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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes dear!u should continue for sure
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nice updates...continue sooon plzzz
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PART 7

As the car passed on through the roads of HP, he saw the boards on the lands continuosly..THIS PROPERTY BELONGS TO KHURANA'S..He thought really Daadi must have worked hard. His first car stopped before their farm house n his car was about to cross Geet's farm.His driver put a sudden break n he jerked in his seat.He asked the driver what happened..

EK ladki gadi k beech aagayi..

In a minute the villagers surrounded the car..n began to shout.. badi gadi lekar aayi tho aakhein nehi hai kya..Driver gulped his saliva.he was frightened seeing the crowd before the car..n also Maan..unknowing how will he react now..

Maan shouted go n see if the girl is alive r dead..

The driver whispered She would might have only small scratches.. as I saw her I put on the break..It was her fault she was seeing backwards n saying bye to someone..she didn't see in front n she dashed her cycle into ours ..He gulped his saliva once more..

Why r u explaining it to me'Go n Explain them..

It was Geet who fell before Maan's car.she rubbed her arms n tried to clean the mud from her hands..as the villagers surrounded her n asked

Gudia tu teek ho na..

Tumhe chot to nehi lagi..

Tumhari haath dikaa

Tumhaari pau dikaa

Tumhe kahi mauch tho nehi aayina

Everyone were asking questions..n they never let her to answer..

Some one said,,Koi pani lekar aao

Maan was fuming in anger.. He thought..she must b acting..

ye ladkiyaan yesehin hothe hain...They needed always 2 b noticed'sab ko apne chaalmein phasaneki koina koi bahana doondthe hain..they make blunders n blame others.they never admit their mistakes..

Maan's anger got high as,.the villagers have now blocked their way..Though , Maans securities were now around the car..,the driver was still scared to get out of the car..

Maan seeing driver not getting outside to face the situation,.he shouted U coward..I'll deal myself..

He got out of the car..At once the securities surrounded him..Even though they knew they can't do anything before this huge crowd ..Its their duty to protect Maan. Slowly,the driver to joined him..

Maan viewed inside the crowd'He stood speechless,when, He saw the girl in white dress ..she seemed to b e still in fear of the sudden fall...He could only see her back..She had a long hair till her knees That was tied with a ribbon.. her earings were swinging as she nodded her head.her glass bangles sounded sweetly when her hands waved..she was answering to the crowd..


Muje kuch nehi hua papa..

Mei bil kul teek hoon..veerji

Dekiye dadaji meri hath teek hai..

Kaka meri pau b teek hai..

Chachu..muje kahin b chot nehi lagi..


One of them said, he hitted u gudia.. hum usey chodeigi nehi..tumhe chot pouchneki saza tho hum use dekar rahengi.all of them were really angry at maan's driver..

Maan could now see her almond eyes ..His heart skipped a bit'when she said sweetly'

Unki koi galthi nehi'.. mei papako.. bye kehrahithi' I didn't see in front..She was getting scared at their behaviour..

U don't want them 2 get hurt . U r trying to help them gudia.so u r telling liesna..

Mein kyun jut bolungi.. U all know me..I never say lies.. then y r u saying so'

They got convinced by her ans,,they gave her water to drink, n told papaji to take her inside the farm n make her rest for some time'

Maan was still in a state of statue that he was imagining her eyes n lips till now..

He wants to see her face once..but it was too late that she was gone into her farm before he came to his reality..The driver took a long breath as he thought this will b the last day in his life'god saved my life.. no no that girl saved my life..now he whispered softly' sir ' shall we go..

Maan got back to his senses.

Mmhh..

He saw the villagers starring at him n his cars..The villagers were little taken back to see an young man (man r boy..they r confused)standing infront of them with securities having guns..protecting him .They were thinking whats this man upto..Is he From army ..

When he was just to enter into the car,he saw munshiji'

Namaste..he was searching for the word to address him ..

Namaste'aap muje bachpan se jaanthe hain ..aap muje.. maan bulasakthe hain..

The villagers asked munshiji..who is he..

Maan introduced himself in a proud voice

Maan..maan singh khurana..

Savithriji ka potha..munshiji said..

Now they looked at him respectfully n said.. namaste babu..humse galthi hogayi. gudia said its not a mistake of urs.. we feel sry for wat we did'

Its o.k.

chalo sablog .. apna apna kam karo..they dispersed..Maan entered the farm house which was next to geet's farm..Munshiji said,

aap aaram kariye..mei kuch der baad aatha hoon..he went..

Nakul went to kitchen to prepare food for Maan .The servants came to knew by munshiji that maan is coming ..so that the have cleaned the room in the first floor of the farm..

Maan went to his room,which was used by his papa's..Maan tried really hard to get rid of those moments'where he used to play n chat with his family..he avoided coming to HP only bcoz he doesn't want to remember the past ..he got fresh ..n had his lunch that nakul made.

He came back to his room..he tried to sleep..when he closed his eyes he could only remember the eyes n the sweet voice of geet...

Who is that girl..she seems to b young ..but all r calling her gudia..she called everyone in relationship..may b all of them r her relatives.All of them cared for her. when she got hit all of there eyes r spitting fire as they would kill each of my men n myself too..but when she said its her mistake'they left us..they didn't que us r hurt us. Itna vishwas tha uski words pein.Is it the love towards her r respect towards her'I love the way she accepted her fault..Just i wish i could see her face once..her eyes r very beautiful'cute..innocent'.Maan was hit by his reality'What r u thinking about.. u r thinking about a girl..u r not like that..wats happening to u ..u r getting disturbed by a girl..

He just shook his head n said.. no.. no.. no..Maan singh khurana will never think abut a girl..He doesn't believe girls'Its just a curiosity..to know whether she did not get hurt..He tried to console himself..

He tried to concentrate on other things..He called dadi n said that he has reached HP n call her later..


He took his laptop n tried to work 'not to think about geet..


Precap:Maan meeting geet

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Valli

Edited by alamuabi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome ff pl add ne on your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HAY TAT WAS N COOL UPDATE
GEET SEEMS TO BE SOO SWEET..😳..
I THINK MAANS GONNA FALL FOR HER SO SOON..😆.
PRECAP SEEMS TO BE MORE INTERESTING DEAR.😳.
FISRT CONGOS FOR SUCH A GUD WRITING😉
I LOVED READING EVERY PART OF UR UPDATE U R DOING👏
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AND ABOUT THE CUMNT ..ME AT UR SERVICE MAAM,
AND ALWAYS WILL THER ...😉
DO CONTI SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK YOU TABU❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice FF...just came across this. Please add me to your Pm list and please update soon...cannot wait to see what happens when Maan- Geet meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alamuabi





THANK YOU TABU❤️

my pleasure valli...
love ya!!!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8

Maan sat in the balcony,viewing the beauty o f the farm.. soon,he kept himself busy working in his lappy,untill he heared the sound of anklets.He kept his lappy on the table,looked towards the direction from where it came.But ,he couldn't see anyone.He rushed towards the ground floor. N soon he was standing out of his house..There he saw his securities chatting.He yelled at them.u all r in duty. I don't pay u for chatting..don't u hear any sound ..Go and see what it is'

They pointed towards a tree.He could only see a pair of hands of a girl who was jumping to pluck mangoes from the tree.The sight of a girl inside his farm made himself more furious,as he hated girls..He walked towards the girl angrily.. All of a sudden,he grabbed her hand and twisted to her back.She is now facing her back to him.She was crying in pain.

Chodiye muje.. muje dard horaha hai..

He roared..How dare u coming into my farm. Don't u have any manners bfore getting into someones place..If u need mangoes u must have asked permission from any one here. Chori karthey hui tumhe sharam nehi aayi..

Mein chor nehi hoon..aur muje chori karneki zaroorath b nehi hain.. , mei kisise permission lekar unki ghar nehi jaathi..aur leneki zaroorat b nehihai..sab mer apne hain.mere haath chodiye.Its paining..she said in a pleading voice, making a baby face. Maan recognized the voice.The same sweet voice of the girl who dashed in his car..Maan now turned her,facing him.Its Geet..Now he could see her face clearly...her hands were very soft,which are trying to let her free from his hands..Maan could not t.She was so cute .she was very beautiful.Her almond eyes having tears which may fall any time bcoz of his hard touch.Her lips were trembling in fear..Her nose n cheeks have turned red.He coud not take his eyes from her..Still he was starring at her..

Munshiji n the workers of his farm came running to him'Maan could see their eyes red,splitting fire on him..But they didn't speak anything infront of him.They were controlling their anger, bcos maan is Savithriji's grand son..

Please bachiko chodtheejiye..munshiji requested maan.Maan came to his senses.He left her hand free.

Aap ise bachi kerahi hai..She is stealing mangoes in our farm..aur uparse nakre dikarahi hai.. she is also saying she doesn't need permission to get into anyone's house..don't her parents teach her manners how to behave.. n u people also support her..

Geet was now really frightened at his behaviour as no one has behaved to her like this.. Geet hugged munshiji n started to cry.

mathro gudiya..mein hoona..he patted her back lightly.


Munshiji don't know how to explain this situation.. He turned to the workers and said..

Aap log jaye ..mein bath kartha hoon..They got back to their work half hearted.

Maan. YOU are thinking wrong about geet

maan thought ,So her name is geet..so sweet.

Geet hugged munshiji n started to cry.She looked at her bruised hands'

mein chor nehi hoon..tell him'she cried n tried to leave that place..aam tho leke jao..

Muje nehi chahiye'aap us dusht danavko hi kilayiye'she ran away from that place..Some where Maan too felt bad in his heart for making her cry..

..She is good in nature'Mann se ye ab bi bachi hai.. u must have mis understood her.Next to our farm is hers.. whenever she comes to her farm,She always come here ..She will take mangoes with her.. and only two..One for her and one for her brother'agar permission ki baath hai.. as she said she doesn't want to get permission before entering the farm or anyones house..if she wishes anything,our people will fulfill her wish before she complete'...If she goes outside n says to anyone that she need a mango..they would have brought a loads of mangoes for her.. We all only need geet's happiness

Geetki khilaaf ek b shabd, is gao ki koi b insaan bardsh nehi karega '.they all love her so much. You r the first one that they have not harmed you'may b bcoz of the respect on ur dadima

Maan sat on a chair before the house..

Interesting'Aap b betiye..

He was really amazed with what munshiji said..Aaplog sab bachon se yesehi pyaar karthen hein kya..

No..But only geet is special..

Yese kya hai ismein aap ise special kehrahi ho..

Maan wants to know more about geet ..Nakul came there and gave his black coffee..n tea to others..Even the securities and nakul also wanted to know more about Geet'As they have not seen such an affection that only one girl is getting'Maan asked munshiji.. I asked u munshiji..why is she so special for the villagers..

Aap such mein jaanna chaathe hain..

Haan..

Precap: Reason behind their affection

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Edited by alamuabi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yay me first, first time i have commented first woho, OK, Maan half fallt in love with Geet, can't wait for next part



Edited by Kriyanshlover - 13 years ago

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