MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 41

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Chapter Eight

The End that gives way to a new Beginning.

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Jaz...thanks 4 da pm n awesome update!👏 Is this really da end? 😔 Loved the update! Beautifully written⭐️...Geet n Maan spoke to each other! Maan confessed his feelings. Please dnt say tht the last update was pathetic...it was awesome. U r an amazing writer! U told da story as u saw it...not every FF/SS/Os has to b wid a kiss etc...this was a happy ending! Maan will wait for his Geet...allow her to live her dreams. Please write an epilogue n pm wen u do! Looking forward to anew SS/FF from u...pm wen u do. Btw u did nt dissapoint us with this FF...all da best! Will miss ur updates...😉

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome...

loved the way u ended it...it felt true in every sense...

the words they spoke...the feelings they shared...amazing...

enjoyed reading this SS...

loved each n every part...

thnx for such an amazing story...

do write another one soon n dont forget to PM me...

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

that was wonderful Jazz ⭐️

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

Jazz, I couldn't wait to get home to read it, so I read at work (good use of my time)

I loved loved that line "And I am yet not ready to part away with my heart from myself," I swear I felt like I have been transported to a world where emotions, feelings held great importance and u didn't declare your undying love to every guy who walks into your life.

Maan just wants to be her shadow, how many men are out there who can say the same...that's what makes this story so unique.
He does not want to possess her, claim her or her life, but just like a true shadow, he is making her dreams his; making her aspirations his...

To quote Rudyard Kipling "A people always ends by resembling its shadow" and this very well be Geet's future 😳

I sincerely hope that you will write more b/c as much as u like to think otherwise, you are a very good writer

Originally posted by: goldenball

Congratulations ...

Excellent story...especially the way last update came out. Yesterday I could relate to it very much. You have a dream to aspire and if someone gives a helping hand...it becomes so easy...else u are so frustrated...and you have coneyed it very well...

Just chk out your updates one by one...each one got better then the previous one..and last one was too good as I could hold my attention to it till last word.

I really envy your poetic style of writting...I lack that part...😉

Waiting for next dear...

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GB