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Nihson thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
Please dont end it so soon.
Cont. soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
and
plz dnt end it sooon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
think maan shud properly express wat he feels for geet
keenu_kk thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one
try to give lillt big one dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm wat can i say ..u r gonna end it soon!!!!!
well im not gonna tell anything!!!!
ya quite an excited update tat was !!!!
so wat will happen next ...eager to know..
great job nands😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi


that was great part
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks 4 pm...it was a nice update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 11 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER - 12

Maan waited the whole night but abhay and geet were not back ... he was worried but he couldn't go leaving the others alone so he waited ... It was morning when he saw geet ... she didn't talk with him she didn't even see him ...he was hurt he didn't know his words will hurt her so much ... he went to talk to her but abhay blocked him ...

ABHAY : no
MAAN : abhay plzz ... i want to talk to her ...
ABHAY : see i m explaining u very calmly plzzz go ...
MAAN : i can't ... i ... i love her ...
ABHAY : oh ! really ...
MAAN : seriously ... i was just joking last night ... i thought tat would change her mood ... i didn't know that it will affect her ...

Abhay saw truth in maan's eyes and words ...

ABHAY : but she is immensely hurt ... i don't think she ll talk with u ...
MAAN : i ll make her talk
ABHAY : i want u to know something abt her past before u talk to her ...

maan was confused ... they both went to a place where they could talk calmly...

ABHAY : well i don't know how to start ... my father was the king of a country may be 300 years ago ... sid was the eldest son ... then myself ... geet our little princess sister ... our father was never partial he loved us all equally ... we three were trained in all arts ... Sid being the elder one was always dominant and aggressive but when it comes to geet he would give in easily ... our family was very happy and our reign was prosperous ... until Bairava entered ...

MAAN : Bairava ?

ABHAY : bairava was prince of our nighbour kingdom ……………….we had decided his marriage with geet …………………….. both the cities were happy ………………… Bairava was efficient , brave well versed in all possible things ……………………… he has seen geet in some temple and fell in love with her ………………………………. They approched our father and he agreed …………………………….. their engagement was arranged in a grand manner …………………………. The whole city was decorated and it was like a festival to people ………………………………….and it all happened that day ……………………..

PAST

Geet was all ready sitting in her room ………………………. He maids were teasing her ………………..she loved all that ……………………..Bairava was the man every women would desire for ………………………….One of the servents came to inform them that geet is called to the main hall of the palace ……………………..Geet went to the place surrounded by rich nobles and pandits learned and merchants …………………………..It was just like making announcement that the two are going to be one………………………the official marriage was arranged after two days ………………….

Geet was made to sit in the middle of the ladies ……………………….. she was very happy ………………………… Abhay and Sid stood as proud brothers behind her ………………………….Bairava would look and geet now and then and she would blush whenever he sees her ………………….. Geet was soon taken back and all the ladies were out coz it was time for men ……………………….all the kings were discussing their values and power and of course with lot of alcohol …………………………….Abhay and sid were given special instructions not to drink coz they were to manage the guests ………………………………

Bairava was all drunk but it was not unusual for a Prince or a royal child …………………….. Abhay took special care and sent a man in charge along with bairava ...

DAY OF MARRIAGE

Geet was getting ready when abhay rushed into her room …………………….

GEET : what happened brother?
ABHAY : I have no time to explain were ur maid's dress get under the tree near the river in 5 mins brother will be waiting for u there ………………………tell him that I ll see u both at the forest ………………..

Geet was confused…………………..

GEET :but brother …………….. my wedding
ABHAY : its all over ………………..
GEET : over? ……………….. where is father ? I want to talk to him
ABHAY : obey my orders
GEET : No
ABHAY : father is dead ………….

Abhay said in painful irritated tone ………………………..Geet frozed at his answer ………………….. she didn't tell anything ………………..Abhay called for a guard and ordered him to safely reach geet to sid ………………………..

Geet went to sid he was as tensed abhay she didn't manage courage to ask him anything …………………………………later abhay joined them near the forest ……………………….They rode for about 3 hrs inside forest it was all dark when they reached a place where there was some water and a small hut ……………………..
GEET : I …………… want to know EVERYTHING
SID : u don't have to know anything we r here to take care of you and we ll allow nothing to harm u
ABHAY : no brother she has to know after all its her life …………………………
Abhay explained to her how after the engagement party bairava was out of sense and brutally raped two girls from their dynasty …………………… when they went to ask him about it he gave the damn answers and later they discovered from one of the good hearted court men tat Bairava is cruel and a bas***d who has spoiled lives of many woman and also tat he is associated with evil spirits like black magic …………………………………
When their father finally decided to break the wedding bairava got agitated …………………………….. he was obsessed with geet and he wanted to get her by any means …………………………so in order to clear all this geet's father decided her marriage with one of his efficient minister………………………………..this made bairava more furious………………………….they came with huge army at unexpected time and destroyed almost the whole kingdom and also killed their parents…………………….
ABHAY : now they are searching for us precisly searching for u …………………………….
Geet couldn't believe that her life just turned upside down in just a day …………………………………………………
It was dark so they decided to spend the night in forest ………………………….
They heard some sounds in sleep and woke up to see Bairava with few of his men ……………………………………. They three were well trained and started to fight they wouldn''t give up until last breath …………………………. Though they were strong bairava was accompanied by evil powers …………………….. they managed to set a fire and push him in …………………………..but his powers were strong ………………………………..but pulled a rod of fire and managed to fire the whole place around them ……………………………. Bairava swore that he would allow no one to touch geet and will follow her for ages until she becomes his …………………………………..
Abhay , sid and geet were saved by chand and were ultimately changed them as wat they r now ……………………………
END OF PAST
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PRECAP –
MAAN : U THINK U CAN'T CONTROL IF U SEE MY BLOOD ……………
NOTE : I WANT TO KNOW IF U WANT BAIRAVA'S RE-ENTRY OR NOT IN BOTH THE CASES PRECAP IS THE SAME ……………..









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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum one dear
great part
precap was scaring dear
but want to know more
update soon

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