MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 10

i just read a few lines and i am very excited to read more!

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Thank you. Glad to see my words leaving some impact.

Will add you to my PM list.

Originally posted by: --Shika--

What do you expect me to write?😆
I already blabber everything with you and when it comes to posting a single comment i'll be typing, erasing..lolz..itne mein ek update type kar leti..
i love two characters a lot in this story.. Guess who!!
Pinky and Dadi..
Pinky will choose a bowl of Maggi..hmm as expected..she would definitely do that..
the entire Pinky Geet conversation made me smile you-know-why.
And Dadi..!! Gawd! She's that kind of Dadi anyone would wish for. I love these lines of hers..
Like a good little boy its office-home-and-back-to-office routine for you. And in the name of extra-curricular activity, you have your hoo-haa tai-chi shai-chi."
It had me in splits..😆
As i already told you what i like the most is the similarities of their persona. Disinterest..
Everyone's life isn't exciting.. Many will live for something... but some will just go with the flow.. and i'm glad to see something different..
Even the opposites attract concept is something which is always used but this is knida interessting and i already told you your mission accomplished!!😆
I loved it that Geet isn't making an issue over the general-or-rather-accidental-or-according-to-pinky-oh-so-dreamy fall! Good girl!!😆 I appreciate Geet!!😆
And the last part again held my breath and i swear am grinding my teeth every time you stop and don't be surprised if something happens to my teeth! you should be blamed!!

Originally posted by: goldenball

Jazz...your stories have poetic flow...@1-2 .well done on settling the characters - initialization...3rd part is better as I saw story moving...

another common thing...I noted between you and me...is I am also painter though not professional yet...😳

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Pinky is a great friend. She sounds awesome! Dadi is hilarious! Haha, the part about him being a nerd, tai-chi, and the partying. I love Dadi! I wish it would rain here, I am about to burn up! [random thought] Geet's seen a silhouette! What will she do? Check it out? Call for help? Or watch in silence? Will the silhouette realize that she knows he's there?

I kind of like the short updates *avoids jhutis and grabs an umbrella* It makes it seem like a scene in a movie or a snippet of conversation, of sorts. Loved the update! Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome and fabulous continue soon

Originally posted by: sneha0504

haha!!!! so will Maan go to the bus stop in front of Handa Residence whenever it is about to rain..to see Geet..awww!!! fantastic update!!!