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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DaShIng_GiRl

congratulations girl on your 50th chapter!!
love the siggy😳
fsb update!!!
reply at the same time for arhi - hayye hayye!!
keep going girl..

thnku sindhu 4 lykin my siggy!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Chapter:51
nxt day was sunday!😊 khushi is sleepin! twodays before her parents had gone to lucknow as to look after their sweet shop there! it was buaji, payal nd khushi who was left in d house. payal tells khushi: khushi wakeup buaji told us to buy some vegetables! khushi said u go jiji. im feelin so sleepy. she takes d pillow nd continues sleepin. buaji ntices this she throws her blanket nd tells hey parameshwari uske saath sabsi dukaan jao!😆 khushi wakes up takes d blanket nd sleeps again! buaji tells hai re nandkishor ka kare hum iss parmeshwari ka!!😆😆 payal said she must be so tired after workin a lot. let her take some rest for one day. i'll go alone!! buaji said payaliya jaldi aana! payal goes!
Chapter:52
in raizada house akash asks arnav: bhaiya hws ur health!! arnav said im fyn. anjali comes sayin khushi is d best doctor for ur bhaiya😆 hw fast arnav recovered!😆 arnav doesnt mind her! he tells akash u have to go urgently to meet one person! he'll give u some imp work! u have to do it! akash said ok bhaiya where should i go! arnav said d location! akash replies is there any place near to his house! arnav says there's sabzi mandi nearby. arnav thn looks at anjali nd goes! akash asks anjali di tell me wat hppned to bhaiya. she said everythin! he replied i think we should give khushiji an award cz she's able to handle our bhaiya properly😆 arnav asks akash! u havent gone yet!😉 akash smiles at anjali nd said haan bhaiya im goin!!!
Chapter:53
payal bought every vegetables nd she was about to leave d place! meanwhile akash came there. he got out of d car. he said ok here is sabsi mandi but where's dat guy's house! suddenly he ntices payal who was walkin! he was starin at her! payal has to carry a lot of vegetables! nd nt only dat d weather was hot! she is completely exhausted. when she was abt to walk she was feelin somethin! suddenly she fainted nd was abt to fall! akash who sees this runs nd holds her!😳 he says i frgot her name! suddenly he recalled it nd said payalji utto! he sprinkled water on her but still she didnt wake up. he took her nd d scattered vegetables! he lied her down to his car nd went to nearby hospital. after sometym payal regained consciousness! akash was sittin near her!
Chapter:54
payal asked where am i? wat hppned to me! akash said payalji there's nthin to fear! u juz fainted cz of tiredness. nd d doc told me dat u didnt eat anythin! payal said actually i frgot to eat cz i have to go early to buy vegetables. but where's my vegetables. again i have to go there. akash said no need to worry payalji i took dat too! payal said thnxx by d way hw did u know my name! akash said i saw u in d mandir nd ur mom was callin ur name! he added r u havin a sis or brother! payal said im havin a sis her name is khushi! akash said so khushi is ur sister. she said haan. do u know her. he said im ASR's brother! payal said ya! i wasnt knowin dat! she said its so late. i want to go home! akash said doc told u to eat somethin after dat u can go. she ate food nd akash said i'll drop u home!
Chapter:55
in khushi's house buaji nd khushi were waitin for payal. buaji said hey theethaliya yeh sab thore wajeh se hua hein! khushi said maine kya kiya. buaji said tumne kuch nahi kiya! bechari payaliya saare saaman uttake aana hai!! juz thn a car stops nd payal comes out d car! akash said ok bye! take care! payal said bye! khushi tells i told u she'll come nw nd she came! buaji said tumne yeh kab kaha😆 khushi said juz nw😉 buaji said yeh gaddi kiska hain! payal said everythin to them! buaji said acha ladka hain iss liye tumhe yaha drop kiya! payal went to her room! khushi followed her! payal said devi maiya i frgot to tell him thnxx for droppin me home. khushi said dats ur behaviour. u alwys take help frm others nd frget to tell thnku every tym! payal said ur makin fun of me! u didnt ask me anythin abt my health! meanwhile in RM arnav thinkin abt khushi anjali comes to his room nd askas chotte i nticed u! u didnt talk to me till nw! wat hppned to u! r u angry wit me! tell na! arnav lost in thoughts!
Chapter:56
khushi tells payal i know ur well nw thn y should i ask dat again for formality😉 payal catches her ears nd said u think dat sister relationship r for formality! y cant u ask me abt dat! khushi said jiji stop hurtin im nt a kid! payal touches her nd hand nd tells but 4 me ur always im pyaari chotti behen! khushi takes off her hand nd tells im angry wit u! anjali asks arnav chotte im askin u somethin! reply 4 dat atleast. arnav comes out of his thoughts! anjali asks r u angry wit me. he said yes i am😉 she sits near her nd asks wat hppned chotte wat did i do! he said ur simply makin fun of me. y did u tell infront of khushi dat i used to tell about her alwys!😆 anjali said i thought i did somethin wrong. this is juz a small thing. arnav stood up nd said wat! this is nt a small thing! its a matter of my identity. i dunno wat she'll think abt me! maybe she'll be thinkin dat im juz an idiot thinkin of her everytym! i have my own identity before ppl stop spoilin it di! payal asks khushi wat did i do! khushi said i was abt to ask u abt ur health thn suddenly i pinched my ears! i wont talk to u! u think im nt carin abt u! anjali smiles at him nd said chotte i think ur thinkin abt her too much! he said no im nt. nd u plz dont make me think abt her. she said chotte! y cant u think abt d other side! arnav said wat side. he thn sits in his sofa! she goes nd sits wit him. she said khushi will be thinkin dat ASR is nt angry everytym. he is nice to everyone, carin nd so nice also. arnav said y should i think abt dat! anjali said ok ok im sry plz frgive me! she added woh kya hena ki humme baatein bahut karne ka addat padi hai! maaf karna plz. she touches her ears to say sry. arnav thn smiles{omg prob solved😆} payal tells khushi humme maaf karo na! humme patha hai tum humse bahut pyaar karthe hai! ainda aise nahi hoga plzz!!! khushi thn smiles nt tells jiji hw can i be angry wit u! ur d best jiji rite! she thn hugs her!!!😊
to be continued...
Edited by shobrakapooor - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh my god!
Did I just forget to update the post
Actually tests and then so many pms
Chalo pehle nahi ab sahi

The post as usual was rocking
The brother sister relationship was amazing
Specially Akash's entry was mind blowing
AWESOME!



Edited by murphy369 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyy di!!!!🤗
The 51st Chapter was too good!!! All the fights and etc that are going on are so cute yaar!😳 Aur humaara Arnav Babuaa😆 is STILL thinking about Khushi ji😳 Too cute!!

Can't wait until next update!!! (and when ArHi realize their ❤️ for each other😳hehe)
Take care,
Shipss

Edited by shilparoxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilparoxx

Heyy di!!!!🤗
The 51st Chapter was too good!!! All the fights and etc that are going on are so cute yaar!😳 Aur humaara Arnav Babuaa😆 is STILL thinking about Khushi ji😳 Too cute!!

Can't wait until next update!!! (and when ArHi realize their ❤️ for each other😳hehe)
Take care,
Shipss

hw fast did u read it!! well for love track u have to wait so long!! thnxx for commentin!!
luv u sisi😊😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shobrakapooor

hw fast did u read it!! well for love track u have to wait so long!! thnxx for commentin!!

luv u sisi😊😉


LOL sorry I read every single word there you know?! am serious😉🤣🤣 lmaoo I read fast lol (at times😆) lol
Yah I know yaaru. Pehle dosti phir pyaar😉 hehe😳
Your welcome!!🤗
love you too sisi😛❤️😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsum update..!!
Aakash n Payal scene! <3
luved d family scene..!!!
thnx so much for d pm! :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ammmaaazing;D;D
continue soon;D
thanks for the pm;D;D
Loving it;D
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice write up shoba, keep it up.
i am unfamiliar witht he charactors, but do like the way you presented it.
:)😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was really nice. Loved PAyal-akash scene !
Please do continue soon and thanks for the PM !!

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