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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

Lovely update

Plz dun let cruel devdatt get away with his sinful doings with Geet
It would b too much

Maneet moments were blissful ⭐️
thanks 4 pm .


trust me .. I won't hurt my readers .. thanks for d comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

i m scared for geet...

love sometimes turn 2 poison...
cont
thanx 4 pm


so true .. love can be poisonous too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ManeetTUJANENA

this is a bit scarinnng bt grt update thnx fr the pmsss...


thanks for d comment🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meenaveed

awesome update but wid scary ending


anyways lovd it
do cont soon


thanks for d comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

it's simply amazing...

I think geet is pregnant n as hinted n talked there will b separation of maaneet n will meet after long time when actually their child grows little...


nice guess.. hmm lets see what happens .. thanks for ur lovely comments😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sushmacholke

Gr8 way to patch up ha you started with maaneet kiss and bingo i melted ;)))
Oh this cruel devdutt abducted our Maans Geet!!!! no... what is he planning to do oh saviour Maan come soon plz update soon dear...


hihi hai na gr8 way to patch up😆 .. sorryyy .. dont be angry .. I accept my mistake .. n thanks for d lovely comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 17
OMG this is really scary...
and Dev has tainted the eternal love by his evilness...
so Shantanu is safe but Raj is so worried and Maan has gone to search about Shantanu leaving Geet behind...
where is that devil taking Geet?
is Geet pregnant with Maan's baby?
cont soon dear...


so many quarries .. wait a lil more u will get answers in next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey waiting for ur updt!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanking note For All My Friends cum Readers


Hi friends .. thanksss n Hugsss for loving ds FF .. when I started writing this FF I was scared will pll like it or not but the comments I have got are sooo amazing that never in my dreams I thought my work can be appreciated .. yes some time I feel a little down when I see less likes or comments.. but the next moment I thought hota hai .. d way my readers n friends has appreciated my work I feel fortunate .. y should I compare with others .. after all we belongs to a BIG MAANEET FAMILY 😊

Today I am here to say u thanks n to share something that my dearest friends cum readers has made for this FF .. ~MRITYUNJAI SOME LOVE STORIES NEVER DIE~ .. I am so soo happy and obliged .. I wanted to share with you all

HERE is a Verse my best Friend Payal (Paanchali) wrote for this FF

Mritunjayi

Oh great society!

Love God Worshippers!

You discard, you disgrace

When He lives in lover's heart!

He is an image of clay

Without our admiration-

You made Him that every time

He touches those lovers' mind

Can you limit the water of an ocean?

Or space of the sky?

Then why enclose love-

In your narrow mind!

Look at the great mountain,

Touching the feet of heaven'.

But when two pure souls-

Of this objective earth

Bear true love-

Then the dead hard mountain also bows-

So does the ether!

Oh holy priests, you say-

Love in living heart is unholy!

But you bathe Him-

With Ganga water -

Though aware of its impurity!

Because, Ganga in the God's head-

Holy with all impurity.

And He inhales through living loves

It makes him mritunjayi''


I loved it .. Payel won't say u thanks .. U r just amazing .. hope all of u liked it

n my another darling friend Rakhi (prithvisanio) has edited these snaps only for MRITYUNJAI ..



Rakhi a Big Big Hug for u ..

there are many more pics n will use them with my updates later .. abhi sab sathme thodi dikhaungi 😆

This story is really special to me and your appreciation has made it more special .. One day the whole story just came into my vision just like a flash while listening the song


"Hum hain Iss Pal Yaha .. Jaane Ho Kal Kaha"

that too in a bus .. I still remember the moment .. who knew I will gather courage to pen it down .. well here credit goes to my sis Mimi/Sreya (Princess_mimi) .. n my best friend Payel .. if they didn't encouraged me I would have never start writing ..

Ooops I forget to tell one thing important in my boring speech .. okk I am going to a trip to Rajasthan .. well my dream place .. kingdom of History n Art .. for 15days .. I will try to give another update within 18th Sep morning but as I am very busy in packing (n confused too) .. if I missed then next update will be after 1st October okk .. n before u throw juta chappal on me .. let me give u a precap .. emm U can call it a clue of the ultimate climax of the story .. so here r the lines which defines the climax of the story


karun sajda ik khuda ko
parhun kalma ya m dua dun
dono hain ek khuda aur mohabbat

hihi again confused?? okk keep thinking .. but those who are anxious to know n always ask me not to give a sad ending .. I assure you you won't be sad at ending 😊 .. n that's a promise

ohh another thing .. people who has asked for pics of Shantanu, Vrinda n devdutt ..

Shantanu n Swayam are identical twins so they look alike .. still giving d pic again



they both are lean and has a beautiful eyes n nice smile .. I think he looks exactly like what I have imagined

Vrinda is a young pretty looking girl with innocent eyes .. so here she goes


she has a pretty, Indian face .. innocent type .. so here is my Vrinda .. what do u feel about her?? perfect naa??

Devdutt : he is handsome with a great voice .. He can look like 1st Dev of GHSP .. just a little ethnic touch .. don't have any apt pic for Devdutt n can't even edit it

So glz Think you are already bored with my bla bllass .. so me signing off here .. wish me a happy journey ..

PS: n yes wanted to tell u .. many have asked me if I have graduated with History or Art .. Nooo dearies I graduated with a simple honers in English Literature that too with a bad marks lol ..

love u all .. muuaaahhh
Sayanee

Edited by sayaneegupta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for using my pic
I'm glad that u loved the pic
Awesome, beautiful poem payal
loved it
it's full described this FF "MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die "
lovely
will wait for update
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago

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