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@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#761

R! Dulce Bellum Inexpertis...😉

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Some people walk the straight and narrow - some walk the rocky road
some get the silver spoon and some get the heavy load
there's a man in a paper box he smiles whenever we walk by
we just walk a little faster and say "there but for the crazy of God go I"
But a little love - just a little love - a little love can change it all...

Sooks, I am speechless! You have touched the core of a relationship with all it's values (honesty, trust, understanding, support, forgiveness, bravery, loyalty, and lasting love) that make us who we are as a person!

Simply brilliant. :)

Edited by night13 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: night13
R! Dulce Bellum Inexpertis...😉

You people and your fancy Latin. Gosh.

But haha, my good ol' friend Google helped me out

Edit:

I didn't comment on the last chapter so a longer comment from me. Yes this is long.

This has to be one of the best updates so far, so kudos to you and the fancy Latin speaking Aarya!

I love how protective Geet is about Maan, and how she accepted him fully with his flaws. And I guess that's what true love is (not that I would know 😆) when you accept a person with both their flaws and perfections. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I love your Geet with all my heart (...uhh...well...whatever there is in place of my heart) and soul.

Maan has hard such a hard life, and seeing his mother in bed with another man must have had a real bad impact on him. Yes, I can't sympathise with him. Call me heartless, but whatever he did was based on self-pity. It was his own choice, and he could've handled everything in a much better way.

But no matter how complicated or 'f**ked-up' their relationship is, they are always there for each other in the time of need and that's what matters. Hope they sort themselves out, I hope the past finally unveils and I hope Maan get's some sense. He is a man of so much potential and he knows that.

The ending just left me smiling, I'd say I'm speechless but I just wrote all that crap so that would be lying 😆. But I was stunned for a while. I'm going to read this again, because it's worth it. Oooh I feel like I'm in a Loreal ad LOL

P.S- Am I like the only one who hates Maggi noodles? Their noodles taste sooo nasty. Ew.

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Lovely update :) I liked the Damini-Geet bit, it was nicely written with just the right amount of angst!

I love how Geet is so fiercely protective when it comes to Maan, it's very sweet :)

Looking forward to their maggi-night 😆

xoxo

Aanya

P.S - I don't think I've ever mentioned it, but I almost always love your song suggestions :) For a change, I've heard both today's suggestions and I love them :D

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ninavi

@ninavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#764

just awesome update!!👏

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#765

This was emotional. For someone like Geet, it s as good as sharing in the insults, in the confusion and the hurt, in the unsettling feeling of not belonging, in all of it, acceptance is.

I applaud Geet for it takes a hell amount of courage to so completely accept someone, to partake in their pain without reserve even knowing it would leave its mark on them too and haunt as strong and for as long as hurt does..

Damn to be so unselfishly giving ! and damn if it didnt feel like he was a kid who errs , frets , then apologizes and forgets- when he looked up at her from his work, 😆.. I definitely understood why Geet went to see him soon after.. and heck left to me, I would have had her squeeze the life out of him and kissi him, like you would an annoying child who's being good for a bit.😆 you know like ' .. seriously! kya karoon main tumhara!'

super update.

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@Raina123

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#766

loved the way the way maan and geet understand eachother

Maan didn't miss the underlying question. Are we okay?

"Of course. Let's go home." We are, like always.

She smiled brilliantly in response

loved this part ...the best and the way geet stood up to damini was awsome .though i undertsand her sentiment when she married dileep but the pain she put maan thru is unacceptable .Honestly i thought geets harshness toward damini was justified

poor maan ,i just hope evrything turns out okay for him from now on

update soon im looking frwrd to mannets early dinner 😆

loved the update and firey geet is just awsome

raina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

Phew! I just wrote a whole lot of crap on the previous page. Writing about emotional stuff is like doing homework for me. I'm not very touchy feely.

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz
Phew! I just wrote a whole lot of crap on the previous page. Writing about emotional stuff is like doing homework for me. I'm not very touchy feely.

Tell me about it.

It took me three and half hours to write this chapter and I started writing like a lunatic as soon as I came home from work - without even changing clothes. 😆
I was wondering what to write and then aarya gave me an idea - "Involve mothers" and voila!!

Now I go back to hyperventilate on my latest eye candy. - Mizobata Junpei 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Tell me about it.

It took me three and half hours to write this chapter and I started writing like a lunatic as soon as I came home from work - without even changing clothes. 😆
I was wondering what to write and then aarya gave me an idea - "Involve mothers" and voila!!

Now I go back to hyperventilate on my latest eye candy. - Mizobata Junpei 😆

Writing about it is the hardest. And facing them in real life are ever harder! I hate getting into situation were I have to discuss touchy feely things. I mean, I can rant all I want about people I don't like but expressing my love for someone is so hard.

I don't watch Japanese dramas (I wan to though, reccomend any) so I searched the dude. He's quite hot 😆 But no one can take DD's place in my heart/hole/stone (DD as in Drashti 😆)

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

Writing about it is the hardest. And facing them in real life are ever harder! I hate getting into situation were I have to discuss touchy feely things. I mean, I can rant all I want about people I don't like but expressing my love for someone is so hard.

I don't watch Japanese dramas (I wan to though, reccomend any) so I searched the dude. He's quite hot 😆 But no one can take DD's place in my heart/hole/stone (DD as in Drashti 😆)

.. Ditto😆.

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