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Posted: 13 years ago
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😛 thnq for d comments 😛
😛 plz publish my ff to more frnd 😛

part 6


geet - 5 min more...
mr-suri - ms.handa...aap apna fayada kyu nahi dekhti..aap ko baki cheezo se koi lena dena nahi..im ready to increase d amount...
geet laughed making him scare to death...
geet stood at once...istantly zipping her blank laugh..putting a cold serious face...
geet - 1st of all..ye land ek ASHARAM ka hai...2ndly..ur brother mr.vijay suri fooled dose people by money...aur jab wo log paise nahi de paye..u consumed deir land for wid just stupid cost...3rdly n most importnt..u tried to fool..GEET HANDA...
mr suri looked at her in dis believe...
she knew everything...but how...wat is she..i underestimated her...ohh godd...
geet - ohhk mr.suri..so obviously...deal in nowhere..and on top of dat..i hav already convinced dat ASHARAM to put case on you...U R SO GONE..
...
mr.suri - wattt..u told dem to put case on me..r u mad...
geet - u r forgetting..u r standing in HANDA office..leave now..or do u want me to call for guards...to help u..she said laughing...
...
mr.suri shook her head at dis psychic gal..n left at once...
...

geet laughed again in empty room..roaring..NO 1 CAN FOOL GEET HANDA..NO1...
and her thoughts went into her past wen she was fooled so stupidly..

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FLASHBACKS

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dadi - geet..dhire dhire kha bachha..dekh sare kapde gande kar diye...
geet still kept licking her ice-cream..
dadi shook her head n left..making her sit in hall...
maan entered..only to find geet again...
he came n sat in front of her...
he was litle tired..so didn't want to fight...
geet n maan sitting on opposite coatch...
nakul came running - maan baba..apka juice...
maan - u r exactly 4 min late nakul...
geet looked at him from 1 corner of her eyes...thinking.." aise bade ko namse bulate hai kya..."
maan didn't notice..continued sipping his juice...
nakul went back taking empty glass...
maan was litle relaxed now...
maan - tum yahan...
geet now looked at him..she was scared of him dat day...she wanted to run from dere right dat moment...
but she couldn't...
geet - dadi maa mujhe yahan le aai...
maan - tum humare pados me rehti ho na...
geet nodded in yes...
maan looked at her wid great concentration...
he was way too mature compare to his age...
maan did find dat she is very innocent n gets scared very easilly...
top of dat...her cute face...
he might hav never seen such a cute gal..
she looked like a doll to him..cute..fairy..curly hairs..
wearing pink frolk wid cute pink shoes...
maan - tumhara naam kya hai...
geet thinking.." aye lo..us din mujhe data..aur abhi..etne sare questions puchh raha hai...mujhe ice-cream bhi nahi khane deta..."
geet recuantly - GEET...
maan repeated - GEET...
geet - hmm..aur apka...
maan - tum mujhe tum kehkar bula sakti ho..
geet smiled softly - ok...
geet - ek question puchhu...
maan - puchho...
geet - tumhara naam kya hai...
maan smiled softly - maan...
geet smiled back - maan..
maan - hmm..achha tum us din ro kyu rahi thi...
geet eyes filled again - mujhe mumma-papaji ki yaad aa rahi hai...
maan -...tumhara ghar kahan hai...
geet - mera ghar mumbai me hai...
maan - tumhe apne parents ki yaad aa rahi hai..to tum delhi kyu aayi...
geet - kyunki mumma-papaji lekar aaye...
maan - to wo tumhe yahan drop karke vapas chale gaye...
geet - nahi na...wo mujhe yahan drop karke bhagwan ji se milne gaye hai...
maan didn't understand...
3 yrs ago...
when his mom died...
he witnessed everything..so he was strong dat way..
so bhagwanaji ke paas n all was not understanding part for him...
maan - matlab...
geet - dadi keh rahi thi ke bhagwanji ko kuchh kaam tha esliye wo mumma papaji ko le gaye...tumhare paas bhagwanji ko no hai...??

AGAIN D SAME QUESTION...
bhagwanji ka no...
ye ladki kya bolti hai meri to kuchh samaj nahi aata...
just den dadi arrived...listening deir all talk...
DADI JUST TRIED TO PLAY WID WORDS...

dadi - beta maan bhi apki tarah chhote hai na..to unke paas apka no kaise hoga..achha aap jaldi se upar jakar haath-muh dho lijiye...tab tak me aap dono ke liye hot chocolate banati hu...

d moment geet left...
dadi sat beside maan...
dadi knew..how matured maan is comparing to his age...
so she decided of taking his help...

maan - dadi mujhe is ladki ki koi baat samajh hi nahi aati...
dadi - beta..uske ma-papa ki car accident me death ho gayi hai..aapn ne unke hath pe wo nishan nahi dekha..bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukar hai ke wo bach gayi..
maan was shocked hearing dat...
maan - to fir wo aise kyu kehti hai ke use bhagwanji ka no chahiye...
dadi - beta wo bahot masoom hai..dr ne kaha hai ke agar use koi sadama laga to kuchh bho ho sakta hai..aap aage se unse is bare me koi sawal mat kijiyega...
maan - to fir wo yahan kaise...
dadi - wo rajjender chachu ke bade bhai ki beti hai..wo log yahan mumbai se aa rahe the..par raste me unka accidennt ho gaya..aur bas geet hi bachee...
maan - dadi mujhe lagta hai ke usse sach batana chahiye...
dadi - nahi beta..wo apki tarah mature nahi hai..bachhee hai..nahi samajhegi..nahi seh payegi..
maan - to fir aage kya..
dadi - mujhe rajje se aur malati se koi jyada ummeed nahi hai..upar se wo brij..usse to bilkul nahi.pata nahi kya hoga iska...

...
b4 dey could speak more...
geet entered hall...
dadi suddenly got up making happy face...- tum dono bate karo.me abhi hot chocolate banake lati hu...

geet sat beside maan...
maan - geet...tumne akele ice-cream khayi na..aur mere liye...
geet made a baby face...
brushed her small fingers in her curly hairs...
geet - woh..umm..wo me...mene khatam kardi..
saying so she maid a cute baby face...
while maan made funny angry face...
just den dadi came wid 2 mugs of hot chocolate...
dadi - ye ake liye aur ye apke liye...
gesturing 1st to geet n den maan...
maan - dadi mujhse jyada payr karte ho ya geet se...
geet too very keenly looked at dadi for answer...
dadi looked at maan to geet n geet to maan...
dadi - hmmm.ye to bahot difficult quetion hai...
maan gave dadi an assuring look like signalling to take geet's name...
dadi - maan hum apse thodasa jyada pyar geet se karte..thoda sa jyada...
...
geet's smile widened..running to dadi holding mug tightly in her small small hands...
while maan made an angry face...
dadi picked her up in her arms..
while both looked at maan wid sorry face...
maan looked away..showing he is angry...
geet immediately came out of dadi's arms...
n ran towrds maan...
she scaringly sat beside him...thinking he might get angry again..
but he didn't...
geet once looked at dadi...n dem looked up at babaji n mumma-pappaji...
n den moved towrds maan...
maan knew..she is up to sumthing...
but he let her do wat she want too...
geet slowly came near his face..n placed a soft kiss on his cheek...
saying.." maan..aise sad mat hona..me tumhe dadi se jyada pyar karungi..."

dadi smile widened...d way geet gave a cute kiss n den jer cute words...
maan too was stunned at her action...
1st d kiss n den her sweet sweet words...
maan did like d way of her manaofying attempt...
...
he looked back at her...
kissed back her cheek...
geet smiled cutely..understanding he is not sad anymore...
she too expected him to say...
but instead...taking advantage of her innocence...
he pulled d mug from her hand...
n ran upstairs...
giving her evil smile...
...

d moment
he pulled d mug from her hand...
she was shocked at his action...
n b4 she could understand wat he up to..
she saw him running away from her...
she looked at dadi making baby face...
while dadi just laughed at dem two...

...

PRESENT

sasha banged open d door of conference room...
breaking d chain of old memories...

geet broked out her thoughts...wid sasha's voice...
sasha - is everything ok mam...
geet - y u asking like dat...
sasha - mam..i just saw mr.suri walking out of office angrily...
geet - he wanted to fool GEET HANDA...he had to pay...everything is ok now..u continue..
shooking her head..
sasha left to her cabin..
while geet made her way to her cabin...

...

while on d other hand...aftr suzeil's call...
maan got freshened...
n made his way to break fast table...
he greeted wid dadi who was having her breakfast...
n made himself sit next to her...
maan - dadi aaj breakfast kya banaya hai...
dadi - apke liye italian dish banayi hai nakul ne...
maan - ohh dadi..i wanted to hav sumthing indian..like geet ke hath ke aaloo ke parathe..kab se khane ke liye taras gaya hu...
dadi thinking.."...bete kash hum apko bata pate..jitna aap taras rahe hai..utne hi hum bhi...par ab pehle jaisa kuch nahi raha..kuchh bhi nahi..na aap..na me..aur nahi geet.."
...
maan - dadi..me aap se keh raha hu..kahan khoyi hai aap...
dadi - kuchh nahi beta..aur batayiye..london me sab kaisa raha...
maan - dadi..sab ok tha...sirf aap aur geet..dono mere paas nahi the..yahi ek baat mujhe sabse satati thi..aur geet ne to mujhe tang karne ka record bhi break kar diya...
dadi sighed feeling bad for d situation dat has taken place...
dadi - hum to hamesha apke sath hai beta..aap batayiye..suzeil se apki relationship kaisi hai...
maan smiled - she is very sweet dadi...just like geet...
dadi snapped - dare u compare any1 wid my geet...
maan - dadi..relax..m not comparing..my geet is d best...no1 can be like her..i know dat...
dadi - i shud take a leave...
saying so dadi was about to leave...
but maan's question stopped her...
maan - geet kahan hai dadi..
dadi - hum nahi jante beta...
maan stood up angrily - ye sab kya ho raha hai dadi..aap ke paas ye ek hi jhoota jawab hai..mujhe nahi pata...is dat possible...if she want i vil ask her forgiveness..par wo mujhe mauka de tona..wo hai kahan..usne 2 saal se mujhse baat nahi ki hai..can u believe dat..2 saal...aise bhi kaisi narajagi...kahan chhupi hai mujhse..usse meri kamjori pata hai na..esliye aisa kar rahi na mere sath..aur aap bhi uska sath de rahi...


" suna...
suna man ka angan...

dhunde...
payal ki wo chhan chhan...

suni...
suni man ki sargan...

dhunde...
geet tere humdum...

his every memory was remebered in his question...
only he knew..how much he missed her..her dance..d 24 hrs noise of her payal..
n now her sudden silce..has killed his feeling..his longingness to meet his mad n best frnd...

man me sham ho ya savera
laga teri hi yadon ka dera
tune bandhan kyu ye toda
tune kahe ko muda

kaho na...

...kaho na...

...kaho na..."

his question..had dat painfull song in it...
but it had no answer...
dadi left without replying..as a tear dropped out of her eyes..which didn't go unnoticed by maan...
neither dere was his geet...
to complete d song for..
to answer his question..
he so much wanted to see her..fight wid her...
but he knew nothing...dat was d worst part...
dere was just silce aftr his painfull lyrics...
dere was no geet...
to sooth his painfull questions...

...

d moment geet entered her cabin...
she locked it from inside...
y her minds..still thinks of dose old moments...which doesn't matter anymore...
she is no more dat old geet...
who used to dance...sing..for maan...
dat geet is no more alive...
n den y d hell still she her mind runs to those moments...
dose moments..which r permanantly banned by her heart...
no way...
no way..she vil let it happen...
not once again...
she is GEET HANDA...
n nothing can happen against her mind...
...
breaking all d walls of her thouts..
she made herself engraved in work...

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SPOILERS : WHERE D HELL IS GEET...??????????

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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
nice update
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
nice update
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Raapchik part jus luved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Chota Maan and choti Geet r cho cute. But aisa kya ho gaya 2 years pehle that Geet is not talking to Maan?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Awesome part
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Nice update but want to see maan soon meeting geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
awesome post. plz jaldi batao na past mein aisa kya hua jo ye dono alag hain.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update thanks for the pm continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

OSUM UPDATE DEAR... THANK U SOOO MUCH

THANK U

WILL WAIT 4 NEXT

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