If It Had Been Like This...(MG ff) Thread 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: love4all

nice part

lovely daadi maa
is too good

THANKS FOR LIKING IT DEAR...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice...


what is dadi upto??

keep thinking about it...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I LIKE IT ...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

I LIKE IT ...😃

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i will surely pm u dear and thanks for liking it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
till part 2 b
nicely written...
cont soon and pm me...
sent the buddy invite, accept it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

till part 2 b
nicely written...
cont soon and pm me...
sent the buddy invite, accept it...

thanks for liking it dear i will surely pm u ...u said that u had send me the buddy invite but buddy i din't got it till now ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Hey amazing update dear love maneet cute silly fights dadima kya kehna chahthi hai????
continue soon sorry for late reply
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya-

Hey amazing update dear love maneet cute silly fights dadima kya kehna chahthi hai????

continue soon sorry for late reply
love-Piya

thanks for liking it dear ...will update in 1 or 2 days !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part:3


precap :THAT THEY BETTER NOT REPEAT IT TO WHICH MAANEET NODS LIKE A BABY AND WAITS FOR DADIMA TO SAY WHAT SHE WANNA SAY...

As dadima was about to say maan's phone ring he says sorry to dadima and checks who's calling its from the hopital where maan had taken geet for her check up (if any one need to be reminded how maan had taken geet for her check up before their engagement )...



maan:sorry dadima its and important call ill just be back...



And he goes from their to take the call



Dr :hello mr.khurana


maan:hello dr may i know why did u call me is every thing all right i mean is their something wrong with geet reports...


Maan sence that their was something wrong with geet report that's why the dr called him this early in the morning as it is only 8:40am

Dr:mr.khurana i have called u to infrom u that we need to do some more test of mrs. khurana as the report we got from the previous test says that she is very weak and i need to talk to both of u so pls can u come for the check up so we can do the rest of the tests and talk about it...


maan:is anything serious dr ?



Dr : no mr. khurana but it will be right if we talk in personal as i will be able to make u understand it more clearly... from my point of view if u don't have any problem...


maan :ok dr tell me when we have to come? me and my wife (geet)would be their for the check up !


Dr:it will be great if u can come in an our or so...

maan: ok dr we will be their .


Dr:ok mr:khurana see u then bye.

maan:hmmm.


Maan cuts the call and is lost in his thoughts and is worried about what is their in geet's report ...


here geet is worried as to who's call it is as maan had gone from last 10 min and is looking towards the way he is gone dadima sees that geet is looking at the way maan is gone and calls her geet hearing dadima calling her name came out of her thoughts and says...


geet:ji dadima...


dadima:geet beta where r u lost ?


geet:nothing dadima i was just thinking where maan sir has gone its been more then 10 min he is not back yet he does'nt even had his breakfast and who's call it was this early in the morning that he is still not back...


dadima seeing how much worried geet is for maan just smiles at her ...and says


dadima: geet the call must be regarding something with his work u know na beta when it comes to work he want everything to be perfect ...i bet u geet he must be scolding some one for not doing his work properly ...


geet:u r right dadima he is a total dust danav when it comes to work he wants every thing to be perfect...


geet says making face which made dadima laugh ...and adore geet more for her childish behaviour its when maan came back and seeing dadima laughing he asked her why is she laughing ?


maan:what happen dadima why r u laughing?


dadima looks at geet and both smiles at each other...maan saw them smiling at each other and is thinking whats the matter and why r they smiling like this...


dadima: nothing maan beta ...and winks at geet which dadima thought maan din't notice but maan did notice it but brushed it as he has many more things to handle ...



maan to geet: geet get ready first we need to go for an important meeting ...


dadima:maan but i need to talk to u both beta ?

maan: dadima plz not now we r gating late we will talk after me and geet r back in the evening,,,,,,,,ok


dadima half heartedly agree with maan and say ok...

maan goes from their before geet can ask him about where they r going so geet also goes from their to get ready after saying bye to dadima ... that to without having her breakfast...



now scene change Both maaneet r in the car maan is driving ...

geet: maan sir where r we going its not kc route ?


maan:geet we r going for u r check up ...!



geet is shocked as to what happen suddenly they had gone for her check up yesterday only...then suddenly it stucks her mind that it might be something to do with her reports that's why they r going their...but she is also tense and nervous about it ...both r lost in the thought what is their in the reports but maan is worried dr words that geet is weak is ringing in his mind again and again...



*****************the end******************


sorry for mistake plz press the like button and comment...and just to infrom u guys i am going to bring nt,dev and meera in the light now so plz bear with me but i promise u all that u will love it as the story moves on with lot of maaneet moments ...




Edited by kkiddoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res will comment after exams

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