If It Had Been Like This...(MG ff) Thread 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part...

hope not much is wrong with her..

thnx for Pm..
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Originally posted by: payalpari

thanks for liking it dear i will surely pm u ...u said that u had send me the buddy invite but buddy i din't got it till now ...



i thought i sent u, anyways have sent it again dear...accept it...thanks for the pm...
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part 3
nice part...
hope the reports are fine...
cont soon dear...
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i will surely pm u dear ...send me a buddy requsest...
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hello actually i have no time to read your post and mai to is site pe isliya hon bcoz mujai pata chala ki geet ka end hona wala hai to is liya maina jai site open ki hai plzzz ap muja bata do kaya jai sahi hai ki geet ka end hona wala hai plzzz reply me good job continue your ff maina starting sai read kiya tha its nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8712g

hello actually i have no time to read your post and mai to is site pe isliya hon bcoz mujai pata chala ki geet ka end hona wala hai to is liya maina jai site open ki hai plzzz ap muja bata do kaya jai sahi hai ki geet ka end hona wala hai plzzz reply me good job continue your ff maina starting sai read kiya tha its nice

hey dear thanks for liking my ff and as if i have hear that its romour that geet is ending so chill just enjoy watching geet for now ok...
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awesomedear pls add me to ur m list
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Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesomedear pls add me to ur m list

i will surely pm u dear thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys i really wanna ask u guys if u want me to continue as i a m not getting more then 10 likes or comments and i really wanna no who wants pm i will pm them only and not bother other buddy's in my buddy list as i to like to read maaneet ff and have buddy list of those ff writer to get pm but now i am getting confuse who want pm for my ff as i really don't like to bother my other buddy's who don't want pm for my ff and guys tell me if their any other way that i can create a different pm list for my ff as i really don't know more of how to use IF as i am new here plz help me guys...tell me more about it and wanna ask how to add pics and video in the update ...plz and sorry for not updating will try to give 1 update every weekend only if u guys want me to continue plz tell me ...plz i am really upset for not getting likes also as i to use to press the like option if i cant comment at lest u guys can to that plz...




part : 4



Maaneet reach the hospital maan looks at geet who seems lost in her thoughts and is looking worried maan holds her hand bringing her back to realty geet looks at maan asking why he stop the car maan leans towards geet cupping her face with other hand and kisses her forehead telling her not to worry every thing will be all right as he is their with her to take care of everything their is no need for words in between them right now both understand each others feelings maan is trying to comfort geet as he does'nt want her to worry as maan knows that when it comes to baby how emotional geet can get and he understand her emotions as he knows that how every mother can get worried when it comes to their child ...


maan:geet hospital agaya he ...

geet: just give a nood...



maan comes out of the car and goes to the other side to open geet car door asking her to come out and offers her his hand and geet places her hand in his coming out geet closes the door and they both went inside the hospital and they goes to the reception asking for dr: Agarwal ...



receptionist : r u mr:khurana ?



maan: yes



receptionist :dr :Agarwal is waiting for u sir...u may go to her cabin sir...



maan noods and moves towards the cabin with geet ...maan knocks the door before enetering the cabin docter ask them to sit both of them sits and maan asks ...



maan: dr whats the problem is everything ok ? why did u call us urgently is their any problem with baby ? baby is fine na dr plz tell us



...and so on maan ask all the questions in one go not giving a chance to the dr to speak geet looks at maan lovingly seeing his concern and love for the baby she knew that maan cares for the baby but din't knew that how he had bond a relation of love as much as a father of a child by not only giving his name but also with all his heart that is full of love and care for the both geet and baby ...docter looks at both of them and thinks as to how much they love each other and admires their pair with a smile on her face...as now a days we don't get to see a pair so much in love with each other 😊...dr smiles and says...



Dr :mr khurana relax i'll answer all u r questions if u give me a chance to say something...😊



maan 😳 embarrassed just noods...while geet smiles ...😊



Dr: mr khurana i understand u r concern for u r wife and the baby but at the same time i don't understand as to how can u neglect the fact that if u r wife is physically fit or not for this pregnancy i am sorry to say this mr :khurana but mrs :khurana is really very weak physically and she is really stressed her bp is really high i dont understand if u don't take care from now on it can create complication and in this stage of pregnancy when she is 1month pregnant and u guys have not consulted the dr after knowing also how can u be so irresponsible mr :khurana i really don't approve u r neglency towards u r wife and child u really have to take care ...


geet was about to say something but maan says before geet can say ...



maan :i am really sorry dr i'll take care of her from now on wards i promise... ...



Dr : its ok mr : khurana but plz take care and yaa i'll want u to take special care that she does not stress herself as its really important that the mother does not stress as it will effect the baby and ill give u a diet chart which will help u to take care of her and give her all types of needed vitamins and calciums ...



after getting all the detials from the doctor maan ask the docter...


maan: dr should geet continue going to office as u said she should not stress herself...



***********the end***********



sorry for mistakes and short update in a hurry ...plz like and comment...


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Edited by kkiddoo - 12 years ago

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