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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

😆😆.. good to see u back .. I thought tu merese gussa hai .. 😭

mein kayko gussa hongi pagal hain thand lagi hain kya jada tujhe mein haar din aati hoon aab toh geetasari uthi pani se ut hi😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

what a come back update

brilliantly written by u dear

d way u compare draupadi vastraharan and geet's situation dere was amazing

thank u .. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
tu kya aaj update degi bol pehele
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

fab update ! waited for it for long ! loved the way you explained, krishna's help as recognising ones own strength and courage . awesome ! love this story sooo much . pl. continue and pl a little bit early... waiting already...

thanks dat u gave ur mind into my story in such way .. really inspiring

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

tu kya aaj update degi bol pehele


haa aj e debo .. thats y replying .. ami reply korte vule gechilam ebare

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta


haa aj e debo .. thats y replying .. ami reply korte vule gechilam ebare

reply dite bhule giyecchili kano remon ki aannya jaygay😛 😉
ta o katokhon bal aami res karbo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

at th beginning, the first portion of this update...i was feeling bad for devdutt actually...we cant really give blame on him...indeed a mohant is also a human...he has desires like normal human...n geet is an epitome of beauty...not only in physically bt also mentally...a educated matured intelligent person like devdutt can naturally fall for her when she is one n only among those devdasis of th mandir...bt then when he heard that geet was telling she was married nw to maan, he proceeded to claim her...then he bcame real monster...in sub-continent, marriage is actually a big thing for ny girl in ny religion...n whn u r in lv n he is ur husband too then he is all ur life...may b she is devdashi or princess...whatever the th ritual is gandharv or something like muslim aur christian rituals...marriage is marriage...n its vows r same in every religeon n every rituals...hw devdutt fogot those...maan was absent in this update bt nt literally...he was everywhere...his love ... his creations... his wisdom... generosity... his thinking process ... everywhere in this update...when God creates human...he then makes his/her destiny also...we say that GOD is everywhere...then we face problems...or may b face accidents or deaths then where is GOD...y he doent save us...coz when God creates people he also gives them judgement ability...n sent them in th earth to make their own luck wth their own judgment brain maturity intelligence...he/she bcome winner who uses these properly n save himself/herself from every evilness...Look geet found her way of escaping...when maan would make their own sculptures which would burn more devdutt...

beautiful comment .. I really loved reading it .. u said so r8 .. thanks for understanding Devdutt .. I loved dat u initially sympathized with him .. I also wanted to prove that point .. somewhere he is a victim of tragedy but he went wrong when he tried to go against his own rules n moralities to get Geetasri .. I believe in face of true love one doesn't give up but his approach was wrong n monstrous .. n yes we blame God for everything wrong in our life coz we always think he is there to do everything right but truth is he is there inside us .. we need to believe

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

I read it with itching eyes...but I forgot everything while reading it

As usual nice writung...and I am proud that u r my best friend!

Specially those lines brought tears in my eyes...

"Krishna was inside paanchali."

Still it wasn't clear to Geet. And now when Duhsashan's hands are about to reach her honor she realized Maan's words. Krishna was in Paanchali's mind, in her strength, in her mighty spirit. Increasing the length of her sari wasn't the matter, Duhshashan defeated in front of Draupadi's fortitude and Shri Krishna was the source of her strength. Shri Krishna is source of all force. One only needs to feel Him inside her and all evil will fall weak in front.

And the last line was so very touchy-only humming of waves echoed everywhere like the flute of Krishna.

Won't say much about Devdutt...I thought he was yudhithir...but he is not only that but also dushashan...




thanks P .. n I knew it if u like ds update .. ds lines wl be ur fav .. n d reason is Krishna .. my love😳😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

still waiting dear

come back and update
missing this ff like hell
dont forget to pm me dear

sorryyy .. okk update is coming in 15mnts

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

u made me cry girl.. u know i was discussing abt devdasi system with my sis. it was disgusting.. i cudnot think this type of life for anyone.
i hardly sleep the night when i read ur story.. so i always try to read 2-3 parts togather.. u r brilliant. i know everyone want appriciation. par please yaar don't leave this story in half way. finish it... it is one of story which tells the truth faced by women. i'm not a gud writer so dn't have words for ur praise but i really applaud ur hardwork for this story...

thank u for writing this beautiful piece...
and yes sorry.. i've just come back after 4 mnths on if.. so cudn't read and comment earlier..

wont leave ds story .. yes I am late always .. I know .. but I love to write n I love Maaneet .. n more over I love all d readers .. so I will never quit from writing ds story .. n sorry for making u cry .. n thanks for comment

Edited by sayaneegupta - 12 years ago

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