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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

awesome...

the story is getting more n more interesting...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Serenity_me

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

AWEEE lovely update behna...😃

Edited by SlovHanda - 13 years ago

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mechantefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Thank you :)

I was in a real dilemma how to portray Maan's innermost feelings. That is where my Ustaad aka deej and sakhi Simz stepped in.

Whatever they did - it was a fantastic combination.

Do I sense a bit of an insecurity in Maan - it's like Geet's vibrant soul makes him feel empty...if he's ''making worthy his existence'', does he get out of the shadows??

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
awesome...

the story is getting more n more interesting...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thank you :)

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Whatever they did - it was a fantastic combination.

Do I sense a bit of an insecurity in Maan - it's like Geet's vibrant soul makes him feel empty...if he's ''making worthy his existence'', does he get out of the shadows??

He is someone who keeps others at bay. He has seen the shallowness and the limits to which people can take it too and decided to keep away. And then he sees Geet, someone who faces the similar discontent but yet has not shunned people around her. She keeps her space and yet socializes with others around her. She keeps her happiness inwards and projects it outwards. He never found happiness outwards and somehow got convinced that he would never even find it inside of him. Geet has shown him a better way to be. It's easy to keep away. It takes courage to live contented midst the constant chaos. Hence the need to make himself worthy of her.

Tell me, a man so in control, so fixed in his ideas, so determined...how would you make him go against what he intends? It has to be either a very compelling reason...or ...or a sudden unanticipated move that tempts him out...right?

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

Are we getting an update today? :D

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mechantefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: jazzerette

He is someone who keeps others at bay. He has seen the shallowness and the limits to which people can take it too and decided to keep away. And then he sees Geet, someone who faces the similar discontent but yet has not shunned people around her. She keeps her space and yet socializes with others around her. She keeps her happiness inwards and projects it outwards. He never found happiness outwards and somehow got convinced that he would never even find it inside of him. Geet has shown him a better way to be. It's easy to keep away. It takes courage to live contented midst the constant chaos. Hence the need to make himself worthy of her.

Tell me, a man so in control, so fixed in his ideas, so determined...how would you make him go against what he intends? It has to be either a very compelling reason...or ...or a sudden unanticipated move that tempts him out...right?

Could be - or it could be a call to the subconscious - where it finally realizes what it had been craving/looking for. Maybe Maan was looking for a reason strong enough to get out of that self imposed exile. But that's only to the personal level and it seems only to that one person.

Geet is happy with herself, her life. Hence projected thus. But Maan - as u said - Courage!! The effort to live with others and their turmoil n madness and the pandemonium that otherwise exists...so i get and appreciate the effort he's putting in!

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

Chapter Eight

The End that gives way to a new Beginning.

(late evening) Handa Residence

This isn't right. Something is amiss and I can't place my finger on it. Every thing is as usual. In fact better. Relatives all around. Laughter fills my ears. Happiness resounds all around me. Yet these happenings do not penetrate the walls around my heart.

2022/2/9 - IMPORTANT - SS moved to

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36072373/chapters/89923987

jazzerette | Archive of Our Own

You must know why I exist

Not a shadow, not an illusion of your mind.

Keeping you foremost, your dream ahead of mine

Always with you, Just a Dream or Two Behind.

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Epilogue - Page Sixty Three

At the other end of the Rainbow

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#359

So how was the grand finale? Not upto the mark? Unresolved ending? But it is a happy ending right? I always maintained I am not a good story-teller, it was bound to fall flat. You guys had way too much trust in me.😳

I have a few things to more to say though.

First and foremost, its the longest I have typed so far. If the characters loose their sheen mid-way, do pardon me for that.

Thank you for the support and appreciation. I had never expected even this much. Only one thing I was sure of was my friends standing right next to me. But so many more of you came forward, it makes my heart swell.

Reva had asked me that is it even a love-story. Love comes to us in many forms. And faith is the highest degree that love can attain.

It is not a love story in its strictest meaning. It was more of medium to let someone know that faith always rewards. Some medium is always chosen to let attain that support you yearned for, that resolve you held onto, that dream you lived.

And if that medium, also brings along love, isn't it the most beautiful thing to happen to you?

I have doubts if I have done justice to this story. I only hope you all enjoyed reading it.

And now I can run away and hide!!

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

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Preethi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#360

That was Awesome! It could not have ended better Jaz... Not all love storry ends with a hug or a kiss or ahem😊. This was an awesome ending with Justice done to the basic story and theme... Have faith and oppurtunity comes by itself...😊

👏👏👏👏 Do keep writing... expecting more from you!😊

Edited by Preethi-Premi - 13 years ago