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Posted: 13 years ago


hey Mishty...I love ur FFs..

I have read...LOVE BEYOND LIMITS, A DAY WITH U also...all have different concepts...

this is amazing FF...thanx for pm...please pm me for all ur ffs
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chotu Maan is so sweet 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
is it not someparineeta style story. i mean this locker concept. only.
loved the update. and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mannu1988

is it not someparineeta style story. i mean this locker concept. only.
loved the update. and thanks for pm.


yes dear...

in movie parinita...😊

i like dat desture so much. 😛.i sumhow wanted to use it..n got a chance...

so used it 😛



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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice concept dr,
loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😛 thnq for d likes n comments 😛



PART 9


geet nodded in yes knowing he is not gonna listen..once he decided sumthing...
maan smiled dat she accepted finally...
maan kissed her cheek...
she too kissed his cheek...
geet - maan mujhe bhook lagi hai...
man laughed d wau she said it...
n both ran to kitchen..

...
uttara's moving fingers in front of his face..brought him back to reality...
uttara - pehnegi nahi maan..pehnati thi...
maan was hurt wid dat statement...
wat does it mean by pehenati thi...n now...
ab wo mere pasand ke kapde nahi pehenti..kyu...m i not her best frnd any more...
hameer - maan...we r late..we need to leave...
uttara n hameer started to leave...
but maan's word stopped dem...
maan - wo thik to hai na...
uttara n hameer truned back to see a emotional maan lost in himself...
maan smiled sadly..remembering old days..
...
maan continued - usse apna khayal rakhna bilkul nahi aata...pata hai na..maan maan maan..din bhar sau baar jab tak mera naam na le..mujhe pareshan na kar le..tab tak usse chain nahi aata tha...

uttara n hameer were totally lost in his words..smiling emotionally...
while maan was lost in himself...
maan(more to himself) - kaunsi dress pehenani hai..kaunsi lipstick lagani..jhumke kaunse pehenane hai..aur barish me..umbrella kaunse color lena hai ye bhi mujhse puchhti thi..pagal...kitna gussa karta tha me uspe...to ulta mujpar gussa karti...ke me nahi puchhungi to kaun puchhega..me aur sirf me puchhungi...tum logon ka last year ka result day yaad hai...
...
he suddenly stopped remebering sumthing seriosu..which he do not wanted to remember...
uttara n hameer chocked in breaths trying hard not to cry wid d flow of emotions just created by maan...
maan's eyes filled wid tears...
he missed her so badly...
dat stupid idiot geet which wud irritate it every second even when he was in london...how much he used to get irritated..he loved it dat much on other hand...
he wanted her...like a drug he used of for past so many yrs...
y she got away from him..
y she didn't talk to him...
2 bloody damn years...
he only knows how he passed dose 2 yrs...
apne best frnd se aise bhi koi naraz hota hai...
idiot..stupid...dumb..he thought..
...
hameer - we need to pack things..we r getting late...
maan - where r u guys going...
uttara - geet se...
uttara chut her mouth immediately wid her palm...
while hameer eyes litle popped wid uttara's blabber...
but to deir badluck...
maan caught her words...but he decided to play wid his words...
maan - kya kaha tumne...fir se kehna..
uttara relucantly - umm..woh..me keh rahi thi..agar geet se milo tum..i mean agar use dhind lo tum..to use hamari taraf se bhi datana...ok..
hameer took litle relief...while uttara gave a weak smile...
maan smiled saying okkk...
but from inside...
he very well knew...wat he need to do now...
maan - ok..den..u carry on..
saying so hameer n uttara left...
while maan made an importnt call...

...

smiling to himself...
he reached home...
just den his cell rang...
maan smiled looking at d number flashing on his cell...
maan - heyy baby...
suzeil - heyy honey..didn't u tell sameer dat u r back to delhi..he called me dis morning n was asking about u...
maan closed his eyes n den opened again...
maan - actually i forgot to tell him..was litle hanged wid things...n..
suzeil - wat is it...
maan - its about geet sweety..
zuseil - so..did u meet her..did u ask her u she broke her frndship wid u...
maan got angry - suzeil..enough of it..i hav told u many timed dat she didn't broke frndship wid me..im her only best frnd..its just dat she is angry...
suzeil sarcastically - is it dats y she is not in contact wid u for past 2 yrs...
maan lost it not - u need sum time i guess...
blabbering so he hanged d pfone angrily...
while suzeil fumed in anger switching off her cell n throwing it in no directions...
maan also fumed in anger making his way to his room...
...
dis whole conversation got witnessed by dadi...
who didn't interfere in dem n walked off without any reaction...

...

aftr meeting wid sameer...
geet made her way to office...
sasha entered her cabin...
geet - wat is it sasha...
sasha - mam..uttara did call sum time b4..as ur cell was out of reach...
geet - ok...anything else..
sasha - no mam..
n she left...
geet immeiately called uttara...
uttara - kidhar thi yar tu..tera cell bhi not reachable aa raha tha...
geet - arre..was attending wid importnt meeting...igonre kar...
uttara rolled her eyes...
uttara - kaam kaam kaam...aur kuchh bhi aata hai tujhe...
geet - ab bateyegi..
uttara - achha sun..hum aaj raat ki flight se aa rahe hai..hum directly ghar aa jayege..tu air-port pe mat aa..me aur hameer aa jayenge..
geet - ok..as u say..ab bata..kitne ki shopping ki...
hameer heard dat from cell n snatched cell from uttara...
hameer - puchh mat yaar..mujhe bahot jald raste par lane wali hai ya pagal aurat...
geet smiled...while uttara's mouth fell right open...
she waked him hard...
hameer - ouchhh...
uttara - u deserve dat...
hameer - ye achha hai...ek to shopping karwao..aur fir maar khao...
geet - vil u both stop figting...
uttara - achha soon bus yahi batana tha...chal ab rakh...
geet - listen...
uttara - ky huva..jaldi bol..hume packing karni hai..
geet - actually dere is a party inviation tom..would u both like to attend.ya me mana kar du...
hameer again snatched cell - arre jayenge na..tu mana mat kar..hum tino jayenge..
geet smiled - alright..take care n dnt fight...
hameer b uttara - byeee

...
as maan reached his room...
his cell started ringing again...
maan calmed himself n received d call...
it was sameer - dere u r...
maan - wassup buddy...
sameer - wat is dis yaar...tu london se vapas aaya aur mujhe ek call tak nahi kiya..
maan - was litle hanged up yaar..nwz..how r u..
sameer - better dan b4...
maan - i see...any gal who is repsonsible for dis..
sameer laughed...
sameer - not lucky enough like u to hav suzeil...
maan - yaah right...batana..
sameer - nahi yaar...nothing like dt..u know me...im very choosy...
maan - i know i know..so tell me..hav u joined office...
sameer - yupp..2 weeks b4...nwz dats nto impo*nt...tu kal mumbai aa raha hai...avi has held party n u hav to cum...
maan - avi is in mumbai...dats great nwz..but i cnt cum yaar..i hav sum impo*nt things to b sorted soon as possible...
sameer - cum on buddy..ek din me kya ho jayega..parso vapas chale jana..i vil not stop u...
maan - i wish i could cum...i really cnt...
sameer - cum maan..suzeil is also not cuming..avi vil b upset...
maan - heyy plz kuchh bahana bana de na..tu expert hai isme..i vil try..alright..
sameer sighed - okkk..but try heartly..
man - yaah..
saying so both hanged...

...

dadi was sitting in her bedroom wen her cell rang...
dadi - kaise hai bachha..
geet - thi hu dadi..but angry wid u...
dadi - mene kya kiya...
geet - aap bhi aaona mumbai..im missing u...
dadi - bachh..me jarur aati par tujhe pata hai na..
geet - mujhe kuchh nahi pata...aap abhi khadus ho gayi ho..
dadi laughe - chhup...dadi ko khadus bulati hai..shaitan ladki...
geet smiled - dadi..plzzz
dadi - nxt time promise...
geet - dil hai chhotasa...chhoti si aasha...
adi heart stopped hearing dat melodious voice of geet...
she alwz loved to hear geet singing n watch geet dancing...
n geet singing aftr so muuch of days rather say aftr 2 complete yrs...was so heart touching for dadi...
geet started singing again...

dil hai chhotasa...
...chhoti si aasha...
masti bhare man ki...
...bholi si aasha...

dadi was suddenly remembered all dose beautifull moments dey once shared...
even in her worst dream..she never thought life vil take such a wrong turn...
things vil change like dis...
enither she wanted...
her sweet voice once again made dadi remember dat sweet innocent geet running around dadi as she wanted dadi to praise her payal...which was making melodious voice..


chand taron ko...
...chhune ki aasha...
asamano me...
...udane ki aasha...

dat geet who used to sing..used to dance...used to smile dadi...
dat..dat...
dat everything to dadi...
dat maan who had only 1 frnd n best frnd...
he never needed anybody aftr geet...neither he wanted...
dat maan who used to pamper geet..scold her...

dil hai chhotasa...
...chhoti si aasha...

dadi's eyes filled with tears feeling jalous of dose old golden times...
y things changed so badly...
y cnt be d things like b4 dey used to b...
yyy...

mehak jau me...
...aaj to aise...
phool bagiyan me...
...mehake hai jaise...

geet once again got lost in dat beautifull time...wen she used to play wid maan in garden..on tarrace...
she remember how she used to feed maan's hair n he would sleep resting his head in her lap...
aftr she came into his life...he never used a pillow for sleeping..its alwz been geet's lap...
she loved it too...
n wen he would b in deep sleep..she would slowly replace her lap wid a soft pillow...
would cover him wid duvet n leave kissing his forehead...
dats wat she did for past more dan 15 yrs...

badalon ki me...
...odhu chunariyan...
jhoom jau me...
...banake bawariyan...

she remember maan never liked her earing western clothes...
he would luv it making her wear indian...
n wen he would feel sun arsy too hot..he wud carelessly snatch her dupatta n cover himself leaving her alone in hot sun..
n she would angrily complain to adi...while he would mock her...

apni choti me...
...bandhaloo duniya...
dil hai chhotasa...
...chhoti si aasha...

dadi remembered of dat small geet wid 2 choties n lots of oil in it..sitting in front of maan doing her studies...like a good gal...
maan would glare at her angrily if she wud put full choclate in mouth at once n den write...
he would sweetly clear her doubts n give her kiss on cheek at last...
n den aftr completing deir so called class..
both wud ran to dadi asking for choclate milkshake n pasta...
well maggi pasta for geet n italian pasta for maan...lolll
...
...

with dat...
tears rolled out from both geet n dadi's eyes...
tears of happiness..emotions..sadness...
everything is so messed...
dat tears r also getting confused...

dadi - thnqq beta...
geet - dadi..aap thnq bol rahe ho...??
dadi smiled - i love u bachha...
geet - dats like a good dadi...
dadi - badmash...
dadi(seriously) - geet...kya sab kuchh pehale jaise nahi ho sakta...
geet went silent with dat...

...

SPOILERS : MANEET...amana-samana...


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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update..aisa kya hua tha past mein
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank god maaneet ka aamna samna varna title se to laga tha end mai hi milvaogi
love u for this
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it a lot yaar😃

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