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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Hola!! Amazing update as usual 😃

So they are the same age and were childhood friends...I seriously cant imagine Maan having a rabbit as a pet😃..that was a new one..she seemed to be his world..😊 and to think Maan was shorter than Geet...ouch !! LOL Sooks .

it pains me to see Maan so lonely and shunned right from childhood...such situations have drastic effects on children..

It was a surprise that Dilip and Pratap were so close...so it was NT's mother who ditched them...i am looking forward to see how Geet's life was after her father died..

Loved Maaneet convo and sharing of pieces of their lives...I was hopeful that Maan would take up the hospital offer - now upset that he'll pair up with Varun

i guess there are bitter truths which are going to come out and i am bracing myself Sookie...reading your story seems more like seeing a movie...i can imagine everything..😳

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Me again...I have read this update atleast 5 times from the morning...

Seems like Maan and Geet never really lost touch...they spoke on phone everyday?!!

Havent learned about Geet's pov yet, but seems Maan kept Geet very close to his heart always - even though apart, it seemed to me she stayed his best friend forever ..

Feeling sad now...dont know why..this story is giving me complicated feelings😕

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Oh My Frigging Torn mouth?? - the surprise made me open my mouth too wide - yes yes _ i am exaggerating!

Very smart move!! The 1st bit had met thinking it was his mum who had died and I did a double take cuz I distinctly remembered Geet wondering/taunting Maan bout his mum leaving them!

Then came the bit about the pet - it's ironic how Geet is talking about death and innocent too about her not understanding what her dad says but believing it - jut like a kid does...and lo behold - she loses her dad right after that!!

The undercurrents of the dialogues, the actions of the characters, esp Damini...there's so much in it!!

Also, the treatment Maan got, the treatment his mother must've got - the kid must've obviously seen all of it - and also the haven he found in Geet is so vivid!!

Also, the yearning he had for acceptance - it's obviously a major influence in his future adult life...And so I get his conversation with his Dad!!

Geet - he life seems to be cinderella's but oh what a twist!! And what is with the 360 in her interactions with Maan - from insulting the model in his bed, to slammin him to the wall and them caring for him to be completely in tune with his mood - Sookie - don't do this to me!!

Ok have read it only 2wice!///and I don't wanna analyse n ruin it...aw heck who am I kidding!!

@Mysty - I'm reading it again!!

Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Awesome update... loved it
Thanx for the PM

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

part 5
wow u never miss to actually shock and surprise me in every update...
Maan and Geet have been friends from childhood...
they have been pretty close and Maan finds peace and happiness with Geet...
so Maan has had a very bad childhood days with his family...
Geet's dad and Maan's mom know the problem and certain issues...
wow Maan has been so attached to Geet's dad...
fantastic update dear...
cont soon...
love to read more...

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Hola!! Amazing update as usual 😃

So they are the same age and were childhood friends...I seriously cant imagine Maan having a rabbit as a pet😃..that was a new one..she seemed to be his world..😊 and to think Maan was shorter than Geet...ouch !! LOL Sooks .

it pains me to see Maan so lonely and shunned right from childhood...such situations have drastic effects on children..

It was a surprise that Dilip and Pratap were so close...so it was NT's mother who ditched them...i am looking forward to see how Geet's life was after her father died..

Loved Maaneet convo and sharing of pieces of their lives...I was hopeful that Maan would take up the hospital offer - now upset that he'll pair up with Varun

i guess there are bitter truths which are going to come out and i am bracing myself Sookie...reading your story seems more like seeing a movie...i can imagine everything..😳

I think the fact that Maan had been shunned by family made him the toughie he is - but in the balance you have Geet - she seems to have been byhis side too!

So def influenced him right?

ok me going for re-reading

reading on the phone is ...sad!

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Aww... I wanna go and hug this Maan !! Everything related to him by far.. Geet has been his major influence and I think she is the only part that he cherished apart from his mother or his Pratap uncle !!!

I really liked Geet too!!!

Awesome update!!!!