LOVE FILLED WITH BLOOD..MG ..COMPLETED - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
y is geet suspicious bowt maan
will w8 4 da update
gud luck wiv ur exams x
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update esp where geet was teasing abhay and pia
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update...
hey gud luck with ur exams...
will wait for the update..
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay nalla update antha geet enna yosicha
and precap athairadiaya iruku!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
VERY NICE STORY
JUST FINISHED ALL
THIS MAANEET VERY
DIFFERENT. ABHAY & PIYA
ARE NICE. SOME HOW VERY
DIFFERENT.LOVE IT
SO UPDATE PLEASE
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Posted: 13 years ago
Snehagujral has a confusion with geet's dress code as vamp ...yarr plzzz don't imagine in suit ...vamp geet will look something like this

CHAPTER - 11

They entered the dense forest ... it was late night and they decided to stay there until sun rise ... the tent was set ... it was not risky part of forest though animals could be expected...Abhay was not happy with the fact that piya and geet has to stay alone in a tent ... he feared their safty ...

GEET : wats up ?
ABHAY: i was just wondering ur and piya's saftey ...
GEET : y?
ABHAY : i ... its not safe to stay alone ...

Maan was listening to their convo ... so he thought of giving his piece of mind ...

MAAN : u don't have to worry ... its not tat dangerous ...
ABHAY : u can't be sure
MAAN : ohk ... if u r particular abt it then i ll take care of geet ...

He said looking at geetwhile she gave a confused look to him...

ABHAY : no way
MAAN : u should be satisfied with any one of the possibilty ...

Abhay went away giving stern look ...

MAAN : why does ur brother often give me tat looks ?
GEET : wat do u expect from him when u ask his permission to make his sis stay with u
MAAN : ohk ... i don't know wat u ll do but make ur brother to agree
GEET : wat?
MAAN : everytime should u be in the demanding side?

Geet rolled her eyes...She went to talk to abhay ...

GEET : why r u worried ?... u should choose any one of the option na
ABHAY : geet i can very well understand wats going on between u both and trust me i m not against it...
GEET : then wats the problem .?
ABHAY : u very well know why i warn u and asked him to stay away from u

There was a change in geet's expression ...

ABHAY : u know it is not safe for neither of u ... wat if all tat we fear of happens in reality ?
GEET :but i really like him and he can protect me ...
ABHAY : i wish i could say tat ... but he is not strong enough ... our enemy is stronger or may the strongest ... u know how we hide ourselves from him each day ... maan does like u but i doubt if his feelings are strong enough to stand by u ...


Geet lowered her eyes ... abhay went and stood near geet holding her shoulders...

ABHAY : i m not against ur love ... u know i trust love ... but love is not meant for u ... i m sorry to say this but u know the sequences ...

Geet couldn't take tat anymore she ran without speaking a word ...

Maan saw her running into his tent and followed her ...

Geet was sitting on the matress which was spread on the ground he went and sat near her ... he took her hands in his ...

MAAN : wat happened ?

geet nodded gesturing nothing ...

MAAN : did abhay shout at u ? tell me ...

She didn't reply ...

Maan lifted her face to meet him he put her strands behind her ear and and slowly kissed both her eyes one after another ... then he kissed her cheeks ... he moved more close and took her lips in his ...

Geet felt light it was as if her frustration was being washed away ... she was lost in his touch ...

It was then abhay's words struck her mind ...

maan does like u but i doubt if his feelings are strong enough to stand by u

geet didn't want to think those words or examine the depth but she couldn't forget tat ... wat if abhay was true ...wat if maan doesn't love her and it was just a time pass for him ... it was always been physical between them ... they had never talked beyond tat ...wat if love doesn't matter to maan and he is just enjoying being with her ...geet can't allow someone to break her trust again ... she couldnot afford an other betrayel ...

She slowly pushed maan away ... maan was taken aback ... now by her action maan was sure it was something serious in her head bothering her ... he wanted to know wat was it ...

GEET : wat do u expect ?
MAAN : wat ?
GEET : wat do u expect out of us our relationship ?
MAAN : don't u know ?
He winked at her with naughty smile ... he didn't know wat his funny ans would cause in her ...

GEET : u mean its was always physical for u between us ...
MAAN : geet we never spoke beyond tat ... and i ...

Geet snapped out of his arms and stood immediately ...

GEET : i can't believe u just said tat ...

Now maan understood she was really hurt and it was funny no more ...

MAAN : geet i was just kidding ...

She didn't listen to him ... she just walked out ...he followed her but she was faster that him ...

Abhay saw geet running from maan's tent ... he somehow gussed wat would have happened ... before he could stop her she disappeared into forest ...

Maan was abt to follow her but abhay stooped ...

ABHAY : i already warned u to stay away from her ...
MAAN : abhay plzz not now ...
ABHAY : u don't dare to go behind her ...

Saying this abhay ran into forest leaving behind a distressed maan
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i m gonna finish this just 3 to 4 chaps more ... i ve my own reasons for it like ...
# not getting good response
# i not adventurous person so its difficult to write
# i have idea for new FF

as i promised here is the update ... but my exams not yet over so next update only next week



t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
and what is maan waiting for???? run behind her
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upd...
lov it...
its goin 2 finish in 3-4 prts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
😭it's ending in 3-4 parts
continue soon

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