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Posted: 13 years ago

Dreams
part 34

He took out the vegetables from the fridge.. she wondered wat was he upto. He chopped them..she twisted her lips & looked away. He rolled his eyes & made boiled the pasta. The smell of raw cooked pasta it self was driving her crazy.. she forgot everything & came & started to nibble just cooked pasta.
He completed the whole dish & served it in a plate. Before he could say any thing she took the plate from his had & relished every spoon of it. He just watched how she was enjoying the pasta. She definitely looked starved. As she finished ...tears began to flood again... his heart went out for her.. kya huwa Geet.. he almost cried helplessly not understanding why she was sad. He closed his eyes.. she thrust the plate in his hand..

why r u making all this for me now. She cried & ran back to her room. He didn't understand a word..he just went behind her..

Geet ..

geet meri baat suno

she again began to put her cloths back in.
tum rahene do main kartha hoon
she cried even more murmuring.. this is was u always wanted.. to send me away from ur house.
He looked at her in disbelief
she picked her cloths..again & sunk in the bed..
u just want me to leave.
Don't worry main kal hi chali javoongi
he closed his eyes.. she slowly cuddled up behind the bag. He removed it for her...
she turned her back to him..
abhi baby kaisen soyenga
mujhe sone bhi nahi dega..
she cribbed..softly..
he rested his hand on her stomach
baby kicked..snuggling
she sobbed..
kalse dad nahi aayen tumhe sulane ko
Maan didn't say a word. He couldn't she was cutest thing he had ever scene.. he lovingly patted her to sleep. He softly placed a peck on her cheek that formed a frown even in her deep sleep.


Next day the Geet was still not very happy abt her leaving.
Anni cheered her up with rakhsha bandan preparation.
Geet ignored Maan & gave him all kind of looks. He couldn't help but smile at her cuteness. She just couldn't hide her feelings. She if only u know to read her. She sadly asked brij when they r leaving
brij '
next week dear
Geet was excited she almost shouted ' really !!
every one looked at her.. she immediately straighten her self..
mera matlab hain.. oh.. thats sad
Maan laughed & shook his head left from there.

Later in the day they had a sweet ceremony where in Geet tied rahki for Brij & anni for Maan.
Brij almost cried during the process.
Geet '
veerji
brij ' I am sorry Geet. I failed in my responsibility of being a brother. I was not there to save u from all those villagers. He hugged her & said sorry.
Anni was getting really curious now abt all this.

While giving the gift brij gave her the complete 51% shares document paper
Geet '
nahi veerji mujhe yeh nahi chahiyen
brij '
lekin yeh tumhara hi hain. Aur phir Maan ki marzi
she looked at Maan ..
nahi veerji .. unki marzi bhi issen main hain
brij smiled ..aacha tuje kya chahiyen
Geet ' nahi mujhe kuch nahi chahiyen
brij ' I know something u can't refuse
Geet looked curiously at brij
he pointed at the door.. 2 men walked in with a complete range of her fav ben & jerry ice-screams specially shipped for her.
she smiled delightfully & reached to them like a small kid. Maan loved to see her happy. Her happiness meant everything to him even if his feelings mean nothing.
Brij put his hand around Maan '
aap ko kya chahiyen
Maan was bit reluctant.
Brij crossed his arm wondering wat Maan wants. Geet opened her ice-screams..pretending to ignore Maan. While all her attention was only directed to him. she was wondering wat did maan want. Her restlessness only gave him courage, he cleared his throat '
I would like to come with Geet to london

Geet's eyes popped out. The hand stopped mid way between the cup & mouth.
Brij ' offcourse that will be wonderful mama ko bahut aacha lage ga.
Brij got a call .. he excused himself.. Maan went close to Geet & took the bite she was holding in her hand. He bend down & kissed her stomach..
dad will always be there to put u to sleep
she immediately pulled her dupatta down. She flushed hotly under his touch & opened her lips to reply but thought better of it & started hastily up the stair. Hain...he breathed gazing at her in open admiration as he followed her in silence..
anni teased '
bhai aap kuch bhol rahen hain
he ignored & chased Geet to the room.

She couldn't believe..she was going home..meet mama.. & Maan was going to be with her. Her happiness, doubled she turned around spreading her arm out. He came from behind slipped his hand from her arms to her fingers.. she blushed & dipped her head down. He crossed her arm around & tucked her in crossing his arm around her..resting his chin on her shoulder. She closed her eyes.. feeling him so close.

Aab tho khush ho na he asked softly, his voice husky with concern.
Geet turned her head toward Maan, her lids fluttering open. She found herself looking up intoMaan's deep, dark eyes and for a moment she did not answer. She looked into his eyes.. oh my.. he missed a beat.. she raised in tip toes to kiss him then sighed & looked down flushing even more hotly & nodded. He probably just forgot breath..

he suddenly took long breaths.. & cleared his throat
Geet worriedly asked
kya huwa
he cupped her face just forgot breath I think..he looked into her eyes
with a hint of teasing & something else, something warm he whispered causing Geet to blush even more.

-dreams part 34-

-PREV PART 33 NEXT PART 35-

Thanks a lot for all the lovely comments & likes
i am super happy & excited with all the love u showered at me
wat a wonderful friendship day gift..
ummah
pls pls..
do comment & click like button
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me 1st to Comment after so many Updates...
Yupiieee Whoppiieee
Brij gave her 51% sharesMaan wants to go with her and Brij didnt say anything but happy with this wonder kiya woh sach mein itna acha ha? Geet is a real Cutie after 4 or 6 months she ate her Fav woh bhi MSK k hath ka bana hoa
Geet Kissed maan Perfect
Awww Dad will always be there to put you to sleep

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww. I knew it.. So finally Maan is going to accompany her😎..

But loved how she 'cuddled behind the suitcase on the bed whining'.. ADORABLE🤗munchkin😆

so sweet of Brij.. to get a truck load of ice-cream for her..😳

The last part❤️..😍.. but muskan, we re still waiting for the twist.. pweej give that!😃
Edited by ninand - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww Brilliant... 😊
Was Waiting For The Big Twist But I Think I'll Leave It... 😆
I Like How The Story Is Going..👏⭐️
⭐️I Can Sense This BIIIG TWIST Is Something To Do With Anni Finding Out The Truth...😲
And Maybe Brij...
I Hope I'm Wrong...😛
Loved How Geet Got Soo Excited When She Found Out She Was Not Going Till Next Week!!
And When Maan Spoke To Her Belly... ☺️☺️
☺️Adoreable... 😳






















Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
what a wonderful twist 😃
loving it ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAIII...kia update hai ...me having butterflies in m stomach
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind blowing update,so brij gets all the handa property,geet ke kushi ka asaman churaha hei, maan going to see his pari maa,
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...sooo cute updates...maan n geet ka rltn kitna betta ho gya... :D
luvd d updates... :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing and beautiful update.
Geet finally voiced out her pain
Her complaints to the baby were so cute.
Maan once again totally fell for his innocent sweet princess.
The rakshabandhan was so sweet.
Annie is still in suspense as to what happened.
Geet refused her property which was expected.
Brij's gift was superb.
Maan wanted to accompany his princess too.
How could he stay back when she would be longing for him.
Now it was Geet's turn to fall for her prince charming.
Geet getting showered with all the love was totally amazing.
Dont know how long it will last though.
Waiting for the next part.
Thanks for all the wonderful parts.

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ... loved part 34 ...

thnx 4 d update ...


continue soon ...

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