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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
I am dam happy about you come back. . . .
I love this story but sad 4 why he had girlfriend :( , any ways. . . Waiting 4 next part please updat it .

3 day waiting waiting waiting. . . Come soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
😛thnq for d lovely comment 😛

part 4


as geet entered...
her landline rang...
she smiled...
in past 2 yrs..its was only 1 person who hav her landline no...n dat was dadi...
geet - ji dadi...
dadi - mera bachha kaisa hai...dadi ki bilkul yaad nahi aati na..
geet - apka bachha bilkul thik hai..aur dadi ko sabse jyada miss karta hai...
dadi - beta aap apna khayal thik se nahi rakhte na..mujhe pata hai..
geet - dadi..ye complain mujhe karni chahiye..last week aapne sirf 4 din hi medicines li...
dadi made a baby face..how she alws knows...
geet - ye shakal mat banayiye..no scape now...agar fir se aisa huva..to mujse bura koi na hoga...
dadi - waise b aap se shitan koi nahi hai...
geet smiled - dadi..me shaitan nahi hu...aap ho..
dadi giggling - chup...apni dadi ko shitan bolti hai..badmash...
geet giggled...
d same moment maan entered dadi room..
watching dadi giggling on phone...
maan - dadi..aap has rahe ho aur wo bhi phone pe..jarur geet ka phone hoga..mujhe dijiye...

...

d moment geet heard his voice...
she striaght way said bye to dadi n cut d call...
she didn't like her name from his mouth...
how dare he take her name...
no1 takes geet handa'a name until she wants...
no1 ...
her anger brightened wid her red angry eyes...
as she banged to her room...shutting d door behind...
...

as dadi heard d bye from geet..dadi too put d phone down...
dadi - beta aap yahan..wo hum hamari ek saheli se baat kar rahe the...
maan - ohh..mujhe laga geet hai..
dadi - beta aap abhitak soye nahi...
maan - no dadi..jab se aaya hu..na kisi se mila hu...geet bhi subah se nahi dikhi hai..mujhe laga tha wo mujhe air-port par lene aayegi...par na wo wahan aayi..aur ab yahan bhi nahi..geet hai kahan dadi..koi mujhe bata kyu nahi raha..na mujhe koi cheeze milti hai..na hi samajh aa raha hai..ke kya kidhar rakhna hai..geet kahan hai...

dadi - beta aap 4 saal se london me reh rahe hai...fir bhi abhitak independent nahi ban paye...har koi aapke liye tayyar nahi reh sakta..aapko ye sab sikhna padega ab...aur rahi geet ki baat..wo is ghar ki servent nahi hai beta..u can tell any servent to adjust ur stuff in ur room...

maan didn't like dat...
how could dadi compare his best frnd geet wid a mere servent...
more over..wat he didn't like was..he wanted to meet geet..talk to her..spent sum good time wid all frnds...
n geet was nowhere to b seen...
maan - dadi aap mujhe batayengi ki geet kahan hai..wo apne ghar me kyu nahi hai...
dadi - wo apne ghar me hi hai beta...
maan - no dadi..uska room b lock hai...aur jab mene puchha to unhone kaha ke geet ab humare sath nahi rehti..wat is dis all...wat m missing here...
dadi - wo apne ghar hi hai beta..aap nahi samjhenge...u r missing nothing beta..coz u were never part of it...
maan - dadi..wat is dis all..m just not understanding anything...i admit..i fought wid her..n from dat day she havn't talk to me..i tried every way but she didn't...y is she so angry wid me..she never ever got angry wid me..aur jab huyi to etni ke 2 saal se baat nahi ki..aur ab wo yahan nahi hai..wo hai kahan...y is she behaving so odd...

dadi - leave all dis topic...got to ur bedroom...kal baki frnds se mil lena..
maan got really annoyed wid dadi's not answering him...
he walked off in strops...
dadi smiled sadly..
as a tear drop rolled out...
...

geet's phone rang again...
geet - ji dadi...
dadi - aap khana khana fir bhool gayi..jayiye abhi..
geet smiled - dadi aap bhi na..aapko phone se dikhata to nahi...
dadi - haan dikhta hai..ab jayiye...
geet - yes bosss.
dadi hanged...
geet lied on d bed...
closing her eyes...reminding d voice she heard sum min ago...
as once again..unwillingly..her thoughts made deir way...

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FLASHBACK

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1 week passed...
geet neither spoke to anybody..neither cried...
just slept for 24 hrs...
rajjender n malini were totally scared wid her odd behaviour...
geet banned everybody from her heart...
she was just like a metal doll waiting for her parents to cum...
if anyone tries to talk to her...
she would land up asking only 1 question - mumma papaji aagaye vapas...
as usual d ans was NO...
n aftr dat no..she wud ban all d talk further...

2 more weeks passed...
rajjender n malini were very much scared...wid geet's odd behaviour...
wat if sumthing happened to her...
wat if she bcum mad...
unlimited thoughts started rolling in deir minds...
finally rajjender thougt about his last try...

...
as he picked her up in his arms..
to make his way to d garden once again...
only to find dadi sitting on jhula..enjoying d cold winds...
...
rajjender dropped geet down..sitting beside dadi..while geet stood at d place where rajjender dropped her..watching nothing..
finally rajjender made her sit on another jhulla thinking she may like to play...
dadi did notice dem...
dadi founf dis beautifull small child too much cute...
dadi - arre rajjender..badi pyari bachhee hai..
rajje - ji..chachi ji..wo mere bade bhai sahab ki beti hai...geet...
dadi - geet..bada pyara naam hai...par wo etni udas kyu lag rahi hai...etne pyare chahre par aisi udasi...
rajje started to roll tears...
dadi instanlty held his hand - kya baat hai beta...
rajje - chachi ji..darasal..kuch din pehle bhaisahab aur bhabhi ki car ka accident ho gaya..dono nahi rahe..bus geet bachh gayi..
dadi was shocked to hear all dat...etni chhoti si bacchee..aur ye sab..how vil she manage...
rajje - geet har waqr unke bare me puchhti rehti hai..aur humare paas koi jawab nahi hota...dekhyena kaisi gumsum ho gayi hai...
dadi immediately consoled him - sambhalo khudko beta..ab jo huva usse badal to nahi sakte..par kyu na jo aanewala hai uske liye achhee koshish ki jaye...
rajje - par wo kuchh baat nahi karti..dr ne kaha hai ke aise hi chalta raha to uski dimagi halat bhi...
dadi - ye kaisi bate kar rahe ho..etni masoom si bachee...
rajje - chachi..aap usse baat karke dekhiye na...shayad wo kuchh bole..

...
dadi immediately stood up n made her way to sit behind geet on jhula...
geet didn't notice dadi for sum time..but den did...
geet looked at her wid all her hopes...
dadi looked at her wid concentration..trying to read her face...
geet - aap ke paas bhagwan ji ka no. hai..??
rajjender closed his eyes in pain...again d same question...
dadi smiled...
geet's hope rised wid dat smily face of dadi...
geet - boliye na..mujhe mummy papaji se baat karni hai...
dadi took geet into her lap...
geet still kept looking at her face wid all her hopes...
dadi - aap janti hai me kaun hu...
geet nodded in NO...
dadi smiled kissing geet's cheek...
geet liked dat...she felt dat warmth which she was finding for past 3 weeks...like her mumma had...
dadi - me apki dadi maa hu..kaun hu..??
geet - dadi maa...
dadi - me bhi bhagwan ji se milne gayi thi...tab tumhare mumma papaji mujhe wahan mile...
geet smied..got excited hearing dat...
she literally stood on dadi's lap wid her small small legs...
dadi smiled wid her smily face...
geet - aap mumma papaji se mile the..wo kab aayenge...
dadi - actually ne wahan pe ek chhota sa baby tha..kiske mumma papaji nahi the..to wo ro raha tha...
geet - meri tarah..
dadi - haan..isliye tumhare mumma papaji ko wahan bula liya.kyunki tumhari mumma bahot pyari hai na...
geet smiled - mumma bahot pyari hai..
dadi - tabhi to..baby ekdum shant ho gaya...to bhagwan ji ne kaha ke geet to ab badi ho gayi hai..bahot samjhdar bhi hai...
geet smiled...hearing further...
dadi - esliye bhagwan ne mumma papaji ko kuchh din wohi rukne ke liye kaha aur mujhe yahan bhej diya..aapke paas...taki me apke sath milkar khoob masti kar sakoo...
...
saying dis dadi started tickling geet...
geet started to laugh continuously..not able to bear more tickles...
dadi kept tickling...n geet kept laughing...rolling on lap..trying to stop dadi...
rajje smiled fullheartedly...felt relief..n left from deirback to his house...
...
dadi took geet to khurana mansion...
geet holding dadi's hand wid her tiny white fingers..went along...
...
geet was so happy like b4...
she vil b able to meet her parents soon...dat made her happy...
...
as dey stepped inside...
geet bumped into maan..who was about to leave d mansion...
maan angrily - cant u watch...
geet made a baby face...
dadi - maan..dnt shout..she is our guest...
maan looked at her again..realizing she is d same mad girl whom she met sum days b4...
NOT AGAIN !!!!!!
maan - dadi ye pagal hai..aap se kahan se laye ho..
geet eyes filled up wid his rudeness...
dadi sighed watching her teary eyes...
dadi lifted geet up in her arms..
maan didn't like dat...
his dadi...n taking her side...
he left at once in angry steps...
...
geet hugged dadi tight...
geet - me papaji ko iska naam bataungi..fir papaji ise datenge..
dadi - arre papaji kyu..me hu na..hum eski barabar khabar lenge...
geet smiled - sachhi...
dadi smiled kissing her cheek - muchhi...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
iss me bi mai first😆
lovely update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
part 4 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Maan missing geet, don't know when he will realize the truth behind her absence. The flash back part was really touching one, wants to see how Maneet friendship started.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
That was lovely. Dadi so tactfully treated the littlf doll and uski hasi wapas la di. Maan jealous that his dadi taking Geet's side.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
vil update next prt in d evening 😛

love
mishty
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

OSUM YAR PLZ CONTINEW I CANT WAIT KI KYA HUA MAAN & GEET K SATH KI GEET MAAN K MU SE APANA NAAM TAK NAI SUNANA CHAHATI... PLZ CONTINEW



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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
lovely update
waiting 4 next part
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
nice..:)
mishty update maaneet baby scene...

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