieva while pinky just excuse herslef and run for her life here geet is hell embarrassed and is all red adi also excuse himself and goes in the direction pinky has run...maan then look at geet who is looking down at the floor all red who maan just love the red colour on those checks maan decides to tease geet to litghten the moment and bring his bubbly geet back

maan:geet what took u an hour after getting ready ?

Geet looks up...

geet just give a look like what? written all over her face then maan says ...

maan: ohh...u must be doing touch up right geet why u girls need to do so much make up god...

And is smiling to himself but keeping a striate face and having a mischife in his eyes ...

geet makes a 'o'shape face at maan with wide eyes

geet:maan sir what do u mean to say ke i am a makeup queen or'powder ke dokan' like those stupid girls who room around u with full of all these things to impress u...hahh ...

Maan smiles like the way he was able to divert her mind ...and give geet a look like that i am serious ...now geet gets engary with maan for comparing her with those stupid'powder ke dokan' type girls who room around him to impress him and turns another side ...not looking at him showing that she is angry ...

poor maan just wanted situation light is in for a trouble of a engary finance that to on his engagement wow...

******THE END*******

SORRY FOR MISTAKES ...DO COMMENT GUYS AND PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON...THANKS FOR U R TIME GUYS...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sldeeps
nice part

THANKS FOR LIKING IT...😊

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Originally posted by: jyoti_l
nice start...

thanks...dear😊

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PRECAP :GEET ENGARY WITH MAAN !🤢

PART:2(A)

Maan thinks god what to do now she is engary but i was just trying to litghting the situation maan do something otherwise she is not going to talk to u n see the way she had made that grumpy face oh god see looks so cute with those look i just wanna take her in my arms...and calls geet trying to pacify her with his smile ...oh god the deadly smile any girl would die for but our geet is different but she forgives maan as geet only wants maan to smile like these his hole life she ask maan...

geet:maan sir i'll forgive u if u promise me that u will always smile like this promise me...

and maan smile to hear this ...(hohh...)

maan:geet i promise i'll always keep smiling

maan says all this to geet that to with a dashing smile of his (hoh...i am gonaa faint so many smile in just few min only our geet can do this to maan)

their talk is disturb as dadi ma came towards them and ask maaneet stand up then to everyone...

dadima :hello everyone today i am really happy that my lovely grandson maan had chosen his life partner ...and today they r going to get engage i am really lucky to get geet as a daughter-in-law or u can say that i rather got a lovely daughteryah u all hear me right she is like a daughter to me and will be my daughter to me ...my lovely daughter geet ...(dadi ma says to maan) maan beta as u had already given the ring to geet ...its geet who has to put ring on ur hand and u both will get officially engaged to each other ...(to geet)geet beta put this ring on maan 's finger ...(giving her the ring)

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Geet's ring