FF: ---{Tumhari Dosth!}--- updated on pg83

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Nice update Shobra.

I knew Arnav would save Khushi from the goons.

I like the way Anjali's got him sussed out. I wonder when he'll admit that he has feelings for Khushi!!

Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks for the PM dear!!

😊

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Zahra

@Minnie.

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

well i was sure right u do uodate fast lolz bless ya

its a good thing btw i hate that w8in 4 the next part lolz

wht i lyk is u make us w8 but u dont dragg the wait lolz if that makes sence lmao

bless ya thanks

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Rocking update.😉 loved that everything cleared out.

Will be eagerly waiting for next part.

Raunika

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

It's awesome👏

Loved the storyline

😆 friendly Arnav...nice hun

Anjali will surely make him confess his feelings

For the last part , why do Khusi had to think about giving the file

I thought she just needs an excuse to meet him now😉

Shyam is not a villain, hmmm...unique😊

Keep up the good work!!

Please pm me when you update!!🥱

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

thnxx so much for ur comments!!! i juz love u all!!!

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Shilpa Sobti

@shilparoxx

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: shobrakapooor
thnxx so much for ur comments!!! i juz love u all!!!

Aaahhh!😉 No probs Navya di!!!🤗
Love you too!❤️

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

once again thnku so much frndzz for likin my story! i'll try to make it interestin as much as i can i hope u'll continue supportin me!! it's d first tym im writin a story! before dat i used to create somethin bcz in my xams for language subs we have to prepare things lyk diary nd all that! so im stoppin my borin intro😆 u maybe really thinkin wat hppned to me im givin an intro but today its party tym for me cz my STORY HAS REACHED 50 CHAPTERS!!!😊😉 im really hppy nd all thnxx to everyone who reads nd likes my story! i thought to party it through my story!

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khushi is so confused. akash comes. khushi calls him nd asks i heard dat ASR will nt come today. is it true! akash said yes he's nt cumin cz he's havin high fever! khushi gets tensed she replies 'fever' but y suddenly! akash replies one can get sick so easily. khushi replies he told me to prepare files nd give him today but he's nt here. wat will i do? akash sir can u do onething. akash replies wat should i do! khushi says can u give this files to him. akash says kya bhol rahe ho aap. bhaiya send me to do some imp work here nd i cant go back. im so srry but u can go to his house rite!😉 khushi replies wat!! me...!!!

in arnav's house anjali is givin him medicines. arnav replies y ur givin me medicines. its juz a small fever! anjali replies chotte its high fever! u shuld drink medicines. i know dat u hate medicines but u have to drink!!😊 juz mami comes nd tells anjali beti mein kabse bhait karthe ho! u nt cumin😆 u have to go for d puja rite. arnav said puja! anjali said yes im havin a puja in shiv-gauri mandir!! but im nt goin cz ur nt well. arnav said di plz u go. i'll take care of myself! anjali says i cant believe is this d angry young man ASR tellin me to go to temple. unbelievable!😆 arnav said di i dont blieve in god but i juz want to see u hppy! i know dat u'll feel sad if u didnt go to temple. so plz!! anjali said ok i'll go only cz u insisted me! if u want any help call jaiprakash! arnav said ok di bye! di nani mami goes out! it was arnav,jayprakash nd lakshmi😆 who is left in d house.

back in office khushi replies who can i go. i dont d way to his house i mean ur house!😉 akash replies i'll tell my driver to drop u! khushi thinks devi maiya patha nahi ki woh rakshaas kis tarah se baatein karengi. i'll juz go there give d files nd come back. i wont talk to him!! she goes out nd reaches RM! she opens her mouth wide open by seein d house!😆 she says is this a palace!! she sees d servant who is busy workin nd asks where is ASR? he replies he is upstairs. she replies can i meet him! he said ok! u go upstairs nd turn left! khushi goes to d stairs. meanwhile arnav wants to drink water but he ntices dat d jug is too far away! so he wakes up nd tries to take but he falls down. when he was abt to fall khushi who reaches d room holds him👏 an eyelock between d two! arnav said tum! tum yaha kya kar rahe ho! y did u come here. khushi makes him sit nd replies i juz came to give u this files nd nt to talk wit u!

arnav replies ok thnxx nd bye. khushi looks weirdly nd says ur so hot😲 arnav says kya!! khushi says ur hands r so hot. ur havin high fever rite! arnav replies ya! when u said hot i thought... khushi replies wat did u think! arnav says nthin! khushi tells u lie down. take some rest! she makes him lie down on d bed. she touches his forehead she tells ur temperature is high!! so high! she takes a tissue makes it wet nd she puts it in his forehead! khushi tells after some tym u'll temp will reduce nw! i swear! he replies so ur nt angry wit me rite. she tells yes im angry wit u. arnav says if ur angry u wont take care of me! khushi replies ok im nt angry wit u cz i cant be lyk u! but promise me dat u wont scold me or get angry unnecssarily. arnav promises her nd said sry! im really sorry! khushi said its ok. arnav said i was waitin for this! khushi said i'll bring soup 4 u! she goes nd prepares soup she feeds him. arnav says ur so carin. khushi tells everyone tells so! even my frnd also says dat! arnav asks where is ur frnd nw!! she replies i dunno. he is somewhere. maybe he'll be near me. arnav looks at her. she tells where ever he is i hope he is fyn!! arnav says even i dont know abt my frnd. she tells guess we both r in same situation. juz thn anjali comes nd she sees khushi! . nani ntices khushi! anjali said hello im arnav's sister. ur khushi rite. arnav used to tell abt u! arnav looks at anjali angrily.😳 anjali looks arnav's temp she said temp reduced. he was havin high fever nd nw he's ok. arnav wakes up. anjali tells khushi juz came nd wthin seconds arnav's fever has gone. nani is impressed! arnav said di! ur nt havin any job. she juz came here to give this files.

anjali asks juz for givin files nd looks at him. arnav nd khushi both at same tym replies yes!! nani smiles. she said khushi come we'll eat lunch. khushi said no im goin. but nani forces her so she agreed. nani nd khushi had a wonderful talk. nani was thinkin she is better thn Miss Kasyap. wish arnav falls in love wit her! but he likes dat uncultured girl! khushi goes! nani looks at her nd is lost in thoughts...

to be continued...

[hope u likd today's update. dont frget to hit d like button.😊]

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Shilpa Sobti

@shilparoxx

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

First off, Navya di... I would like to wish you a
HAPPY CHAPTER 50TH ANNIVERSARY!!!!🤗
😆 hahaha
Congratulations!!!!😛

Okay now my comment on the update:
I think the best part for me was when Khushi said, "Your hot" to arnav🤣 I was cracking up there and that was totally the highlight for me!!!!
Also, the second highlight for me would be when Anjali came in and saw Khushi putting the wet cloth on Arnav's forehead and said, "Hi I'm Anjali sister! You must be Khushi! Arnav has told a lot about you to me!!"
👏awesomee!!!
I was also enjoying how Nani said that hopefully Arnav falls in love with Khushi and not that dumb uncultured girl Lavanya😡.. WELL DONE NANI JI!!!!! Thumbs up tot he RAIZADA FAMILIA!!!! (spanish😉😳hehehe)
Over all congrats and awesome update!!!!👏👍🏼

Take care,
Your lil' sisi,
Shipss

Edited by shilparoxx - 14 years ago

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: shilparoxx
First off, Navya di... I would like to wish you a
HAPPY CHAPTER 50TH ANNIVERSARY!!!!🤗
😆 hahaha
Congratulations!!!!😛

Okay now my comment on the update:
I think the best part for me was when Khushi said, "Your hot" to arnav🤣 I was cracking up there and that was totally the highlight for me!!!!
Also, the second highlight for me would be when Anjali came in and saw Khushi putting the wet cloth on Arnav's forehead and said, "Hi I'm Anjali sister! You must be Khushi! Arnav has told a lot about you to me!!"
👏awesomee!!!
I was also enjoying how Nani said that hopefully Arnav falls in love with Khushi and not that dumb uncultured girl Lavanya😡.. WELL DONE NANI JI!!!!! Thumbs up tot he RAIZADA FAMILIA!!!! (spanish😉😳hehehe)
Over all congrats and awesome update!!!!👏👍🏼

Take care,
Your lil' sisi,
Shipss

thnxx so much sis for up gud comment!!! luv u a lot!!!😊😉