Translucence - Finished.

First Previous

Page

102

Next Last

Frequent Posters

613528

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

I thought me and my siblings have a bumpy relationship, we're nothing compared to the Khurana's.

They both know and realise they are attracted to each other, but the misunderstandings, confusion and awkwardness overpowers their care for each other.

They still care for each other just as much though.

Sooks you lied, you said we would have to use a microscope to find the sparks of chemistry between the two. The attraction they feel for each other is blatant! And I'm glad :D

Sorry for this super short comment.

Keep rocking,

Faria

Quote

sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

awesome!

it's good that you gve maan and geet's point of view respectively!

continue soon!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

superb part!!!

eagerly waiting for next update.

Quote

Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Great update! Loved both Geet and Maan's point of view. Very well-written! Can't wait to read more about the plan and them..

Quote

chalobhago

@chalobhago

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

WOW Sooks, so full of emotions and deep thaughts

Quote

known

@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

wow both updates brilliant

love it core

do cont soon

thank yu so much

Quote

-Saibo-

@-Saibo-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

WhT is going on?!? Maan has some scheme doesn't he?

Quote

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

part 6
wow so nice part...
Maan's family is too much...
all so self centered and selfish...
Maan and Geet share a unique bond...
intriguing Mann...
cont soon...

Quote

Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

what is Maan upto?

it seems she is on his mind since the time she left with her father

Quote

anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#230

Both are connected to each other in many ways though it appears to be twisted for now...the underlying fact is that they touch each other's soul in many ways .. will this stay like this Sookie or will you bring in many more facets into their twisted relation... Maan is covering up his niceness under the wraps of being a flirt and playboy there has to be more to it...and Geet appears to be disturbed initially with this nature of his and gradually accepted the facts but somewhere it still pricks her...waiting to read more!!

Awesome update!!!

Edited by sneha0504 - 13 years ago

Quote

1 ... 21 22 23 24 25 ... 102

Translucence - Finished. - Page 23

Related Topics

Explore Topics