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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: loving_girl
Iam very saddd😭
apne yeh short story kyun banaya?????????
and update soonnn😉

hei dear I am really glad that u r liking it... yaar look at my updates its too long... 3 updates milake it l be a long story😆... but if I drag this story it will lose its charm n mystery I want to maintain ... n I am planning for a long FF after this based on middle age India n "Devdasi pratha"... with my loving Maaneet... I wish u l like it too😊

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khansangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

AWESOME UPDATE GAL !!!! 👏

loved it …..😳 i hope u will make a HAPPY ENDING of this SS …..😃

i want MAANEET together in the END ... plzzz 😳

and i m loving ur SS …😍 plzzz dun end it soon ….. 😭😭

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panchaali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Awsome writing...i knew you have a writer thing in you but i never realized that part is sooo amazing...you proved that the writer thing is no more confined only in your pen...its in your blood and soul and maaneet made it properly explored...the way you mixed udiyamaan and maan's feeling together (at the last part) it gave me goosebums ...you must felt a conflagration in your soul while writing it. Keep it up

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Ishqaan_maaneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

hey awesome update dear

loved the way maan understood the story .

lovely .

ahhh this devender wanted to kill udaymaan .

loved it

thanx for pm .& thank u for such nice & long update .

plz update next part soon.

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Salwa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

hei dear I am really glad that u r liking it... yaar look at my updates its too long... 3 updates milake it l be a long story😆... but if I drag this story it will lose its charm n mystery I want to maintain ... n I am planning for a long FF after this based on middle age India n "Devdasi pratha"... with my loving Maaneet... I wish u l like it too😊

Thanksss

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maneet_forever

@maneet_forever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

amazing...i never realized that the part is over i want to read more and more...u r too good...basically i didn't understand few lines that was in hindi ...but i could feel them...pls cont soon...plzzz write a FF

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810Kankana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

very nice, keep up the gud work :)

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Sreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

awesome... now i'm thinking the same thing... y its a ss...

when Geetanjali whispered in his ear

Tan ek, jaan ek
Apna ho jahaan ek
Aise lipte ruh se ruh
Ke ho jaye imaan ek

the scene was just awesome... it sent chills up my spine...

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ambeern

@ambeern

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

owesome

speechless

fablous

please add me in ur pm list

and do cont soon

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Netz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

its just like magic... yeesss... u hv defintly created a superb magical world... n d love making was both sooo soft and passionate☺️ you should continue d stry dr... dnt just end dis magic...😉 update sooonnn