Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

That was indeed an interesting story!

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Thanks All, Glad to see comments ! :D

My work hasn't died out :')

Edited by AnotherAdmirer - 11 years ago

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

This came up in my posts again! I am going to read this SS all over again :D

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Awesome FF. What a story and fabulous imagination. Love does conquer the world. Enjoyed reading it..

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kurinji

@kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

This SS will surely qualify for "How IPK must have been" you started from the weak and collapsing building fiasco.
Your kushi is much stronger, she is firm and decisive, when her parents told about her biological mother and Arnav's dad, she thought beyond herself and she tried to find Arnav behind the mask, and decisive about her attempt.
Oh I love this way of finding about shaym and was in glee when everybody punched him. Shaym being shaym once again wanted to have kushi so he blurted about thier connected past. Arnav being arnav tried to find a quick solution.
That conversation between Arnav and Kushi is open and warming.
It all started and ended naa restarted in sheesh mahal.
Nice take on IPK.

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

loved the start of story

part 1
arnav and khushi in same scenario
but the twist u add by relating their past was marvellous
this link looks more sensible
khushi mom and atnavs dad in relationship
and now khushi dont hate arnav
due to past revealation
very well written