Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed

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Nooriya

@noorie_

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Hey! Lovely ss! Do pm me if you update!😃

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Hey it was beautiful 👏

So glad that you continued ! Wonderfully written, Do update the next chapter soon 🤗

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465612

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Wow!Awesome update Zee!

The entire scene,I could imagine that happening!

Poor Khushi!I liked how Arnav stood up for her😆

I enjoyed reading it!

Lori.

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maria

@marisol45

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

nice part zee!

I can totally imagine that happening

looking forward to the next one :):)

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

thanks heaps for updatin zee 🤗

i ws sooo damn bored and finally got somethin worth while to read abt kushi & arnav...

awww u'v translated certain dialogues shooo shweet of u darlin!!!! but it's totally ok just leave dem in hindi...

ok back to da update, ooohhh arnav does feel sorry for ms gupta isn't he??? when will he finally give up?!?! i hope kushi doesn't quit da challenge in ur ff sweets. i wanna see who actually wins here. ooohh dat jalebi bit ws fab!!! i could totally imagine arnav glarin at his stupid staff and kushi all teared up!!!

da funniest bit ws da endin. he calls lavanya 'ms kashyap' 🤣

dats kinda a first for me 🤣 🤣

lukin forward to da next update!!!!! mwaaah

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Hey Zee!!!

Thanks for the PM hun!!

I love the update, it was a great read. You've expressed Arnav's feelings really well. I love the way he coats his feelings through bitter words towards Khushi, in an attempt to hide them!! Great work dear!!

Looking forward to the next part...update soon!!

😊

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

hey ZJ it was once again awesome update as i seriously love to read ur updates it has wonderful flaw to captivate readers and i loved this part loved the way u portrayed superb hon 🤗 🤗 and thanks for pm

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

awww Zee
tht was such an amazing part
totally mind blowing
am sooo loving the whole thing
hats off to u matey

thanks for the pm
n update soon

luv
pooja

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Shilpa Sobti

@shilparoxx

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

hi😊
I'm Shilpa. I'm sorry I didn't comment earlier. I didn't get time to read your update 😔. But I ❤️ the 2 chapters a lot!! I just finished reading them and my oh' my they are wonderful!!😛 You know (I'm telling the truth here not lying), I always wished that Arnav's past had something to do Khushi being his best friend when they were young. And then an accident happened between their two families and that's what caused them to separate. I thought that it would be really fun to watch the truth being revealed this way in IPKKND! Then, when they find out, after they give apologies etc to each other for everything that had happened between them, then we would all see some awesome BEST FRIEND chemistry between them!!😛 Then later, the LOVE would occur slowly😉. And your ff is quite similar. That's why I absolutely ❤️ it!!!😛
take care
shilpa

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Am captivated by this, read it all and was so sorry that I have to wait for more parts 😃. I love the way you've expressed the whole story, the emotions come across alive and it really flows into the present character we've seen built up in the serial. I think the angle is totally logical and provides a great backdrop for the conflicts they will have which will stand in their way and overall, just fab! Thank you for this and hope you update asap! 😃