Translucence - Finished. - Page 79

Very touchy and emotional update.. It was brilliant.. no words can describe what I feel after reading this..

I was reading something and came across this, and felt to share this with all...

Although life breaks us all, some of us manage to become "Strong at the broken places." This happens naturally if an emotional wound has the right conditions to heal. People who are lucky enough to inhabit emotionally safe environments start mending almost as soon as their injuries occur. the rest of us don't improve so quickly. We were hurt on emotional battlefields where there wasn't even a safe place to rest, let alone anyone skilled enough to administer firsts aid. So we patched our wounds as best we could and battled on, still bleeding, still carrying shrapnel in our souls.

It's your choice readers if anyone read this to fit our characters in there somewhere...diagnosing emotional injuries, first and then testing for emotional wounds and then treating emotional wounds. Hope they do find one or the other to heal some of the emotional wounds. it's about time to do so.

I'm pleased that Geet knocked at that door and more happier that Maan took up the offer.

The facts you find out after so many years later figuring out what have you done to cause such deeper crack and there is no such material to fill up and some other way you find out the cause of the damage its even worse to rectify. Geet did marvelous job, I can never understand why we cannot be rational in our words or action to validate our points to knock some sense in other head. Sugar quoted words and patience to act normal.

Nice part...
Waiting for more...

Thanks for the pm.

amazing...one of the best chapters written...dont know why but it raised my heartbeat... u write realllyyy well😊

part 21
i dunno how to say but i love this Geet and also her strong support or being there for Maan...
the boy is sure confused, as always...
he really needs some strong anchor, Geet is the only one for that, but he has to choose and rely on Geet to know and set things right...
cont soon dear...

Seriously you are on of the most sensible writer here, actually intelligent I should say, though I dont comment much but each and every update of yours is praise worthy.

Today I realized the bond between Maan and Geet, its uncondtional love, as friends atleast, when I read the scene between Damini and Geet, I understood and realized that Geet has accepted Maans as he is, all his defaults. Its like the bond between a famliy. Do I need to say I loved the update, super loved it.

About Methali, from your previous update, I could actually understand her POV, why she is the way she is, but still that cant justify her actions.

Another note, I am in love with your writing style, though I have to re-read every paragraph before reading the next, cuz Im really slow😆 but still I love it.
Much love, Amu

Soooks truly im speechless...u have truly nailed this part and really the way u have scratched down the core of a relationship wauw...

Waw!!that was a tremendous part!maan's childhood,teen and adulthood all were severely bruised by the doings of his surrounding ppl!he is bound to be broken,confused and derailed soul.the scene u described regarding him being a bas*child and both of them looking for the word in dictionary was soo much poignant.my heart jst went for the m.yes,it is tru that ppl can land up doing unbelieveable thngs due to the throbbing gush of loneliness,yet it can be done without breaking the slight demarkation of morality and indecency.this act of his mother's was the last straw to take out for damaging his mind in such extent that he is even unable to decide what he wants from his lyf.
I jst luved the para u wrote regarding geet's jst plain and simple acceptance of his altered being in her lyf,she doesn't care for what he does or doesn't,she has jst accepted him in her lyf with all his fault,amazing!
Wonderful update,waiting for their confrontation at maan's home,u jst left me wanting for more at the end.