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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
A Mesmerizing story i have ever read...hats off to u...i can see the vision still now in front of my eyes...i had goosebumps ... thank u so much for sharing such a lovely FF with us...actually its beyond fiction...its outstanding , remarkablešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
amazing...i loved it a lot...

maan and geet can never be apart never mind if they are udaymaan and geetanjali...they are always together...

for me maan has entered the haveli grabbed geetanjali's photo and instantly fire fell burning him along with his love's photo...and they are forever united eternally...

"iss duniya mein jaan gawadoon tuje uss duniya mein haasil karloon "
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
SšŸ‘ušŸ‘pšŸ‘ešŸ‘ršŸ‘b...lšŸ‘ošŸ‘všŸ‘e išŸ‘t...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
I am speechless as well as wordless...this chapter is beyond reviewing...Say, you must take writing as your career...and the pictures you chose those are just perfect...

DEATH CAN COME, AND IT CAN GO...

IT CAN NOT TAKE, WHAT I HAD VOWED.

LARGER THAN LIFE, GREATER THAN STORIES...

TIME CAN NOT FADE, OUR MEMORIES.

I HAVE LIVED,LIVED FOR YOUR LOVE...

DEATH HASN'T THE POWER, TO MAKE US APART.

YOUR EYES LOTUS ALIKE, STILL HYPNOTIZES ME...

YOU ARE SAFE IN MY HEART AND ALWAYS WILL BE.

YOUR HAIR DARKER THAN ANY STORM CLOUD...

THOUGH LEFT THE WORLD YOU WILL ALWAYS BE AROUND.

STILL FEEL YOUR SKIN IN MY ARMS...

YOUR LOVE, YOUR MEMORIES WILL NEVER ABANDON.

STILL FEEL YOUR HEARTBEAT IN MY CHEST...

EVEN IN THE NIGHT BREEZE SUN NEVER SETS.

THEY SAY TRUE LOVE DIES NEVER EVER...

YOU ARE IN MY EYES AND WILL BE FOREVER.

I FEEL YOUR SMILE ,IN THE FIRST RAIN...

YOU ARE MY DESTINY, WE WILL MEET AGAIN.

Just few lines from me to say how wonderful this story is...few days ago these lines were just the lines of my mere poem, now they got some meaning... these lines got life...please continue writing.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
awsum ending... we truly have 2 decide if its a tragic ending or a new hope... im lost in between these two...
plz do more maneet ff..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
its truly a saga of love which can evade all the dusty eyes of reality...ā¤ļø
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
OMG !!!! SAYANEE u made me CRY ... 😭😭😭

AWESOME UPDATE GAL ….!!! šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

SWEETIE u knw how much i have liked ur diff concept ... šŸ¤—especially, the way u penned it down ...šŸ‘ the way u worked on the small details shows how much effort u puts in ur writing ...šŸ‘ SWEETIE the way u wrote this story, it looked like a CLASSIC MOVIE …..*KUDOS TO U*šŸ‘

tho, after reading THE END, i think i m hanging on a cliffhanger ...šŸ˜•šŸ˜• my thots r going wild abt what would have happened ….. 🤢 who lighted that fire ??? šŸ˜• did MAAN got sucessful in saving GEETANJALI'S PIC???šŸ˜• and if pic got burned did adi n all peple were able to save MAAN ???šŸ˜• hayeee SAYANEE u made me go crazy gal …... *HEY BABA G ISS SAYANEE NE TOH EXAMS SE BHI ZADA BRAIN USE KARWA DIA AAP KI ANGEL KA*🤪

this SS was just of 3 UPDATES but made very special place in my HEART …... 😳 the LOVE of GEETANJLI for her UDYAMAAN bought tears in my eyes ...😭 she sacrificed her life for her LOVE ... 😭😭😭 sachi aaj k time mein agar koi iss MOHABBAT ka 10% bhi kar le toh bhi baadi baat hai ...🤢 poor MAAN he was fighting wid himself …... Undoubtedly, he was UDYAMAAN …... 😊 thats y he was able to c and feel what UDYAMAAN went through …. i wished UDYAMAAN have visited AMARAVATI once ... which could have made GEETANJLI'S soul to pass on ... 😭

u knw i love HAPPY ENDINGS and after reading THE END i was like feeling so low ...🤢🤢 i was like what to comment ???? šŸ˜• so after 2 days finally i m able to comment …..šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

THANK U SHo0o0o0 MUCH for writing such lovely SS …..šŸ‘ šŸ‘ It was a CLASSIC SAGA of LOVE ...šŸ˜šŸ˜

so, i remember u said u will b soon coming with ur new FF ??? 😳😳 so, when i would b able to read another MASTER PIECE of urs ???? šŸ˜ but, dare u make a SAD ENDING to it ...šŸ˜† i will throw JUTTIS N CHAPPALS to u if u do so …. 🤣

W8NG for ur PM saying NEW FF PART 1 …...
Edited by khansangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: panchaali

I am speechless as well as wordless...this chapter is beyond reviewing...Say, you must take writing as your career...and the pictures you chose those are just perfect...

DEATH CAN COME, AND IT CAN GO...

IT CAN NOT TAKE, WHAT I HAD VOWED.

LARGER THAN LIFE, GREATER THAN STORIES...

TIME CAN NOT FADE, OUR MEMORIES.

I HAVE LIVED,LIVED FOR YOUR LOVE...

DEATH HASN'T THE POWER, TO MAKE US APART.

YOUR EYES LOTUS ALIKE, STILL HYPNOTIZES ME...

YOU ARE SAFE IN MY HEART AND ALWAYS WILL BE.

YOUR HAIR DARKER THAN ANY STORM CLOUD...

THOUGH LEFT THE WORLD YOU WILL ALWAYS BE AROUND.

STILL FEEL YOUR SKIN IN MY ARMS...

YOUR LOVE, YOUR MEMORIES WILL NEVER ABANDON.

STILL FEEL YOUR HEARTBEAT IN MY CHEST...

EVEN IN THE NIGHT BREEZE SUN NEVER SETS.

THEY SAY TRUE LOVE DIES NEVER EVER...

YOU ARE IN MY EYES AND WILL BE FOREVER.

I FEEL YOUR SMILE ,IN THE FIRST RAIN...

YOU ARE MY DESTINY, WE WILL MEET AGAIN.

Just few lines from me to say how wonderful this story is...few days ago these lines were just the lines of my mere poem, now they got some meaning... these lines got life...please continue writing.



thanx dear for dedicating such a beautiful poem to my story ... I am highly obliged ... thanx a lot for giving such a high thought to my SS
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: khansangel

OMG !!!! SAYANEE u made me CRY ... 😭😭😭


AWESOME UPDATE GAL '.!!! šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

SWEETIE u knw how much i have liked ur diff concept ... šŸ¤—especially, the way u penned it down ...šŸ‘ the way u worked on the small details shows how much effort u puts in ur writing ...šŸ‘ SWEETIE the way u wrote this story, it looked like a CLASSIC MOVIE '..*KUDOS TO U*šŸ‘

tho, after reading THE END, i think i m hanging on a cliffhanger ...šŸ˜•šŸ˜• my thots r going wild abt what would have happened '.. 🤢 who lighted that fire ??? šŸ˜• did MAAN got sucessful in saving GEETANJALI'S PIC???šŸ˜• and if pic got burned did adi n all peple were able to save MAAN ???šŸ˜• hayeee SAYANEE u made me go crazy gal '... *HEY BABA G ISS SAYANEE NE TOH EXAMS SE BHI ZADA BRAIN USE KARWA DIA AAP KI ANGEL KA*🤪

this SS was just of 3 UPDATES but made very special place in my HEART '... 😳 the LOVE of GEETANJLI for her UDYAMAAN bought tears in my eyes ...😭 she sacrificed her life for her LOVE ... 😭😭😭 sachi aaj k time mein agar koi iss MOHABBAT ka 10% bhi kar le toh bhi baadi baat hai ...🤢 poor MAAN he was fighting wid himself '... Undoubtedly, he was UDYAMAAN '... 😊 thats y he was able to c and feel what UDYAMAAN went through '. i wished UDYAMAAN have visited AMARAVATI once ... which could have made GEETANJLI'S soul to pass on ... 😭

u knw i love HAPPY ENDINGS and after reading THE END i was like feeling so low ...🤢🤢 i was like what to comment ???? šŸ˜• so after 2 days finally i m able to comment '..šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

THANK U SHo0o0o0 MUCH for writing such lovely SS '..šŸ‘ šŸ‘ It was a CLASSIC SAGA of LOVE ...šŸ˜šŸ˜

so, i remember u said u will b soon coming with ur new FF ??? 😳😳 so, when i would b able to read another MASTER PIECE of urs ???? šŸ˜ but, dare u make a SAD ENDING to it ...šŸ˜† i will throw JUTTIS N CHAPPALS to u if u do so '. 🤣

W8NG for ur PM saying NEW FF PART 1 '...


Angel ur comment make me feel sooo happy ... n I m sorry that u feel lowšŸ˜”... n OMG u r so confused with the endingšŸ˜• ... lots of questions... u can answer it in ur ways... well I m making it easier for u may be fire was an accident ... & may be MAAN was trapped in that fire and as Maaneet_forever or Arushi has said it that Maan got burned with Geetanjali's pic n it results the eternal union of two souls ... or may be he was safe with her pic... in both way its a happy ending no?šŸ˜‰
Edited by sayaneegupta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: maneet_forever

amazing...i loved it a lot...


maan and geet can never be apart never mind if they are udaymaan and geetanjali...they are always together...

for me maan has entered the haveli grabbed geetanjali's photo and instantly fire fell burning him along with his love's photo...and they are forever united eternally...

"iss duniya mein jaan gawadoon tuje uss duniya mein haasil karloon "


thanx dear for such a lovely comment... I loved that u give ur assumption here... n whenever I think about this SS I love to imagine it in this way...😊

"iss duniya mein jaan gawadoon tuje uss duniya mein haasil karloon "

... very well said dear thanx for this beautiful line😊

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