If It Had Been Like This...(MG ff) Thread 1 - Page 5

Hi Dear...just read the entire FF as got a PM from from you...amazing concept...frankly speaking the point you picked up as start is where for me GHSP golden perios finsihed...so thanks for taking that as a start

awesome ... superb ...

awesome update dear

part 4
nice part...
oh no Geet is that hale and healthy...
hope she gets fine and Maan takes care of her...
cont soon...

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Hi Dear...just read the entire FF as got a PM from from you...amazing concept...frankly speaking the point you picked up as start is where for me GHSP golden perios finsihed...so thanks for taking that as a start

amazing updates and loved the way you are progressing the story...

few requests now - Can you please make your parts a little long...they are little short and leave me with a incomplete feeling...otherwise story line and description is very good...

question - Can you mention where are Dev and Naintara currently in this FF...like are they in Delhi...or in canada etc...

Thanks for liking it dear i started this ff from this point bcz i know that if gc have not been ill then the story would be different and i always keep on imaging what it would be like if it had not happen so just thought to write down my imagination and as u said that i should make my parts little longer i will do it and will try to update long parts...dear for the q about where is the three of them u have to wait as their is a twist coming ahead for all of u so just keep u r finger crossed...😉

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

thanks for liking it dear...😊

Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesome update dear

it was short and sweet loved the way how maan takes care of geet

thanx for the pm

pls continue soon

thanks for liking it dear 😊

Originally posted by: maansee

👏

thanks for liking it dear 😊

Originally posted by: mrk_1

hi ..got ur pm ..

loved your style .. do continue with the pms ..

i do have some suggestions if u dont mind..

do make the update a little longer .. shorter one dosent give readers the satisfaction of reading the story ...

add some character sketch of some people ..it ll give a idea abt ur story ...

regarding fonts and colours , stick on to bright colours like black , dark blue and red yaar.. light green ...its difficult to read ... avoid using caps letter more ...

i hope i dint hurt you in any way ..

thanks for liking it dear...