MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago
i love your way of writing
the story is so far is mind blowing
will be waiting for the update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kamiya

i love your way of writing

the story is so far is mind blowing
will be waiting for the update


thank u dear.. sorry for keeping u wait.. will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bkjas


Hi dear... I love ur ffs, it is jst dat smtyms v dont get tym to comment, bt don't worry frm nw on l'll try to comment on all updates...


will be waiting for ur comment .. plzz do it.. it gives lots of motivation
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjh89

ARREY YAAR,
all my fav writers get upset whn they dnt gt lkes n cmmnts ...its obvious also...bt b4 reachng ny decision i vl lke u to go thru follwng points, y u all r nt read mch:
in ur writng
1. MAAN s nt insanely arrogant. he considers others existence
2. GEET s nt innocnt to the xtnt of dumbass
3. MAANEET in thr frst meetng do nt fght lke teenagrs they dnt feel electrc shock on smple touch
4. they dnt jump one othr Kissng n continu dong so in evry scnd para tl epilogue
5. they dnt mke luv in a way tht if a 5th grade read it he/she vl also knw hw to do it
6. Concentration s mre on feelngs thn heavy dialogues
7. characters r added fr a purpos nt fr a feplica of daily soaps vamps or mothers
8. u dnt evn leave detail of flyng bird out of scene
9.d mst imp. factor MAANEET frst knw ech othr thn fall fr one anothr
SO, u c , u may nt hv quantity bt u sure hv quality readers...
thus, dear continue writng fr us.they r a ventilator fr us in absence of dear MAANEET...
dnt hv double thoughts...

love

SANJH



yep u r soo right dear.. she is a diiferent writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oi sayanee update kar re wait karchi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyopm

oi sayanee update kar re wait karchi


debo kodin por .. ek2 wait kor
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta


debo kodin por .. ek2 wait kor


wait karbo 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

sayanee checked page 93
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1744285&PID=61371797&#61371797


Rakhi checked it.. its so amazing .. I am reading it again n again.. aww its so sweet ..😊.. I am sooo happy getting such a lovely long comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta


Rakhi checked it.. its so amazing .. I am reading it again n again.. aww its so sweet ..😊.. I am sooo happy getting such a lovely long comment


thanks and my pleasure
I'm really reading the update again and again
it's taught me many things
I'm happy that u loved the comments😳

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