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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sarkh26

wow awesome update

thanks for the lovely update sayanee

desire is the root cause of sorrow
i think buddha's phrases are coming true in devdutts case

why the hell is he playing with raj lakshmi's feelings.
cant he say that a ypoung priest is indeed alive.
he is again making her his scapoe goat

hope maan returns soon.

and hope rajlakshmi finds out what dev is upto.

and please dont make dev do anything to geet.
and i think in the next update dev will come to know about maaneet marriage.

geet felt dizzy !! she puked !!
is she pregnant.
then pls let not anything happen to that child too.

pls cont soon


yes u said it r8 .. Desire is d root cause of sorrow.. I never understood Lord Buddha's ds words but now while writing ds story I have realized it n ur comment made it clear to me .. thanks for ds beautiful comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




whenever I read update of ur this FF...my breath always constricted in my throat...what will happen now...what will happen now...

Dev has shedded all his nobility and he is pure evil now...

he took advantage of Rajlakshmi's worry for Shantanu so that Maan will go in search for him and in absence of Maan he will abduct Geet...

and he abducted her...

what will happen now...I hope he will have to face Sultan army and die and Geet will be saved by Sultan...

There are many temples in India which are looted by Muslim invaders...
and I condemn it to the core...but situation in this FF where Priest of the temple were themselves killing the sanctity of the temple...I feel very good that those priests are killed and punished by Sultan...if we say all people be from any religion are one then those priests are punished by God himself with help of Sultan...

wonderful update...

thanx for pm...



Yes many Muslim invaders has destroyed a many Hindu temples but there r many Muslim kings who has done a lot for our country too .. we sud learn a lesson of secularism from them .. we all know about d gr8 AAKBAR .. I just bow to him for his works still he had some dark side too which was seen in the time of Chitor n Kashmir invasion .. Hussein Shah is also like that .. HE was d man under whom Chaitanya Dev was secure in Bengal .. but he was killed (though de tricked it saying he has emerged in Deity of Jagannath Dev in Puri temple) in a Hindu state
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no ab yeah kya hua 😭😭

this dev is really 😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
Plz dun let cruel devdatt get away with his sinful doings with Geet
It would b too much

Maneet moments were blissful ⭐️
thanks 4 pm .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali


I really admire your writing my best friend..especially these paras...I don't know from where did you bring so much passion!!! I am just speechless...


Maan removed her dress and replaced it with a royal blue lehenga and choli. Gradually Geet's exposed skin was covered by ornaments. Maan adorned her the way a painter put color on his painting and the mirror reflects both the painter and his painting in its canvas. He knotted the choli so firm; like his coarse hands crush her breasts mercilessly the fabric grasped her delicate possessions making her moan. The next moment a long thin chain started dangling from her neck, hovering over her bosom like Maan's lips travel over them. Maan put the waist chain on its place, it touched her waist like Maan block her way from behind. Geet felt Maan kissed her everywhere though his lips didn't touched her.

Maan again looked at Geet. Her scarlet shy face, lowered eye lids made him confused. He smiled he really doesn't understand when and why this girl becomes coy. May be it is her nature. He put his index finger under Geet's chin to look at her hazel sea. Geet looked at him but her coyness didn't leave her. She knew she has given every bit of her to Maan but his claim over her was always playful, there was a veil of his teasing mischievous way. Today's straight forward statement suddenly made her realize that she is sitting in front of the man, in front of whom her all secret has been revealed and it's the time she must abandon all her inhibitision forever. At that moment she wasn't feeling shy but only trying to gather courage to face Maan leaving all her bashfulness behind. But again her determination failed under Maan's intense gaze.

Maan put the dupatta on geet's head."You are reminding the moment of the night I made you mine for the first time, the night of our wedding. You are just looking like the new bride. Only one thing .." he didn't complete his words. His fingers went through her parting of hair and the eternal sign of suhag made her face glow. She closed her eyes not knowing how to react. This scarlet sign on her forehead is the sunshine of her whole life. It is said red is the color of love to her this red is the color of whole universe. Maan kissed her forehead. Again a while passed without words filling each other's aroma in their heart, sensing only each other's presence against all worldly existence. But the moment broke. Geet hurried to wear her mangtika to hide her sindoor. Maan put the mangtika on her head, "Geet you don't have to hide your sindoor for long, on this Raspurnima your vermilion will be acle to declare its existence under the open sky. I promise." Maan uttered every word from the heart of his heart. A tear drop fell from Geet's eyes with the dream of their beautiful future. She embraced Maan tightly, trying to hear the footstep of beautiful future in the heartbeat of her beloved.


thanks .. u know it means a lot when I get this comment from my best friend .. thanks a looot dear .. u r really d best best friend
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta


lol its fine.. thanks for commenting on Devdutt . yes u said it r8 he has some similarities with Yudhisthir .. noble, knowledgeable bt lustful n cowered ..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Wow,u write so beautifully, like the twist,knt wait to c whats next


thank u for ur comment .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

chi devdutt...fr his own selfishness to get geet...he lowed down sooo much...chi chi chi...plz nothing should happen to maan...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soo plz...

eagerly waiting...


Thanks for d comment dear .. Yes Devdutt deserves ds hatred .. dats y emotion sud not control us bt we sud control our emotion
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Posted: 12 years ago
again a superb update wth historical myth mixed...i also didnt get y sultan shah destroyed those temples...his ultimate goal was another...nywy precap is really scary bt i hope when dev will try to close wth her physically he will see th sindoor on her head n he will stop himself...bt what will happen when maan will know that...shantanu is alive thank god...waiting for seeing geets reaction when she will see devs true color...bt i m nt angry wth dev or hate him coz its really natural n those time he was actually a priest who was bounded by so many things bt as well as a human being also...n he is nt god who will just forget his lv n desire...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paponecon

again a superb update wth historical myth mixed...i also didnt get y sultan shah destroyed those temples...his ultimate goal was another...nywy precap is really scary bt i hope when dev will try to close wth her physically he will see th sindoor on her head n he will stop himself...bt what will happen when maan will know that...shantanu is alive thank god...waiting for seeing geets reaction when she will see devs true color...bt i m nt angry wth dev or hate him coz its really natural n those time he was actually a priest who was bounded by so many things bt as well as a human being also...n he is nt god who will just forget his lv n desire...


yes Hussein Shah is complicated n confusing indeed .. but I think ds was same with Gr8 AAKBAR .. but its History I cant change it .. n thanks a lot that u thought from Devdutt's pov too.. he is a human n not a God .. he is driven by his emotions .. good or bad .. it's love ..

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