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Hey dear, just came across your ff.. Very interesting start.. I so wanna be on the pm list.. Which means you add me to buddy list or i add you to buddy list and you pm the people who love your ff.. Pm them whenever you do a new update.. Need any help in writing ff, the colour-coding and others, you can always pm me and ask.. Right now cant like your post.. But you know, i loved it.. Keep writing hunie.. Appreciate your talent and love for maaneet.. Welcome to ff world.. Congrats on first ff..

Thanks dear for ur support..I have added u 2 my buddy list..>>..I think I have made the 3rd part in colour- coding...-Valli

PART 4

The next morning 7 am in HOSHIARPUR

Rano in her loud voice from kitchen..

Rano:Gudia'getup'Its alredy 7am'u r still sleeping '

Geet: mama..pls sone dona'let me sleep for some more time..She pulled the blanket over her face n she slept again.Vicky.came there ..He pulled her blanket in full force..n took away from her..n ran into his room.

Geet: Mama...Vickyko dekona ..he is disturbing my sleep..

Rano:u both started in the morning itself'gudia.. get fresh up n come here.

Rano said 2 her from kitchen'

Rajendar:Ranu..let her sleep'bachi hai..

Rano: wo ab bachi nahi hai..she is going 2 b 18..yrs..ek do saal mein hum uski shaadi karni hai..agar ye yesehi sasural jakar b soyegi tho wo log kya kahegi..

She said in a worried tone..

Rajender:tum kyun fikar kar rahi ho..hamari gudia jahan b jayegi raj karegi..

Rano:fikar tho maa kohi karna padtha haina'..wo rasoi mein meri hath nehi badathi..gar ki kam mei b help nehi karthi ..kab seekhegi wo..

Rajender:tum fikar math karo..mein yeseladka doondunga wo hamari gudia ko koi kam nehi karne detha'

Rano:gudiako chodiye..pehle Sukwinder ko ek achisi ladki doondiye..

Rajendar:tum teek ke rahi ho..mein aji marriage broker se bath kartha hoon..

Geet got up from her bed & went to the washroom'she took her brush n put the paste on it'when she saw her face on the mirror,she screamed loudly'

Geet:..MAMMMAAA..

Rano dropped the vessel she had in her hand n ran towards geet's room..geet's papa n chachu also ran towards her room'When they all entered her room all of them bursted into a great laugh..looking at Geet..

Geets face was fully painted with white,her big eyes were made more broaden by her kajal..there was a red paint drawn as a long teeth near her lips which made her look like a vampire.. she was fuming in anger looking for Vicky as she knows he is the one who could do this'

Vicky was behind his parents controlling 2 laugh bfore geet.. but couldn't stop his laugh'he also bursted laughing'Geet started throwing the things on Vicky ..started chasing him all through the house .. geets mama papa n chachu'all of them tried to pacify her'but she is not in a mood 2 hear them..she went on chasing n chasing but she couldn't catch him..when she felt tired..she stopped chasing him n sat down taking a long breathe'Vicky made a monkey face 2 her 2 make her tease again n went outside the house'As geet will not come out of the house with her vampire face'

Rano: let vicky come inside I'll look after him' meri pyarisi Gudiya hain na...u go n wash ur face..fresh up n come beta..

Rano tried 2 cool down Geet..she made a baby face n marched towards the washroom'Rano went back 2 kitchen '..n she started doing the break fast for her family..

Sukwinder:bhabhima..khana thayar hai kya..muje jaldise market jaana hai. humari dukaan kliye...kuch zaruri cheese kareedni hai..

Rano:bus..panch minute'its almost ready'tum tayaarhokay aajao'I'll place the food on the dining'

Sukwinder:ji..baabhima'he went out of the kitchen..

Geet called 4m her room'Mama..idhar aayi na'

Rano went 2 geets room..ye gudiya b na kuch b kam apne aap nehi karsakthi...she said to herself..

Geet was struggling 2 button her kurti on her back'.rano helped her'n made her curly hair into two plats n placed geets dupatta correctly over her curves..

Geet was wearing a white salwaar'with tiny blue dots..It was so simple'but she looked more gorgeous like an angel in that dress..

Rano:tumhe kitni baar kahahein dupatta teekse pehna karo..tum choti bachi nehi ho..

Geet:Meinne socha button karne ke baad teekse pehn loongi ..lekin aapne teek kardiya..

She replied making a baby face..

Rano..ab ghar mei hei tu..isiliye koi bath nehi.. lekin bahaar teekse pehna karo..ab chalo...tumhe bhook nehi hai kya'chachu b intasaar kar rahi hogi..wo bahaar jaaneki bath karrahi thi..

Geet followed her mama

Sukwinder was already in the dining..

Sukwinder:arey humari gudiya rani aaj pari jeise lagrahi hain..

Geet :thank u chachu..

Rano served their break fast..Vicky came silently n started eating his break fast.geets eyes was splitting fire at him..

Rano gave a tiffin package 2 geet

Rano: tumhari papa k liye.give this in farm...He has gone 2 c marriage broker'Wehave decided 2 bring u both a chachi..

Sukwinder blushed n excused himself n went 2 the market..

Both geet n Vicky felt very happy.

Geet:mama chachi humse bohut pyar karegi na..

Rano: haan gudiya..

Vicky: wo sirf muje pyar karegi..tumhe nehi..

Geet.. wo banderse pyaar nehi karegi..

Vicky: tum muje bander kaha'tumhi bander ho..

Geet:nehi..tumho...Chachi sirf mujse pyaar karegi..

Vicky..nehi..mujse..

Geet..mujse

vicky:mujse..

They both started fighting again.

Rano.shut up u both..Pehli chachi ko tho aane do..

They both kept quiet..she went back 2 kitche taking the plates 2 wash..Vicky followed her'Vicky:mama..aaj meri friends k saath cycle race hei'mein cycle lekar jaun'

As their was one cycle for both geet n Vicky,he seeked her permission..Geet heared it..She took the keys of cycle n papas breakfast.she took the cycle n started to move..when she saw her pet dog puppy running round her..she said..ssshhh..it responded to her n sat silently...

I'll come back n play with u ..ab mei papa ko khaana dene farm jaraha hoon..

she whispered near its ears...puppy nodded its head as it agreed 2 her..

she rang the cycle bell to make vicky notice her...When Vicky saw her with the cycle he ran towards her 2 stop...she said in a teasy way..loudly..

bna cycle tum kese cycle race mein participate karungi?...mein b dekthi hoon..saying it she started riding her cycle towards the farm'

Precap: Maan leaving to HP

Waiting for the comments from all...-valli

Part 5

Early morning the next day in delhi.

Maan got ready..He called his servants 2 keep the luggage in the car'He called daadima..

Goodmorning daadi..

Good morning beta..are u ready..

Yes daadi..isiliye phone kiya'ab aapki thabiyath kesi hein..How r u feeling today..

Perfectly fine beta..meine munshijise kehdiya ki tum aara hi ho'wo tumhare madath karegi'n Nakul is coming with u..he will cook N take care of ur needs there'

Ok daadi

Maan'Daadi hesitated for some time'then said..

Securities aarahi heina tumhare saath..

Maan found something fishy..

Kya bath hei daadima..koi parishani hai kya'

Haan.. wo..kal wo site pe problem heina'

Mmhh..wo..Aadi said it is solved..then y r u worrying..

It was created by our competitor Rahul 'he is not a genuine businessman..he has connections with underground. i didn't think ,he will fall too low tokeep his status.He is feeling that our company will top this year sending him back..so he is doing all these things...ab wo hume unki dushman samach tahe..we should b more careful'so I want u 2 b more safe..Take more securities with u..

Daadi Ill take care of myself..u don't worry..I'll take my securities with me'ab kush..Go n take rest..

Ok beta..take care. Call me after reaching.hoshiarpur ..Have a safe journey..

U too daadi..take care..

He kept his phone..He called the head of the securities..He came in..

Maan said something 2 him..The .Security was just nodding his head..saying yes sir..2 him..Atlast Maan said

Do the things as I said..And always make sure Daadi is safe'

after some hesitation he said..

Wo bhi

The security stood numb hearing those words 'wo bhi'..

bcoz this is the first time he is telling about to take care of that person as he had never cared for that person before..

No one should know about this..make sure of it..even daadi..

Yes sir

Can I trust u..

Yes sir..

He went back 2 his room n took his pistol'after checking that it is filled with bullets.,he kept it safe inside his coat..He came down n saw kala akka coming out of the kitchen with his black coffee..He took it .sipping his coffee,he said..

Thanks akka.(didi).I'll b in Hoshiarpur for some days'Till that take care of daadima..

Tum nehi kahogi tab b mein daadima ka hayaal rakhunga chotu..u don't need to say this

I know u will take care of dadi in my absence.. u r the one I trust..

He was about to leave..she said'

Chotu..thats a village.. u take care of urself.. and'And ..she hesitated..

he got it..what she was about 2 say..

Your hubby Nakul too..

he finished the sentence..She smiled shly.

ok im getting late..I'll leave now..

He went out 2 the car..Already nakul was waiting for him..Nakuul waved his hand saying bye to kala silently behind Maan..

Maan sat in his black shiny car..followed by his other two black cars with his armed securities'The cars forwarded towards Hoshiarpur'

Maan was only thinking about how 2 deal with the owner of the land..to buy..Unknowing the fact the fate was going to play with him..

Precap: Will Geet n Maan meet...

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Part 6

In hoshiarpur

Geet was riding in her cycle towards the farm.. Jo b uski saamne aaya,She waved her hands ,smiled , wished some…she was friendly with everyone..She entered the farm.She Saw an old man working in the farm.She went to him n asked,

Namaste Dadaji.kesihein aap..,papa kahaan hai..

He looked up n said…gudia…Mein achi hoon.. tu bol tu kesi hai ..papa peeche kisise bath karrahi hai

Mein achi hoon daadaji…mein papako dekh kar aathi hoon..

She left from there n searched for her papa.Atlast she found him at the end of the farm talking to two men.She doesn't know who they are, as they were facing their back to her..When she neared them she only heared her papa pleading them please muje kuch aur mohulat deejiye..He was shocked to see geet .He stopped talking to them …He tried to hide his feelings n behave normal before geet

Arey gudia tu idhar kya karrahi ho

As he said,they both turned .They are Dayalnath n his son Ramnath

I came to give u ur breakfast..

Acha gudia..rahklo mei khaloongi.. mein inse baad karkar aathi hoon.. thab tak tum dadaji k paas betna..He tried to send geet from that place..

Ramnath was drinking her beauty from top to bottom..as if he got a chance he would eat her..he controlled himself before them..She just said namaste to dayalnath ..

She found something odd in her papa's behaviour as if he is trying to avoid her..As she is childish in nature, she didn't think about it..

She made a baby face and said ok papa.

Tell dadaji to give u tender coconut..

She smiled as she loves their farms tender coconut..she left from there.But Ramnath was still starring at the side she went.

Please dayalnathji..muje thodi aur waqt deejiye…mei aapki paise lotadunga.

He pleaded once again..

DN:sry.Rajender.. I cant give u more time it is already more than a year..U told u will return the money in 6 months..but,U didn't give the money nor interest..

I cant help u more ..I want my money back.. r u better give this land 2 me..

Rajender was hurt..hearing those words..

Ye land geetki hai.. mein isey aapko nehi desaktha hoon..

U will not return my money. u will not give ur land..tum muje kya samajkar rakahai.. U better don't forget,u have signed the pronotes…mein tumhe ek week ki mohulat detha hun ..better u give my money or land..Otherwise b ready 2 go to jail

In the case of cheating me..

Dayalnath left the place angrily..

Rajender stood numb, as if the earth under him was moving away…He never felt like this that he is nothing than a zero today..

He slowly walked towards the front of the farm..where geet was chatting with Dadaji.geet somehow felt some change in his papas face..

Papa..Aap teek ho..aap ki chehra yese. kyun hai?

Kuch nehi gudiya.. subha khaana nehi khaya na isiliye yesa lagraha hoga tumko..

He some how managed to convince geet with his answer.

Papa mein jaun .I'm going to chunni 's house to play..

Teek hai gudiya ..tu ja..

Maan was just seeing the sceneries through his window in car..He saw the board WELCOME TO HOSHIARPUR.He is coming here after several years...but there is not much difference now too.It looked the same..Except some huts,that have changed into houses..That only can have two or three rooms.A village remains a village..he said to himself.

.His car was flying through the roads creating moist..

The villagers were just in awe..as they have seen only dayalnaths old ambassadar car..n rarely savithri devi's car..when she comes to HP..but these 3 cars are new branded, long n shiny..n the speed having an equal distance between them,which left them in a shock state..They don't have any idea,who would be inside the car..as the window glasses were fully closed..

Maan was seeing all these.. As the car passed on. he saw the boards on the lands continuosly..THIS PROPERTY BELONGS TO KHURANA'S..He thought really Daadi must have worked hard. His first car stopped before their farm house n his car was about to cross Geet's farm.His driver put a sudden break n he jerked in his seat.

.He asked the driver

what happened..

EK ladki gadi k beech aagayi..

(Yes ...That is none other than Geet...)

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