If It Had Been Like This...(MG ff) Thread 1 - Page 81

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Posted: 13 years ago
if has gone nuts whole update was a mess doing it again sorry guys it will take some time
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

if has gone nuts whole update was a mess doing it again sorry guys it will take some time


its okie dear... we ll wait...hota hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12


maan ( thinking ) : is she thinking about her past as dadima said about marriage thinking this (he remembers the day they had attended the wedding in hoshiarpur and the way geet has cried on his shoulder remembering her family and her past )or is she crying remembering the betrayal she got in her first marriage.



He was lost in his thought when geet called him still hugging him tight ...



geet : maan sir ...



maan : still lost didn't reply to her ...



when she did not get any response from him she looked up still hugging him and found him lost in his thoughts and touched his check to bring him back to his senses breaking his thought process and he looked at her with concern and and worry and asked her...



maan : geet what happened why r u crying ?


when geet said something that shocked maan ...


geet : maan sir i think we should tell dadima the truth !


maan was staring at her with confusion as he didn't know or got it why all of a sudden she asked him to tell dadima about her past as he was still confused as to why she was crying he didn't got it even once in mind why she was asking this question all of a sudden so he asked her ...



maan : geet what happen first tell me why r u crying and why all of a sudden u want to tell dadima about the truth ?



geet : i think i am cheating her by hiding the biggest truth of my life from her don't u think we r cheating dadima by hiding such a big truth from her maan sir doesn't she have a right to know about us ?to know about the biggest and dreadful truth of my life don't u think so maan sir ?



question geet to maan and looked at him to know what he thinks about it and maan was again lost hearing her questions which made maan to think on what she was saying is indeed right they r doing wrong by hiding all this from dadima but the big question is how will they tell her about all this its not a simple thing ...they needs to tell her everything in a way that she doesn't judge it wrong or took it in a way it hurts her or harm their relation because sometime it matter as to how r we presenting the truth because it may lead dadima to think wrong about geet and maan doesn't want that even in his dreams ...his thought were broken by geet who shook him not getting any response from him and maan looks at her her face which was looking tense and pale it was then it stuck him that doctor has told geet not to stress herself as its not good for her health and maan gets angry once again seeing her state but clams himself not wanting to shout at her again and thinks of diverting her mind and says...



maan : geet u don't worry i will think about it but not now ok ...



when geet says ...


geet : but sir we have to tell her the truth we can't hide...


when maan cuts her ..and says...


maan : geet i know we need to tell her but we need to think about it too we just can't tell her everything just like any other thing na hmm ?


Ask maan and geet just nodded her head understanding what he meant...and maan continues...


maan : ok now don't stress u r lil brain much other wise don't know what will happen ...


says maan with a smirk on his face...while turning his face away from her and looking other side not meeting her eyes and looking at her with the corner of his eyes ...



when geet make a big 'O' shape face and looks at him with an annoyed face and asks with anger ...



geet : hawww kya kya kaha appne mera dimag...



when maan cuts her and says ...



maan : geet now stop making faces and lets go for dinner i am really hungry and i am not in a mood to fight with u...



And geet eyes pop out listening to him blaming her ... as if its her who always starts fighting with him and he is all innocent...



and was about to argue when maan says not giving her a single chance to argue with him or say anything...



maan : geet what r u waiting for lets go for dinner dadima must be waiting for us and starts walking ...




where as geet just looks at his back with anger and then looks up and say ...



geet : dekha babaji appne dekha kese yeh harwakt muji chirate rahati hai or phir khate hai ki main inse larti hu dusht danav kahaike...


And pouts while looking at the door from where maan left ...



precap : dinner ( wink )


next :PART 13


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    Edited by kkiddoo - 12 years ago
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    Posted: 13 years ago
    geet maan decide to think of ways to tell dadi geet lil braing this scene



    honeygrape thumbnail
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    Posted: 13 years ago
    short n lovely update dear...cute pics too...hope you ll be updating the next part soon
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    Posted: 13 years ago
    awesome update 😳
    loved it
    aroobasiddiq thumbnail
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    Posted: 13 years ago
    superb
    w8ng for their romance
    continue soon

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    Posted: 13 years ago
    short but awesome update payal
    loved it a lot yar
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    Posted: 13 years ago
    Loved the update...
    Loved the way maan made her feel better..
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    Posted: 13 years ago


    Such a sweet update...

    Loved it

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