MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 63

I personally luv dis story x will b w8in 4 da update

ARREY YAAR,
all my fav writers get upset whn they dnt gt lkes n cmmnts ...its obvious also...bt b4 reachng ny decision i vl lke u to go thru follwng points, y u all r nt read mch:
in ur writng
1. MAAN s nt insanely arrogant. he considers others existence
2. GEET s nt innocnt to the xtnt of dumbass
3. MAANEET in thr frst meetng do nt fght lke teenagrs they dnt feel electrc shock on smple touch
4. they dnt jump one othr Kissng n continu dong so in evry scnd para tl epilogue
5. they dnt mke luv in a way tht if a 5th grade read it he/she vl also knw hw to do it
6. Concentration s mre on feelngs thn heavy dialogues
7. characters r added fr a purpos nt fr a feplica of daily soaps vamps or mothers
8. u dnt evn leave detail of flyng bird out of scene
9.d mst imp. factor MAANEET frst knw ech othr thn fall fr one anothr
SO, u c , u may nt hv quantity bt u sure hv quality readers...
thus, dear continue writng fr us.they r a ventilator fr us in absence of dear MAANEET...
dnt hv double thoughts...

love

SANJH

Hi dear... I love ur ffs, it is jst dat smtyms v dont get tym to comment, bt don't worry frm nw on l'll try to comment on all updates...

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

I love ur writings Sayanee...

love ur both stories...both have different flavor...

please update...

I am always there to read ur stories and I never fail to comment and hit like...

please update for readers like me...

I always give you large comments and will continue it

Loving ur work dr,

awww...

Originally posted by: meenaveed

awesome update

here cmes the twist :(

and thnx for the pm

waiting for nxt update

do cont soon

love

meena

Originally posted by: -mimi-

awww...

awsmm...

d story is goin towards its destiny..

n i love dis naughty Maan... 😉

di i will kill dat Devdutt..