~maitri~ maaneet FF thread 9 pt77/78 pg 158/159END

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

part 78 ... awesome ... superb ...

loved it ...

enjoyed the entire journey of their maitri ... real gr8! n intense bond ...

thnx 4 d update n also 4 d lovely .. wonderful ... fantastic ... story

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swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

Beautiful updates... lovely end...

cant believe geet tried to kill kavitha...

awww luved maneet moments...

amy fighting for his dodo was cute...

really enjoyed the FF...

thanx a lot...

Luv u Muski...

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imaastha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

Awsome updates...
The bathroom scene was hot...nd funny when ammy came...lol
So geet spilled ghee on kavithas head..lol
she got what she deserved...
Loved the posessive amy...
The last part was really nice...
Loved it...
Will miss this ff...
Looking foward for another ff...

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

beautiful ending to an amazing FF Muskan...loved it a lot...this is probably my fav after Deewangi...

ab with both Bekhudi and Maitri at end...can we expect another new FF and aparachit to kickstart?

please...please life on IF is nothing without your updates...

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Lonely.Cat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

me getting senti ...finally maitri has come to an end

all problems resolved and maneet together

i loved the ending ...beautiful muskan .

hey do we get an epilouge or was this the epilouge ?

i'll miss gennie and dodo but the ff was great

loved it all the way

looking frwrd to ur next

raina

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#856

part 77- wow...what an update Muski di.. i cannot stop laughing...
i rly felt the pang of hurt when dodo looked around in genie's cupboard & found all odd(to her) clothes... 😔
"she knew it was for towel..
she smiled & knocked at the door... yeh lo..
he smiled inward how well she knew him.." - aww... dat ws sooo adorable... 😊
Maan teasing dodo was fun... 😆 n then the way he pulled her under d shower... who did dodo think she was challenging...hehehehhe... 😆 😆
"Yeh kya kar rahen ho..meri dress gili hogayen..she complained sweetly
this for pouring water on me..
she made a cute angry face...wo tho tum utt nahi rahen the
aisen utta then hain kya.." - hahahaha... dodo... genie ko geela kia to ab punishment to milegi hi na... 😉
the make out under the shower ws sooo HOT...!!!!! OMG.. i ws blushing while reading it.. hw do u manage to write Muski di... ☺️ ☺️
den amy enterin & askin dodo that what she was doing there.. n den dodo ka rply... "actually I was giving a bath to genie"....- hahahahahhahaha... that was sooo funny...🤣 n funnier... amy askin genie... "u don't know how to have a bath
how old r u ?"...- hahahahahahha... dat ws like THE MOST HILLARIOUS STUFF...!!!🤣🤣🤣
den maan & amy wearing similar color kurta was sooo sweet... 😊
n d last part... OMG... dodo ka reaction on seeing Kavitha... was that a reaction of a married woman or a 5year old kid...hahahahahhahah... i mean.. gosh she literally tried to burn her.. chased her throughout the house... hahahahhaahhaha... Kavitha.. say thanx to the guy who u betrayed.. usi ne bacha lia.. wrna to aaj tum khatam thi dodo ke haanthon...hahahahahha... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
"Maan kissed her sweetly on her forehead.. My Adorable Dodo
she cried.. I want to kill her.. she hit his chest making a fist.
He kissed her head ..holding amy in his arms. " - the last part was super cute...

part 78 - maha cute update Muski di... 😊
"amy became more senstive & senti.. he clung to Geet more. Last few days before delivery ..amy cried hugging her..thats when he first time felt the baby kick him. He had felt it before..but never so closely.
Maan immediately encouraged him to talk to the baby & feel her more. Amy spent the whole day around geets tummy.
Well that was it.. she couldn't sleep or do any thing.. either amy or Maan would be there always wanting to talk to the baby." - dat was like sooo very cute... chalo kamse kam amy ne dodo ko kisi ke sath share karna to seekha... n maan & amy tokin to d unborn baby... aww... shooo shweeet... ❤️
dodo scolding genie for looking at other girls was so funny & refreshing...hahahha... dodo ka gussa...hahahah...😆 😆
then genie ka Arjun se jealous hona.. n genie ko jealous karvane ke lie dodo ka wo dress pehenna was so cute... fir genie ka apna coat dodo ke around wrap karna... awww... the entire Genie-Dodo conversation was sooo cute...❤️ 👍🏼 they'll always remain kiddos...hehehehhe... 😆 😆
the last part amazingly zada cute... amy getin possessive about dodo as always & kiran imitating amy...hahahhaha...bechara genie..ab to do do possessive bachhe ho gae... hehehehhehe... 😆 😆 😆
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Muski di... thanq so much for giving such an amazing FF.. 😃 👏 seriously Genie & Dodo to hamari life ka part ban gae the.. m sooo gonna miss them... 😭
ur an amazing writer di... cuteness personified completely suits u... 😊 😃 ❤️ 👏
luv u Muski di... ❤️ ❤️ 🤗 🤗