My first MG FF* ~Dil Ka RiSta~*ch27 updtd on pg119 - Page 57

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry jaan for coming late

Wow meri jaan it's awesome ...finally Geet and Maan are together

Thxs for the pm and update soon...TC love ya🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Desclaimer-
Do read the note after reading this part ...
Chapter-25
After all the rituals...Girls took away Geet to her room so that she can rest...Maan stood that time Pari teased"Maan,don't be restless...she is not running away ,you gonna have her with you for the whole lifetime by your side"
Daadi showed fake anger"Pari,why are you teasing Maan?...maan you also take rest for sometime...we will surely let you go to your room"
Again all laughed
Maan "daadi you too"
The girls were teasing Geet on the way to room and even when they reached the room some married ones especially Pari was giving her tips for the first night...Finally daadi approached and shooed them away
Daadi"geet ,now also before a bahu you are my daughter so if there will be any problem from nowonwards you can tell me..."
Geet smiled and hugged daadima...daadima"geet ,beta ab hum chalte hain"
After daadi went away ...Geet gave a glance to the room,It was decorated with flowers...It looked as if every flower was welcoming Geet to the new life...She went near window and looked at the moon which was glowing...Suddenly she felt two hands circling around her waist ...she smiled ,Maan put his chin on her shoulder...
Maan said huskily"Geet"
geet replied "hmmm"
Maan"thank you"
she turned to see him ...now she was in his arms , she asked looking fondly into his eyes"for what?"
maan "For loving me..."
Geet"Maan ...don't start it now if I will start the list will take days to end"
Maan asked playfully"Then what should we start?"
geet"matlab" then at once she blushed witnessing the playful glow in Maan's eyes...
maan lifted her chin...and said "matlab ...should i make you understand?"
Geet moved away blushing but played along"um...make me crave for you"
now this came as a shock to Maan as he had not thought of this challenge coming on his way...geet also realised what she said but now the arrow was out ,so she asked with confidence "Can you?"
Maan smirked and thought"hmm...is it hard to make a lady crave for the man whose mere smile make her blush...lets see geet till when you gonna hold yourself"
maan"Ok,Geet then you sleep as I will have to do some preparations for that,you go and change,i will also change"
Maan started unbuttoning his sherwani..when he reached halfway Geet exclaimed"maan,you will change here..."
Maan "why whats the problem?...I am not forcing you to look at me you can go ..waise geet ,can you help mde in unbuttoning as this button has got stuck and I don't want to spoil it by torning it"
Geet didn't realise maan's intention,she moved to help him while unbuttoning his sherwani her eyes went to the well tonned muscles that was revealed by the unbuttoned shirts...She went in another land for a moment and didn't realised Maan who was enjoying her state..he slowly put her hand on his chest...the direct contact gave her goosebumps..though her mind retotrted and commanded her to move her hands away but she was unable to resist not only because of her desire to feel her husband but also because the way he was looking at her fondly and assuring her she has every right on him...She didn't know when Maan took her lips in his...it was only then when he nibbled on her lips constantly yet sweetly to let him eplore her...his scent was so strong that it was hard to resist his plea...She parted her mouth and then firstly he explored every part of mouth calmy as if searching for some precious item ...their tongues met tangled and untangled soon it turned into a passionate kiss...they continued until they felt lack of air to breath...
Maan"Now also you will say ...I need to do more effort"
Geet"um..no"
They again kissed ...Geet unbuttoned Maan's sherwani while kissing and he unfastened the hook of her blouse...soon they were on bed ...feeling each other's body...feeling the warmth and exploring the sensual parts...Geet moaned his name urging for more...taking this as her approval Maan finally went in letting her feel him and feeling her ...
the night was passing
All were deep in sleep
When two hearts were thumping
Everything became quiet soon
and they were resting in each other's arm
feeling each other's love
a smile of satisfaction was playing on their lips
even in the deep sleep
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i just want to say i am naive at this and whatever i have written its after reading few FFs ...
Edited by sur001 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey meri jaan 🤗
Love the update beautifully written...what a passionate kiss and nite ...like the way Maan was teasing Geet😉
Jaan u did a good job 👏👏👏 and thxs for the efforts u put in it in order to entertain us.
Love u jaan ...thxs for the pm
Edited by pri01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear ☺️😍😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update 😳☺️
☺️loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part..
loved it so much..
thanks 4 pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update lovely well done dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE
LIKED GEET'S CHALLEGE
BUT MSK BHI READY THA CHALLEGE KE LIYE
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Posted: 13 years ago


beautiful update...

they are one now...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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