maneet ff-U , ME aur .?PT 50/notePG:107/112dec 9.. - Page 2

How about.. U, ME aur HUM???

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

How about.. U, ME aur HUM???

and u can have a college setup for Maneet?? n DDLJ type trip which make them fall in love??

FIRST I THOUGHT OF THE TITLE AS' U,ME AUR HUM.."HUM WILL REFER 2 MANEET...THEN FOR SOME OTHER REASONS I KEPT THE... ?AS OPTION...BCOZ I HAVE SOME OTHER CHARECTOR THAN HUM...THANKS DEAR 4 UR POST...

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

HAY WELCUM PAL

AND START WRITNG IT SOON...

THANK U DEAR

tats a cool start pal do continue dear..

im waiting 4 ur update

This is my first FF. So please if there is any mistakes..let me know'first few parts will b slow so that u may get theinteresting track later

PART 1

One fine morning at DELHI'.It was KHURANA PALACE'

MAAN's bedroom.:It was 5.a.m.Maan woke up from his white king size large bed'he was wearing his black pant with his black vest 'He saw the wordings on his opposite wall,which was a wall hanging with the wordings HARD WORK WORKS..he then went to washroom 'he brushed 'n washed his face..He took the towel,whipping his face..he said 'Have a good day MSK' to his image reflecting on the mirror..He came out of the wash room'he went to his gym 'He removed his vest..n started doing his Martial arts n later some excercises..

Until Maan finish his exercise lets go out for a walk around KHURANS PALACE'khurana palace consisted of a huge lawn with a portigo where v can c his usual 3 black cars'one for him,n the other 2 for his securities reasons...the entrance gate of his palace had a huge wooden teak door with fine carved bordered by white.. The dining table consisted of 16 chairs'n looking @ them any one can say no one uses it'turning left was the kitchen .with all fascilities attached with a small dining consisted of 3 chairs'seems only that is used'walking out v can c a guest room which was locked by out side'n adjacent to that room was an another room'entering it v can say it belongs to daadis..but rarely used by her..the corner stairs lead to the first floor which leads

to Maans suit'which was fully painted in white..There were many rooms inside his room..including his gym, study room, library, dressing room n an another room which he used it as his private space..His study room was filled with his cups n medals he bought from his college n won in competitions..IN each n every direction v can c the luxury life of him..but one thing must b said'MAAN is the only person who lives in this palace..

Ok back 2 maan..Its 6 am

He came out of his gym showing his 6 packs fully sweated ..he directly went to the wash room ,had his shower ..went to his dressing room weared his official dress as he always use 2 wear..He heared a knock on the door'He knows who it was to be..He kept his finger prints on an electronic machine,that made the door opened automatically'no one can enter his room without his finger print '

'Goodmorning chotu' said Kala akka(akka means didi in tamil)..the only maid 2 clean his room..n the only women maan talks 2 ..He wished her back'goodmorning akka' n took the newspaper n the black coffee 4m her..He started sipping it'reading the news paper..kala finished cleaning his all rooms except the private space room, took the cup 4m the table..n went back 2 kitchen'.

It was 7am'

Nakul came 2 his room.He took his college books,laptop n official files n gave it 2 nakul saying Keep it in the car..he came out of his room ,placed his finger print which made the door close automatically'he came down the stairs n the phone started ringing'he took it n replied'GOODMORNING DAADIMA'

Daadi.:Aaj tumhari dance class hain na

Maan: no daadima.I told him not 2 come 2day..as v have the presentation of chopras

Daadima:so u.r getting ready 4 the office .

Maan:Yes daadi..Mein ready hoon. abi nikalrahi hoon

Daadi:ok beta just have a final look over all.. I'll b there about 9 am.

Maan:ji daadima..

Daadi:Beta. aapne khana kaya.?

;Maan: Its only 7 daadi .I'll have it later in the office..

Daadi:I'll get u the breakfast 2 office..

Maan:Teek hai daadima..

Maan left 2 his office'

Khurana Mansion

Daadima was getting ready 2 office.She was lost in the thoughts of Maan..(some flash back running in her mind).she tried her level best 2 get back Maan 2 the Mansion.But she failed..and now she also stopped requesting him as she knows he will never get in..

Kalaaka knocked the door.n said '.daadi khana thayar hai'

Daadi got back out 4m her thoughts .n said 'I'm coming..Pack some break fast for maan n give it 2 me.'

After having her breakfast Daadi also left 2 KC

great start!
cont soon!
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PART 2

KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS

Its 9 am

Daadi in maans cabin.

Daadi: maan.tumhare breakfast laya hoon..khaalena..

Maan:ji daadima

Daadi seeing his college books..on the table

Daadi:Tumhare college kab shuru horaha hein?

Maan:20days more.daadi

Daadi:O.k. whats about the project? Sab kuch teek haina..

Maan:just I made 2 corrections n now it is perfectly alright 4 the presentation..v will get this project..Im sure about it..

Daadi: Good .u have ur breakfast n come 2 the conference hall.i'll b waiting 4 u there.

Maan;Ji daadi

At that TIME Daadi's phone rang..it was munshiji 4m Hoshiarpur'

Daadi :namaste munshiji

Munshiji:namasthe madam.Ive a good news for u.

Daadi: ji kahiye

Munshi:I think V can get the next land of our farm house @ present

Daadi:lekin pehle unhone mana kiya thaana.

Munshi: yes mam.but now they have some debt 2 b cleared. V can give the money than they expect ..so,I think It's the time 2 approach them.

Daadi:If they accept 2 give the land ,It will b the most happiest day 4 me..

Munshiji: When r u coming here mam..v can make a fast move.bfore some others approach them..

Daadi:I've some important meetings..so,I'll send Maan there..n I'll join there the next day..

Munshiji: teekhain mam..jaise aap teek samjein..

He kept the phone'

Daadi walked towards the conference hall .Maan followed her.Already Adi n his 2 other staffs were waiting for them'Mr. chopra and his assistants joined them after a while.They introduced themselves'Maan gave the presentation .. .Though Mr. chopra was impressed., he disguised some points with his assistants. Atlast they came 2 a conclusion.He stood n shook hand of Maan .

Mr.chopra:Well presented young man.

Maan :thank u Mr. chopra.

Mr. chopra:So the deal is finalled..Mr. Khurana. There r no negatives 2 say about the presentation..

Daadi signed the deal

Mr. chopra: Savitriji'Aap ka potha bohut clever hai..One day he will lead KC 2 No:1 position.

Daadi:thank u .Mr. Chopra. I know he will make it..Really im proud of him..

Mr. Chopra: then v'll take a leave now .Its nice meeting both of u'

After Mr. chopra left Daadi appreciated Maan for his work'.

Maan ordered the chief interiors 2 have a meeting with him n Daadi as they could proceed with the deal..Phirse daadima ka ek call aaya..she took it. It was from their construction site.n the head incharge was speaking..

H-IN: good morning mam..here is a problem here'

Daadi.:what?what r u saying .

H-IN:here is an union problem. Our manager slapped a worker'bcoz of that the other workers refused 2 work..I tried 2 sort it myself but it is out of hand now

They r going on with a strike..

Maan seeing Daadis xpressions found something wrong n he thinks, he will wait till she completes the phone..

Daadi was full tensed ..she starts 2 speak in her full tone..

Daadi:Do u know what r u speaking'v have 2 finish this project by this month'Otherwise v will have 2 face a major financial problem'KC's reputation also will b spoiled..Kal tak sab teek tha.. ab achanak se ye sa kse hosaktha hai'

She couldn't speak more..she held her arms tightly on the chair n she fainted'

PART 3

Maan seeing daadima falling down, held her bfore she reaches the ground ..he screamed 'daadima…what happened daadima.. aakhein kholiye daadi.ma'He shouted Adi for help..He sprinkled water on her face..which didn't make any effect on her..he made her lay on the couch..

Adi at once called their family dr..Who is a close friend of her ..

DR. came and checked her..he gave her an injection..n prescribed some medicines..Adi went out 2 buy the medicines..

Maan: Dr. Is she ok.. why she fainted?any problem..do u want to get her 2 hospital..v can do a master check up..

He doesn't even give chance dr. to speak..

Dr. Hold..hold on..Maan she is fine…darneki koi bath nehi..bcoz of her high bp..she must have fainted..she will get her conscious soon..may b she is worried about something..

Maan: I saw her talking seriously about some problems of Kc on the phone

Dr: may b .. But I'll suggest u one thing Better keep away from stress of business..that will b good for her health..

Dadi got her conscious..

Dr: How r u feeling Savitriji

Daadi:f9 Dr.feeling better now..

Dr:U know u have bp.. u must b in a relaxed mood always..why r u stressing urself n making others tensed…c maan he is lookin pale..I've never seen him like this bfore..

Maan was so quiet looking at his daadima..as he got scared at that moment..Though he tried 2 keep his tough look as always.. bfore daadi..his face said that he is worried for her..

Daadi: kuch business problem tha…isiliye ..ye sab hogaya..

Dr.:As a friend.. Can I ask u one thing?

Daadi: yes..

Dr: U r not in 20's..now ur in 6o's..u r handling house Kc n all..why don't u hand over Kc to Maan..n u better rest at home..u r health is also not supporting u

.Maan: I already said daadi 2 take rest…n I'll lookafter Kc .but she refused..

Daadi:I 'll handover Kc fully to Maan once he get married ..till that I will handle it myself…

Dr:Why don't u get married maan…

Maan really got angry.

Maan: no ways Dr… I'm not interested in marriage…aap better daadi ko samjadijiye ..never 2 think about my marriage...ab tho sirf use aaram karna chahiye..let she take rest n I'll look after KC

Dr:I think u must consider about ur marriage once more ..after all it depends on ur daadis health..

Maan:Its my final decision Dr.

Dr. in a teasy way says'so.i think I can c ur daadi working in KC even if she scores her 100 age..that made the hot situation lighter..

DR:y cant u handover kc.now...Do u have any doubt that he may not handle this big empire

Daadi:yese nehi hai.Dr..I trust him.. even now he can do 1000 times better than me..

Dr…then y.u r forcing him…he is still young..he may b searching for a r8 girl … then ,he may get married..

Dr. supported Maan this time..Maan was getting irritated..

Maan:I will never get married in my life time..Dr..There is no place for a girl in my life.I hate girls..I hate women..they know nothing other than cheating..

He said in loud voice.

Daadi: This is why im forcing him Dr.I 've already told him.. jis din Maan shaadi karegi us din se me KC se retire ho jaunga…Aaram se apni baakiki zindagi bithaunga..lekin ye meri bath sunthahi nahi…I thought, seeing me in this state he may change his decision..but he never cares 4 me.

Maan came near daadi caressing her hand ,he said softly…yese nehi hai dadi..I really care for u ..but...pls muje force math keejiye..

Dr..:I think aap dono ki conversation hatham nehi hoga…meri patients meri intazaar karrahi hogi ..mei chalthi hoon..take care savithriji…..he left..

Maan:Daadi where was the phone from…Whats the problem..?

Daadi :callAdi ..I'll say..

Maan called Adi and waited for him..As adi arrived daadi xplained the problem of the construction site..They disguised how 2 handle the problem..after a few suggestions they got the ans 2 get rid of the problem

Maan :Daadi, I'll go there n solve it...

Daadi: No. Adi will go there ..Thats y I called him..

Maan: but if I go there It will b solved easily..

Daadi:yes..I agree.. But u have 2 go 2 Hoshiarpur tomorrow…Turning 2 Adi she said..You may leave now adi..give me a good news as soon as u reached there.

Maan stood there calmly.till adi leaves

Maan:But y dadi..

Daadi:U know ur Dadajis last wish ..of making a college in Hoshiarpur..(our native place..)

Maan: yes

aadi:but I couldn't find a suitDable land for it..Then I thought of making our farm house 2 college..but v need some more land around for other fascilities..so I bought the surrounding lands also..I tried the maximum I could..

Maan:mmmhhh

Daadi:there was one land in the middle ..I approached them by munshiji. I tried many times.but they refused 2 give it.. @present they r in debts..Munshiji said if v approach them this time n offer more than others v may own the land..muje kal ek important meeting hai..ministers ki saath ..vaarna mei chali jathi…so, I thought of sending u 2 Hoshiarpur..In anyways v need that land. to complete ur daadajis wish..What do u say Maan..?

Maan :Ok daadima..I'll go to hoshiarpur...I'll get the land soon..

He said confidently..His mind voice said, NO ONE CAN SAY NO TO MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Maan:Daadi,aap aaram kariye..I'll attend the meeting with our chief interiors..

I'll make them move on with the project..n join u later.

Daadi: ok beta

Maan finished his meeting and came 2 daadi's cabin..

Maan: how r u feeling daadi?

Daadi: I'm perfectly alr8 beta..

Maan:Ok daadi I'm going home 2 pack my things ..aap apna hayal rakiyega..i'll leave by 2morrow morning.Once I reached there I'll call u ...Bye daadi..

Dadi: bye beta.

He left..

PRECAP:Hoshiarpur

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