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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

fantastic update . the story holds a very depthness of emotions and you showed us various colours of emotions leading by protoganists . loved it .

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

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You never fail to surprise me Sooks. The whole set up of the story is amazing.

Coming to the Twin Paradox thing, I am not very well versed with science topics but I got the basic crux of the whole thing. And all I can say is hats off to the way you think. You are one of the very few people I know who can combine science with imagination. Great work 👏

I guess all of us if seen in this way do encounter this experience at some point of our life when reality strikes and the way we see it.

Am sorry for the very late comment

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

they were friends, and he consider her as part of his private life

and it is nice to know he willl work only for the sake of her father

nice update

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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

awsome update

btw thax for the pm

looking forward to the next installment

raina

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Sookie

Brilliant update.. So many hints here n there.. So the whole update gave us what kind of relation Geet and Maan share.. I had doubt before whether Maan likes Geet or he is trying to play games with her. His dialogue 'It isn't time yet' has double meaning before. One where he likes Geet and isn't ready to make a move on her and second where he is planning something terrible for Geet and is waiting for the right time. But this update gives quite a good look on how they both behave. Maan has changed over years and Geet is reluctant to let him in into her life now. He wants to find truth and want to gain Geet's trust, which he knows will take time. He wants love, which he knows only Geet can give him in spite of the things he has done in the past decade.

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613528

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

I'm running out of adjectives to praise you! I loved this update, I think it had to be one my favourites so far because this gave us a inkling about their past. (Ignore the grammatical spelling errors 😆)

I loved reading the flashback. Sadly Maan had a very painful, melancholic past. He was a bas***d child, not accepted by his elder siblings and Geet was his solace, his friend. Because of their parents they were force to grow apart (?) So Pratap Handa did something to save the group and his wife (Geet's step-mom) betrayed him and sold the information to Dileep .

One thing I found really cute was that Maan was shorter and Geet the taller one in the relationship. Figuratively, I feel Maan still looks up to her. Even though they have grown apart and both have dramatically changed, he still relays on her, and trusts Geet the most. As a child Geet said she will go up to be a doctor and always help Maan, and that's what she is doing :)

I really liked how he showed her his personal house. Geet has always been the one who he trusts the most, definitely more than his own kin and his 'girlfriends' with her he could always be his true self; a nerd😆 (just kidding).

I really enjoyed reading his thesis on Einstein's twin paradox. And not just because it was inspired by them, it was genuinely interesting to read.

Geet definitely does care about him, she doesn't want him to get into the web of deceit and fraud. Hopefully Maan will help his brother.

Pratap obviously meant a lot for Maan because he is doing tis all for his sake.

Thanks for the daily update Sooks,

Faria

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

@Faria-- umm where did you read his thesis?😕... Did I miss something?😆

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Another fabulous update Sookie.. bloody brilliant. disclosed the bond between them so effortlessly..

Even I loved the small detail.. that she towered over Maan..😆 aww.. and that calling her was the extreme measure his mom had to resort to..😆 adorable.

umm.. m not sure how comfortable you are with cute/adorable/sweet in relation to your ff.. but thats that.😆

felt really bad for lil Maan who just could not understand why his cousins were mean with him..

and ok.. this might sound very very far fetched and a bit ridiculous I know, but this Maan and Geet kinda remind me of Dagny and Francisco from Atlas shrugged.. in a very very small but distinct kind of way.

as to his thesis- that sounded really intelligent!😎 and interesting🤓..If there is any literature on that theory that non-physics-majors-from-MIT can understand , do share.😃

It may have become obvious to her, how the thesis was inspired by them , but it isnt to him right? some bonds and people are just close and in your thoughts, you don't question why or how,, and its not even about 'taking-for-granted' kind of stuff.

HOw i enjoy your writings, I tell you.. why dont you have your work published?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

OH YA OH YA!!!!!!!!!! So they do know each other far more intimately that I had previously assumed 😆 Naww they are complex and yet simple, it's perfect.

I am loving it so far and your rampant updates 😉

Love

Liz

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Another amazing update, Sookie! I get on IF, read your update, and then log off, literally.

Loved the peek into the past. Geet has been the one taking care of Maan, ever since they were ten. What is the plan that made Geet and Maan seperate? What happened to Geet's parents?

The playboy to the world, but the man inside is completely different. The "Einstein's Twin Paradox: A New Interpretation" blew my mind. That was brilliant, Sookie!

Thanks for the update!

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