FF: ---{Tumhari Dosth!}--- updated on pg83 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shobra!!
Loved the update.
The Akash and Payal scenes were so cute!! Payal has to meet Akash again to say thank you!!!
Arnav is still lost in Khushi's thoughts!!!
I love the sibling relationship you showed at the end!!
Great work dear and thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really nice update.
loved ur update.keep going
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Posted: 14 years ago
well i wonna join in the party lolz b;ess ya thanks lovellyyy post bless ya sweety
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Posted: 14 years ago
well theres not much to say u leave me speachless lyk always lolz bless ya thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey thanks for the pm...loved the sibling bonding...update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the pm...the update was awesome
i loved the payal and akash scene
please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Minnie.

well i wonna join in the party lolz b;ess ya thanks lovellyyy post bless ya sweety

ur alwys invited minnie!!😊😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Devika.

nice write up shoba, keep it up.

i am unfamiliar witht he charactors, but do like the way you presented it.
:)😛

good to see u back devu!! where were u!! thnxx for ur comments!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiya! just now read last few chapters!

Congrats for completing 50 chapters(I know I m late)

Arnav always thinkin about Khushi n vice versa!

These siblings are cute!

Gud one yaar!
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Chapter:57 akash was in his room thinkin abt payal😊 he said she's really sweet! juz thn mami came nd said kaun sbweet😆😆 akash shocked to see her he replied wat do u want ma! y did u come here!! she said hello hi bye bye hw dare u speak to me lyk dat!! tell me tum kiss ke bare main sochte ho!! he said aap ke bare main🤢 she said i dont blieve. im nt idiottwa to accept dat ur thinkin abt me😆👏 she added agar aap kissi se pyaar karthi ho thn stop even thinkin abt dat!! i wont accept her neber!!! i'll only prefer a bahu who is high class juz like us!!😡 she thn leaves. akash said yeh ma bhi na!!! Chapter:58 it was nite tym! khushi nd payal sleepin!! khushi was smilin! she was lost in her dreams!!😳
[[in khushi's dream- khushi runnin hppily in red salwar singin d song,
Laal dupatta
Laal dupatta ud gaya re bairi hawa ke jhonke se
Mujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se
Manaake mujhe dil dega voh, magar meri jaan lega voh -
later on a guy a comes his face is nt shwn! khushi's duppata goes near him! she sees dat nd looks d guy she turns back😳 the guy comes nd sings
Laal dupatta
Arre laal dupatta ud gaya re tera hawa ke jhonke se
Laal dupatta ud gaya re tera hawa ke jhonke se
Tujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se
Manaake tujhe dil dega voh, magar apni jaan dega voh
he thn puts d shawl on khushi! she turns to see d guy![arre dosthon stop guessin😆] its none other than ASR in his blue sherwani!!😉😛😊 khushi gets shocked she screamed nahi!!!
end of dream]]
she wakes up screamin!! payal too wakes up! she switched on d lights nd asked khushi wat hppned!! tell me! khushi drank water nd said nthin jeeji i want to sleep! payal stopped her when she was abt to turn off d lights! she said batao kya hogaya! tumne sapne dekhe ho kya!! khushi said haan!! payal said wat dream tell me na!! khushi said i'll tell but promise me dat u wont laugh at me!! payal said ok i promise!! she said everythin to her! payal looked at her nd burst out laughin!! she said tum aur ASR! seriously i cant believe! tell me khushi r u in love wit him. she said jiji i cant love him! no! hw stupid! no way! they r big ppl nd he wont match wit me!! payal said thn u mustve gone mad. turn off d lights i dont have tym to hear ur comedy nw!😆 khushi thinks am i love wit him😊 na!! i cant be! after all KKG will never fall in love wit ASR!!
Chapter:59
nxt day mornin arnav was gettin ready! when he was drinkin water he strted thinkin abt khushi! -the way she took care of him! he said wat hppned to me! y im alwys thinkin abt her!! im nt crazy to think abt her everytym! no i wont let anyone to enter in my life!! patha nahi ke mujhe baar baar uske khayal kyun aatha hai😉 anjali overhears this! she smiles hearin this! suddenly she gets an idea! she ran to nani's room took her radio nd went to sittin room!! arnav wore his overcoat[this is wat i call ASR style- a shirt, overcoat thn suite] he said i wont ever think of khushi!! im ASR nd she is juz my staff dats all!! he comes downstairs! anjali checks if he is cumin! she saw him cumin nd switched on her radio! the song was being played-----
Kabhi Kabhi mere dil mein kayal aatha hai
hey jaise tujhko baanaya hai mere liye
Kabhi kabhi mere dil main kayal aatha hai!!
arnav gets angry!😆 he switches off d radio nd goes! anjali switched it on again!! she hummed accordin to d tune😆😆 arnav came near her nd said di wat d hell r u doin!! i know y ur doin this! ur makin fun of me rite!👏 di said chotte wats d prob if i hear d song!! he said i know u used to hear songs!! di im nt thinkin of anyone! she said r u thinkin abt lavanya! he said juz get lost di!! he goes! she smiles at him! juz thn mami comes nd tells anjali betti! tumhe kiske kayal aatha hai! tum shaadi shuda hoo! thn kiske barrein mein sochath ho! if damadji knows this thn he'll... anjali tells nahi mamiji if im thinkin thn i'll only think abt my hus rite! im makin fun of chotte! he is thinkin abt someone this dayss!! mami said oh maine misunderrest kiya! 😆anji said missunderrest nahi misunderstand! mami said letit be! nani tells wat misunderstand. anji shocked. nani said wat is hppenin here! who is chotte thinkin abt! mami said woh sasuma... anji stops her nd tells mami u said ur goin to make somethin for us come na! i'll help u!! mami confused! they both left! nani said this anjali is hidin somethin frm me! i should figure it out soon!! arnav in d office lukin khushi!! he said im havin a meetin after some tym i'll surely loose it if i think abt her! i should give her more works so dat she'll be busy wit that nd will nt come to talk wit me!😉
to be continued...


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