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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
awesome part...

seems like geet used to take care of everything regarding maan...even the small little things..

what happened?? what did maan say or do that she does not even want to talk to him...??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
part 4
why is Geet so mad at Maan?
why did he fight with her?
and even Dadi also not telling him where Geet is...
the flashback was so touching...
now i understand Geet Dadi equation...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
nice part...liked how dadi handled geet...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
😛 thnq for d lovely comments...
plz tell ur frnd about my stories and let more people know about my ffs... 😛

part 5


flash back continues...

geet bumped into maan..who was about to leave d mansion...
maan angrily - cant u watch...
geet made a baby face...
dadi - maan..dnt shout..she is our guest...
maan looked at her again..realizing she is d same mad girl whom she met sum days b4...
NOT AGAIN !!!!!!
maan - dadi ye pagal hai..aap se kahan se laye ho..
geet eyes filled up wid his rudeness...
dadi sighed watching her teary eyes...
dadi lifted geet up in her arms..
maan didn't like dat...
his dadi...n taking her side...
he left at once in angry steps...
...
geet hugged dadi tight...
geet - me papaji ko iska naam bataungi..fir papaji ise datenge..
dadi - arre papaji kyu..me hu na..hum eski barabar khabar lenge...
geet smiled - sachhi...
dadi smiled kissing her cheek - muchhi...
...
both made deir way to kitchen...
dadi sumhow wanted to distract her mind...
geet - aap mujhe yahan kyu laye...
dadi put her on kitchen slab...
dadi - ye janne ke liye ke aapko kya kya aata hai...
geet made baby face...
dat mean NO...
kuchh nahi aata...
dadi - mumma mujhe bata rahi thi ke meri geet ko sabki help karna achha lagta hai...
geet smiled...
she so much loved dat atleast sumbody is talking about her parents...
mumma praised about her..dat made her mood...
geet - dadi maa aap mujhe sikhaoge na..
dadi smiled - bilkul..dhire dhire..hum apko sab kuchh sikha denge...achha abhi apko kya khana hai batayiye...
geet - umm...mujhe na ice-cream khana hai...
dadi smiled...
she so much loved dis small princess...
its been yrs...aftr d death of maan's mom..she never had any1 to giggle..share herself...but dis small angel..has cum to dadi's life now...
dadi made her mind...
she never let her feel d lack of her parents ever...
NEVER !!!!!!!!
dadi immediately ordered ice-cream for her...
while she herself made maggi pasta for her..thinking..she may like it...
...
geet excitedly - mujhe pasta bahot pasand hai...
dadi looked at her in disbelieve...
another pasta member...
NO !!!!!!!
DADI - italian pasta...??????
geet - maggi pasta dadi...geet giggled...
dadi too to broke into laugh...
dadi - hum abhi apke liye banate hai...
geet - thnq dadi...
dadi - jab mumma apke liye kuchh banati hai..to aap unhe thnq kehte ho..??
geet shook her head in NO...confused...
dadi - to fir mujhe thnq kyun...????
geet smiled...I LOVE U DADI MAA...
dadi smiled - haan..ye chalega...
dadi sat beside her...feeding her...
while geet told all..how her mumma fed her everyday..about her dance classes...she so much loved dance...deir sunday movie...deir weekends...everything...
...
she just poured her heart to dadi...
while dadi listened everything carefully...feeding her wid her hand...
...
as d delivery boy entered wid ice-cream box...
geet left half pasta..n ran to ice-cream...
dadi just laughed...

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PRESENT

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maan snapped open his bedroom door in frustration...
banging d door..shutting behind...
he sat on his bed...
he didn't like d odd behaviour of dadi..
he was totally confused...wats happening...
where is GEET...
he knew..it must b one of stupid plans of her..to irritate him...
ok he fought...dats doesn't mean she vil irritate him like dis...
god...dis mad gal...
sab natak...
sabke sab natak kar rahe hai..jarur geet uttara ke ghar chhupi hogi...aur mujhe satane ke liye...
usne 2 saal se mujse baat nahi ki hai..etna kafi nahi hai..usne to mujse promise kiya tha ke wo mujhse kabhi bhi naraz nahi hogi...aur ab ye sab...
mujhe miss karna to door...mujhe baat tak nahi.ki..shakal to ab aur bhi buri ho gayi hogi...stupid dumbo ki..pehle bhi pagal dikhti thi aur ab maha pagal dikhti hogi...
he smiled at his own thoughts...
even talking about geet...pulls a smile on my face..he smiled..
aur ye stupid hai ke..where r u geet..i so much wanted to tell u..about suzeil...about everything...
...
how could u do dis to me...
u know i cnt stay without u..n u..i hate u..tumne 2 saal mujse baat nahi ki..bas ek baar mil jao..aisi halat kar dunga..ke dadi ke paas shikayat karne jaogi..
...
he closed his eyes wid mixed feeling...
anger...for no1 giving him ans...
sad...for missing geet...
frustrated...for dadi cold reaction..not dat love talk...
he was missing everything...
he banged himself on bed..pulling d dpread...

...
maan sleep's was disturbed by phone call...
maan - suzeil..dis morning..wat is it...
suzeil -maan..ur every call strts wid..was is it...
maan - baby m not n mood now..plz...
suzeil - fine hunny...ok..i may cum mostly by next month...
maan - alright..how's everything going dere...just mail me if u stuck up wid any prob...
suzeil - i vil baby...ok..got to go now..dnt sleep again..
maan smiled - love u..
suzeil - love u too..byee
maan hanged up...

...
while d morning was not normal in mumbai...
whole staff running from here n dere...
sasha - now..where is d file of mr.suri's project..mam..vil ask for it any moment..
tasha - ohh no..d file in not complete yet...
sasha - wattt
tasha - m so dead..
sasha - meeting still hav 45 min..u hav 15 min..can u do it...
tasha - mam..plz..help me..i cnt loose dis job..
sasha rolled her eyes...fineee

...
geet - file...
sasha - almost ready mam...
geet looked up from her files...
sasha - mam actually...
tasha came running in.. - mam..file is ready...
sasha took a relief...
geet took d file...tasha u can levae..
while sasha sat confortably on sit..
geet - sasha..everything seems perfect about dis project..but still m litle stucked sumwhere...
sasha - wat is it mam..
geet - wat is it..hmm..just 20 min left for d meeting...n in 15 min..i vil hav d reason of it...
sasha - m sure mam..no1 can cheat u..i can bet on it...
geet laughed..a complete blank laugh..no emotion...
sasha left..
while geet continued wid her things...

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...

MEETING...

geet vid an evil smile on her face...

mr.suri - ms.handa..aap ne kal kaha tha..u vil reply us by evening..but instead..u held another meeting...
geet - yes..mr.suri..actually i had sum question..which needed to b solved...
mr.suri litle unconrfortably - ohh...u can ask..
geet - mr.suri..d place...where u wanted our company to build ur hotel..can u tell me sum more information about dat land...
mr suri started to sweat now...
geet - r u fine mr.suri..shall i decrease d temp of AC..u r sweating...
mr-suri - umm..no..m fine..ohh..dat land..as i already told u..my brother had bought dat land 3 yrs b4..from a party..dey were not from mumbai..n i took it last year from my brother...

geet sarcasticaly- ohh..i didn't know ur brother is so spiritual...
mr-suri - sorry..i didn't get...
geet - as far as i knew..d land belonged to an ASHARAM...aur wo land..uspe gal hostel bannewala tha...wat about it..
mr-suri chocked - can i hav sum water...
geet - ofcrose...kabhi kabhi hum ankhen hokar bhi kuchh cheeze dekh nahi pate...like d water..see..its just in front u...
mr-suri gulped d whole glass in 1 go...
geet - ok so tell me now...
mr-suri - i dnt know..from where u got dis information..but dis is all roumers..u know compnaies now-a-days...
geet - mr.suri...u hav exactly 10 min to say d truth...ur time starts now...
mr suri looked at her horrified...
...

geet - 5 min more...
mr-suri - ms.handa...aap apna fayada kyu nahi dekhti..aap ko baki cheezo se koi lena dena nahi..im ready to increase d amount...
geet laughed making him scare to death...
geet stood at once...istantly zipping her blank laugh..putting a cold serious face...
geet - 1st of all..ye land ek ASHARAM ka hai...2ndly..ur brother mr.vijay suri fooled dose people by money...aur jab wo log paise nahi de paye..u consumed deir land for wid just stupid cost...3rdly n most importnt..u tried to fool..GEET HANDA...
mr suri looked at her in dis believe...
she knew everything...but how...wat is she..i underestimated her...ohh godd...
geet - ohhk mr.suri..so obviously...deal in nowhere..and on top of dat..i hav already convinced dat ASHARAM to put case on you...U R SO GONE..
...
mr.suri - wattt..u told dem to put case on me..r u mad...
geet - u r forgetting..u r standing in HANDA office..leave now..or do u want me to call for guards...to help u..she said laughing...
...
mr.suri shook her head at dis psychic gal..n left at once...
...

geet laughed again in empty room..roaring..NO 1 CAN FOOL GEET HANDA..NO1...
and her thoughts went into her past wen she was fooled so stupidly..

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
awesome . loved it 😳
thanks 4 the pm
please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Loved the sweet little Geet😊
Maan missing her badly, ab mulaakat hogi donoki???
Geet is such a brilliant business mind!! wah!!! maan gaye...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Excellent update...
want to know more past...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
nice update
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
lovely part dear
thanks for the pm

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