KURBAAN HUA... MAANEET SS completed - Page 4

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hei friends here is the last part of this ss... as per rule of short story I have not put a definite ending and left it on your imagination... as this story is dealing with a subject which has no proper explanation I tried to keep the mystery intact ... now u r the judge... please let me know your view on it ... please leave a comment ... its an request as ur comments are precious for me😊

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Part :3

I am lying beside her keeping my head on her bosom. She was caressing my hair with her hands. I never felt such peace of mind. I smiled... before that I never knew how beautiful she is.

She created eutopia for me but only for a while as her words shocked me at the very next moment. What she is talking about! She is trying to convince me to leave her and run away from there. Devendra is trying to kill me! He was using her to kill me! So what I can fight him and everybody knows there is no competition of me in the whole Rajputana.

But she convinced me. Her logic was so strong... all my argument failed infront of her. Devendra is really powerful here in Anathgar and he is really mean. He can stoop to any level for achieving the ultimate power that is the throne of the king. But what about her safety?

There was a secret underground path in Amaravati which has its exposure at the border of Anathgar at the bank of the local river Kista. One of her faithful guard was waiting for me with a horse. I ride on it and live the place reluctantly.

"Main unhe dekhti rahi. Dhire dhire wo mere ankho se dur ho gaye main dekhti rahi. Mujhe pata tha sayed main unhe akhri baar dekh rahi thi. Wo chahte the main unke sath jaun. Par ye samvab nahi tha. Mujhe lautkar Devendra ko samhalna tha. Udiyamaan ko Arjangar pouchne me kam se kam ek din lag jathe. Mujhe usse wo waqt dena tha. Iss bich kissi bhi tarh se Devendra ko patha nahi lagna chahie ke Udiyamaan yaha se bach ke nikal gaye hain, nahi to Devendra unka picha zaroor karega.Udiyamaan ko Arjangar pohuchke sipahi leke yaha aneme do ya teen din lag jayega. itne dino me Devendra ko sacchai ka pata chal hi jayega par phir bhi mujhe usse rokke rakhna hain nahito wo maharaj aur yuvraj ko maar ke singhasan hasil kar lenge."

Main gupt raste se Amaravati louti. Apne ghar me. kuch der pehle Udiyamaan yehi pe mere saath the mere kareeb. Unke ankho me, unke baho me mujhe apna jannat mil gaya hain ab chahe zindegi bhar mujhe jahannam(hell) ki aag me jalna padhe fir bhi koi afsos nahi.

Mujhe pata tha Devendra zaroor kuch hi der me aa jayega. Main taiyar thi. Wo athe hi main uspe chillane lagi, " Uss botal mein kyat ha Devendra jawab do... tumne mere hatho se Kumar ko marawa hi diya. Agar kisiko bhi iss vaare pata chal gaye tab kya hoga? Tumne ek baar bhi mere vaare me nahi socha?"

"Ro math kuch nahi hoga tumhe main hu na. Ab batao tumne unka lash ka kya kiya?"

"Woha bagicha(garden) me dafna diye hain."

Maine usse wo jaga dikhaya jaha kal raat hum uss billi ko dafnaye the. Mujhe pata tha Devendra ki logone Amaravati pe nazar rakkhe hue hain issiliye jab maine Udiyamaan ko yahase bhaga rahi thi tabhi mere logone bagiche me billi ko dafnaya take sabko lage humne Kumar ko yaha dafnaya hai aur zaroor ye Devendra ko pata hain phir bhi mere samne natak kar raha hai... par iss baar tumhare natak me main nahi mere natak me tum phasne wale ho.

"Geetanjali tum sacheme kamal ho. Bass ek baar main raja ban jaoon phir dekhna kaise tumhe sone se sajake rakhta hu."

Par mujhe pata tha mera ye natak zada der Devendra ko dhoke me nahio rakh sakta hain. Teesre din subah Devendra Amaravati me laut ke aya. Uske ankh jal raha tha. Usse dekhke hi mujhe samajh aa gaya usse pata chal gaya hai.

"Udiyamaan kaha hai Geetanjali?"

"kyun tumhe pata nahi hai?"

"Tumne Devendra ko dhoka diya hai. Pata haina main tumhara kya kar sakta hu?"

"Mujhe parva nahi. Udiyamaan laut ke aane wale hai. Uske baad tumhara kya hoga wo socho."

"Mujhe kuch hone se pehle main iss rajya ko jala dungaa... khatam kar dunga. Mere logone Rajmahal me hamla kar diya hai. Maharaj Yuvraj sabhi ko bandi banaya liya jayega. aur tumhare Udiyamaan ki aane se pehle main ban jaunga iss rajya ka raja."

"Hukum Arjangar ki sena Ananthgar pohuch chuke hai Kumar Udiyamaan khud aaye hain apna sainik lekar. Wo kista paar karke humare seema tak pohuch gaye hai." Devendra ki ek admi akar ye sandes(news) de gaya.

Hum dono sath me chouk uthe.

"To tumhara kumar aahi gaye tumhe le jane. Huh sach me tum dono ki pyar ki to kahani likkhi jayegi. Ek Rajkumar aur ek tawaif ki kahani. Par afsos iss kahani ki sukhad anth (happy ending) nahi hoga. Kyun ki ye kahaniki anth karenge hum."

Mere kuch samajh ne se pehle hi mere sarir me ajib si dard mehsoos hone lage. Maine dekha Devendra ki talwar mere pet ko chir ke nikal gaye the. Devendra talwar ko mere sarir se khich ke nikal liya aur mere ghar se nikal gaya. Jane se pehle uske admi ko kuch kehke gaya.

Main sans nahi le pa rahi thi. Ankho me andhera cha raha tha. Mujhe samajh me aa gaya tha Udiyamaan se ek akhri baar milne ki jo meri tamanna thi wo adhura hi reh jayega. phir bhi ekbar bass ekbar agar unhe dekh pati toh... maine khidki se dekha dur bohut dur ghore pe savar kuch log dikhai diye aur sabke samne sabse sundar, wohi mera Udiyamaan hai... bass wo mujhe dikh gaye... mere ankh bandh ho raha tha par hotho pe hasi thi. Ussi waqt mujhe laga koi mere upar sharab chirak rahe hai aur fir maine mehsus kiya main jal rahi hu. Devendra ki admine mere sarir me aag laga die the. Par wo jalan mujhe zada der mehsus nahi hua... usse pehle hi mare akhri sans nikal chuki thi.

I was in tears. I was sharing my memory my vision with Udiyamaan. I know how he reached Arjangar how he organized his soldiers and rushed towards Anathgar. I can feel the agony, anxity of Udiyamaan within me. He and me was the same person, there was no grammatical mistake in adressing Udiyamaan as me. But I didn't know what was happeing with her at that time. She knew wont be alive to meet me again, she knew it when I was living her ' uhh why didn't I notice it why didn't I force her to come with me why?

She was there standing by the window why didn't I give a look to the window at that moment. Only if I knew this then I could have save her.

"Uske baad Udiyamaan ka kya hua Geetanjali?" I need not to ask it but I asked.

"Nahi pata mujhe uske baad maine kabhi unhe nahi dekhe... wo Amaravati me kabhi laut ke nahi aye.Aur main yaha reh gayi unke intezaar karte hue humesha humesha ke liye."

"Aj tumhara intezar ka anth hua ke nehi? Jawab do Geetanjali mujhse milke tumhara intezar khatam hua ke nahi?jawab do...I want an answer." She was silent. I turned... she wasn't there ... no way... last time also she left me like this craving for an answer. Not again. I will be crazy. "Geetanjaliii"... I shouted. There was no reply.

Next day, 11am.

I entered into Bari Haveli... Rajmahal of that time. I can see myself as Udiyamaan entering the rajmahal. There was clear signs of fight in the hall. Dead bodies of guards, stains of blood in the hall was giving me an eerie feeling. We entered in Anathgar almost without any obstruction and then into the palace after a small fight with Devendra's men who were gurding the palace. My army took care of them and I headed for Devendra. I was sure he is here only.

Yes I was right he is sitting there on the 'singhasan'... with a disgusting evil smile on his face.

"Aiye Kumar Udiyamaan aiye. Aphika intezar ho raha hai."

"Devendra wo jaga tumhare nahi hai. Tum uske layak nahi ho. Mere baat maan lo nahi to mera talwar apna kaam acchi tarh se janta hai."

"Haan maine suna hai apke talwar ke vare me par kya hai na agar apki talwar mujhe chuya bhi to bandigriha (jail) me Maharaj aur yuvraj ko apne jaan gavana padhega."

I paused for a second.

"dar to issi bath ka hain wo samna nahi karta hai kisika, piche se vaar karte hain." I remember what Geetanjali said about him. I grinned.

"Devendra bandigriha me wo log nahi hai. Rajmahal me dakhil hote hi tumne unn logo ko mar diya kyunki tumhe lagta tha agar wo log zinda rahenge to praja bidroh hona nischit hai' hai na?"

He was shocked and silent for a while. He came down from the 'Singhasan.Then his barito echoed in the hall.

"Tum kafi buddhiman ho bilkul tumhare masook(lady love) ki tarh. Par yehi baat uski jaan le gayi."

I frowned.

" Are sach kehta hu uski jaise khoobsurat aurat nahi dekhi maine. Mehfil se leke bistar tak har jagahme wo behtarin(best) thi. Uske to hare k ang'sarir ka ek ek kona sundar tha."

Every inch of my body was burning in rage. My sword pounce upon him. He somehow dodged it with his sword.

"Dhire kumar apke talwar sayed apke talwar ke samne kamzor hai par ye bhi kuch kam nahi. Aur aj to ye aur bhi zada khus hai. Aj ye dunia ki sabse mitha rakt(blood) pee ke aya hai. Apki pyar apki masuka ka khun karke aya hai ye." He laughed. "Iss talwar se maine usse mar dala hai aur sirf yehi nahi zinda rehte hi jala diya hai maine usse. Jaiye jake dekh lijiye sayed kuch vasm(ash) mil jaye uski sarir ka."

My world crushed down in front of my eyes. 'Geetanjali.' My sword suddenly seemed heavy to me... as my hand can't hold it any more... my body was numb.

Devendra was waiting for that moment. He pounced on me. He thought he will kill me in my weak moment but he was wrong. I dodged him and stab him with my sword in his stomach, bring it out and again stab him. I did it for seven times. I was mad then. First outcome of my pain came out as my rage not as tears. I could have kill anyone or everyone come infront of me at that moment. But I had only him the bloody murderer of my love.

I ran out and went to Amaravati. I still had a belief that Devendra was lying me. But when I reached there I saw one of her maid servants crying out loud. Seeing me she came running, "aapne itne der kyun kar diya. Sab khatam ho gaye. Geetanjali jal gayi, mar gayi."

I didn't enter. I went back to rajmahal. I was right; Devendra had already killed maharaj and yuvraj. Rajkumari Nandini was out of the palace when all this took place. My brother married her later. I didn't return to Arjangar. I stay there to rull Ananthgar but never went to Amaravati again.

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"Sir are you ok?"

I snapped out of my thought by Adi's question. I looked at him cluelessly. For a moment everything blurred in fornt of my eyes. My vision get cleared and now I can see I am standing in the room of bade haveli where the temoporary office set up was done. Adi was standing beside me. what was I thinking or observing or feeling ' well whatever I was doing what was that? As if I was in a trance.

I am not able to figure out what is happening with me. I rubbed my forhead, wandering restlessly ... whatever is going on with me from the last night making me insane. How can I address Udiyamaan as 'I', how can I share his vision. Was it my wild imagination? Can anybody even feel anyone's touch on his skin as I could feel her body against mine.

Is it possible Udiyamaan and me is same person? But no how's that possible? Rebirth? Reincarnation? Huh silly things, I don't believe in this. But then what was happening with me ' what should I call it? Only Geetanjali can answer it. Uh my wait for her begins again.

Darkness has gulped the last bit of daylight long before. It's a dark night. Not a single star was there in the sky as a giant size cloud was guarding them. I was all prepared. I lit up a number of candels in the room. The flame was reflecting in the mirror. I was looking at my reflection. I look little bit different as my dress was different tonight and a pagdi was adorning my head, but not much different, as in two days I have got havituated with this looks. I was wearing the traditional Rajasthani royal dress I bought yesterday from the local salesman.

I knew she has already arrived. I don't need to look out for her I can feel her. I turned towards her. Her eyes widened. She was bewildered, dumbstruck she was gazing in my eyes like she was finding something in it. I think I saw tears in her eyes. Can any eatherial existence can cry? Her beautiful face lit up with a smile. She keep on her gaze without a blink.

"Tumne kal mera saval ka jawab nahi diya. Kya tumhe lagta hai mujhse milke tumhara Udiyamaan ke liye intezar khatam ho gaya hai? Kya main Udiyamaan hu?kya isi liye tum sirf mujhe dikhai dete ho aur kisiko nahi?"

She didn't give any answer but didn't break her gaze. Her eyes said it all. My eyes were lost into her's. I was losing my conscious, my senses, my mind. I was happy and I would have been happier if they don't come back at all, if this night had no dawn. My heart was begging to the sun please spare me for one day, let this night stay for a little longer.

I wanted to touch her, grab her, kiss her. I can feel the same urge in her. I was going to keep my hand on her cheek but I stopped myself. I was afraid. May be she will disappear just after the touch, may be her ethereal existence will lose itself in this verse universe.

"Tumne kaha tha tumhe mukti chahiye?"

"Haan bass aap wo tasvir ko jala dena."

I promised.

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Next day, 7am.

Everynight is a fairytale for me but with every sunrise my logic and mind wake up from their sleep and begin their monsterous attac on me. uhh how much I hated them.

I was standing in front of the mirror as my mind was confusing me with its tricky question. Why she was stareing at me last night? Was she looking at me or she was trying to find her Udiyamaan in me. What the hell, whats the difference between me and him? We are the same person aren't we?

But still we two are different persona. And she loves Udiyamaan not me. Her eyes were on me but they were searching for Udiyamaan not the Maan Sing Khurana. No way, I refuse to admit it. She is my love she is mine.

I intense my gaze on my reflection. I was still wearing the same dress except the pagdhi. My own reflection seems to be Udiyamaan to me.

"You are so dead Udiyamaan.You couldn't have her in your life. It was your failure. But Maan Sing Khurana never failes." I grinned.

A feeling of ownership crept in me. "Yes you belong to me, Geetanjali you belong to Maan Sing Khurana." I shouted...in this whole world its me and only me who can see her, feel her... none else can get a single glance of her. Every bit of her is mine...I won her. "Geetanjali I won you."... no not Geetanjali, everybody calls her Geetanjali...I can't share her name with anyone else. From onwards I will call her Geet... yes she is Geet, my Geet... Maan ki Geet."

11am.

I was leaning my head and swinging on my chair in the temporary office room. She is only visible to me, I can see her feel her so I will be able to touch her. Yes... a broad smile comes on my face. I will be the only man who can touch her.I was happy really happy. My entire mental struggle has faded out. It is clear and I am feeling so delighted. All my quaires about the connection between me and Udiyamaan is not needed any more. I don't care about Udiyamaan, who cares if I was him or not. I am not interested in this fact. Who wants the truth I want her, I want my Geet, only Geet.

She wants to get free form here. I will free her but not now. She has waited for such a long time, some more years will not be a big deal. I will take her with me. I will take that painting with me to the Delhi. It will be burned as I promised her ... it will be burned with my body...mere chita ke sath wo bhi jall jayegi."

For sometime I closed my eyes. I was taking a small nap leaning on the chair. A noise wake me up. People are shouting. I get up and saw Adi is coming in a hurry.

"Maan sir choti haveli me aag lag gayi hai."

My world around me started to shudder violently. I rushed to Amaravati. It's a vicious fire, has surrounded Amaravati. It is extending itself and growing bigger and wider with every moment. It is swallowing Amaravati and in a few minutes it will swallow the painting it will consume Geetanjali my Geet with it. No I cant let it happen. I can't let anyone to snatch away my Geet from me. None possess that power. Not even this gigantic element of nature can stop Maan Sing Khurana from get united with his love.

I am running towards the Amaravati. Adi tried to stop me but he failed. Everybody is shouting and asking me not to go inside. But I am not listening to them. I need to go there; I need to go there as early as possible. She must be there inside waiting for me. She can't get her freedom without me. She will stay with me; she has to. Is she so restless for her freedom? Kya wo apni mukhti ke liye itna bechain hai... mujhse bhi zada usse apni mukti pyari hai. If yes then she has to obtain it at the price of my life, my death my sacrifice. Meri kurbaani...uski mukti. She will continue in the imprisonment of this world with me, else I will free myself from this mundane with her. She won't be able to evade me, not in this world not in the world beyond this.

I entered inside the Amaravati...

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maan aur geet ka maut krva diya!!!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

maan aur geet ka maut krva diya!!!!!!!!

nice story...

Originally posted by: arushi_05

hi sayanee .😊

this was really awesome .👏

the best end this story can get .😊

when ever i thought about it

i thought ki how will maan get geet

coz if he is udaymaan then he should geet .

but geetanjali is still not mukt then how will it end .

now i found it .

i think geetanjali herself light up the fire .😊

bechara maan . he got mental at he end .

for me maan & geetanjali 's photo both got burnt togther &

the end .

thanx for such an involving story sayanee .

love u for this ss .

if u start another ff or ss .

plz pm me for it .

Originally posted by: seemamary

Loved it, continue soon.

awesome ...