Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: aashizin
oww ZJ it was awesome OS from u once again sweetheart 🤗seriously its always treat to read ur OS and this one superb loved the way u show whole shot love portrayal of char wonderfully please do write more hon 🤗

Aashi sweetheart, its been long 🤗 Thanks for ur kind and heartfelt response, am glad u liked it :D will surely be writing more :)

Luv

Zee 🤗

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was nice

thnks shafoo :D

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: hieverybody
That was Awesome.
No that was amazing.

Not it was just brilliant.

actually it was all of the above.

You nailed completely with the hindi dialogue and enough ArHi scenec. Their history seems pretty logical too. if they're connected in the past like that they that would explain one of the frist promos. And again luved it. Plzzz continue it as a story.

U made me blush there..! 😆 😳 Thanks for ur kind and heartfelt response, its truly elating :)

I couldnt help myself, had to put some ArHi, i deduct marks from episodes if i dont get an ArHi scene :P U managed to get to the very depth, that very promo was my inspiration for this OS.

I have finally decided that i will turn this OS into an SS after the kind response, just need to get the plot structure penned :D Once again thanks for reading :D

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Thanks to all those who Hit the like tab :)

kashev, Honkytonk, gagsy, nav_bat, lifesucks123, MoNaYaRoX, tina_1234, FebruaryFlower, hemvb, ..Jojo.., mahiem94, -sia-, vrshn, sharneil92, iqbals4ever, rosecutie, Lori., shreenithi, lwfw, Wafa_94, bDgT, kweetrockstar, aashizin, Shafoo, DiyaS, jenny1000, -Swetha-, Dreamy_Mystique, NaDzGirl, CandYlicious_SG,

I consider reviews n Likes as Love showered on me, and its truly elating 😳

After the Kind reviews i have decided to turn this OS into an SS, will give further updates thru PM before that i need to get the plotline is done :)

Lots of Luv

Zee 🤗

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Jyo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

I love this FF.. it is completely logical and I think this is the best way Arnav and Khushi's life can be linked! Love how you write! I could visualise everything! :D Continue it soon, I would love to read from you! :) PM me as well! :D

Edited by ..Jojo.. - 14 years ago

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ..Jojo..
I love this FF.. it is completely logical and I think this is the best way Arnav and Khushi's life can be linked! Love how you write! I could visualise everything! :D Continue it soon, I would love to read from you! :) PM me as well! :D

Thanks for appreciating my work 😳 Glad u liked it :)

The inspiration for this OS was the third promo, i tried my best to b realistic bearing in mind the characters n circumstances, it feels good to know that i succeeded in that :)

once again Thanks for reading and giving the much needed encouragement, i will be writing more, will surely add u :D

Luv

Zee xD

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BIackSwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: TheWandmaker

Thanks for ur amazing response Nadz, it truly made my day! :D
Where was i ? 😳 well i penned this 🤣 🤣 Jokes apart i dont think i will be a regular member, i have got lots of work pending, but one thing for sure, m addicted to IPK now and no matter wat i always make it a point to come here n check the forum posts 😳

I tried my best to stick to the characters n story, was mainly circling around the third promo, that was my inspiration basically.
I have been in your shoes time n now, to be speechless yet coming up with a fullfledged response 😆 😆
Once again thanks for ur kind and heartfelt review, i have been considering turning this OS into an SS after the response, will definitely keep u updated, i was a lil lazy while doin PM's for this one 😆 😳

Luv
Zee xD

gosh can't blame u for being addicted to dis cz im totally obsessed with da show...

can't even sleep or breath properly tnx to arhi... and especially ASR!!! *thud thud*

oh it ws amazingly written *here i go again*😆 i really enjoyed every bit of it...

dont worry too much cz i'l make sure dat i nag u to write more!!!! u can't escape from nadz 🤣

u buys with exams too?!?!?! if dats da case, don't write until ur exams are over!!!!!

will def bug u afterwards 🤣 🤣

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maria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

nice work zee!

explanation for arnav, anjali and khushi's past fit perfectly :):)

do write more!

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-scarlett-

@-scarlett-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Zee!! 🤗OMG! I have no words to describe HOW good this shot was...

can you please make this a FF...wud love tht!

Firstly the dialogues were commendable... the whole accent

and the style of speaking that you grasped out of every character

was excellent...

and the whole twist added as a masala to the story...

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

gosh can't blame u for being addicted to dis cz im totally obsessed with da show...
can't even sleep or breath properly tnx to arhi... and especially ASR!!! *thud thud*
oh it ws amazingly written *here i go again*😆 i really enjoyed every bit of it...

dont worry too much cz i'l make sure dat i nag u to write more!!!! u can't escape from nadz 🤣

u buys with exams too?!?!?! if dats da case, don't write until ur exams are over!!!!!
will def bug u afterwards 🤣 🤣

Goes without saying me too, It's ArHi everywhere n m kinda luvin it !! 😆 😳

If so then u r gonna get regular updates, m very lazy otherwise 🤣 Nah not exams, new session, classes r gonna start, plus month of ramadan ahead :)

and i have many pending FF's to complete :|