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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome ff
just luvd it
plzzz add me in ur pm list
i'm eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
dear nina,
first of all, eid mubarak!!

finaly, i was able to read the ff and i have to say, its fabulous!!
the subject of the ff is very different to other ffs which i ever read. in this story, so many people are living a life like hell, lonelyiness, beteyal, pain and wlmuch more. one missunderstanding has cost the life of so much people. everyone has a part in the story which leaded to this riff in their lifes. if they would have spoken about everything openly at the beginning, nothing like that woupd have happen. now, after five years, everyone leads a life on their own and try to forget the past and dont be affected by it. but if you love someone truly, deaply and madly, you cant forget the person your whole life. and if that person is the course of your pain, forgiving that person is much harder.
everyone can make a mistake in a relationship, but if you broke one of the main rules of a relationship which is based on honesty and trust, than it is very hard to forgive. maan and geet have done this big mistake. its both their fault that a relationship of 16 years broke in few seconds. if geet would be honest with maan at the first place and would have told him, that they shared a intimade situation when he was drunk, nithing like that would have happen. if maan would have trusted geet and believed her innocence, it woulnd have happened aggain. so we cant say that one of them is innocent and the other is the only one at fault.

that geet isnt telling maan about riya is right from her piont of view, but not the right thing for riya.
its a bit like when a married couple with kids are divorced. everyone thinks, pour soul, your husband/wife isnt with you any more and you are all alone. but the people who are realy suffering are allways the kids. they have to decide with which of their parents they want to life. but they deserve it to be with both of them. just because the parents dont get along any more, why do the kids have to give up on one of them??
to be one week with the one and the other is no option. if they are with their mother, they miss their dad. if they are with their dad, they miss their mother. that ist the way for a child to be happy. it will for sure also leave some psychical demage for their whole life.

the same is also for riya. if maan gets never to know about her as his daughter and if they will never have a father-child relation very soon, she will always have in mind for the rest of her life, that her dad never loved her and that could also make later problems when she is old enough to sttle down with an own family.

the solution is actualy very easy to settle everything right, but its also as hard for the involved to do it.

if everyone would sit together and talk about everything in a calm athmosphere, the problem would be solved in a metter on few minutes. but noone is ready to listen or to answer to anyone, and at this moment, it looks like impossible to sort it out.


ok, ok, i talked tooo much and that also just rubbish!!

just my pov. dont want to attac anyone with my words, so pls any one who reads this, dont be angry on me.

and nina, after this long comment, im waiting for a maha update!!

so, continue soon dear!!

will be waiting,

Bushra
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

dear nina,
first of all, eid mubarak!!

finaly, i was able to read the ff and i have to say, its fabulous!!
the subject of the ff is very different to other ffs which i ever read. in this story, so many people are living a life like hell, lonelyiness, beteyal, pain and wlmuch more. one missunderstanding has cost the life of so much people. everyone has a part in the story which leaded to this riff in their lifes. if they would have spoken about everything openly at the beginning, nothing like that woupd have happen. now, after five years, everyone leads a life on their own and try to forget the past and dont be affected by it. but if you love someone truly, deaply and madly, you cant forget the person your whole life. and if that person is the course of your pain, forgiving that person is much harder.
everyone can make a mistake in a relationship, but if you broke one of the main rules of a relationship which is based on honesty and trust, than it is very hard to forgive. maan and geet have done this big mistake. its both their fault that a relationship of 16 years broke in few seconds. if geet would be honest with maan at the first place and would have told him, that they shared a intimade situation when he was drunk, nithing like that would have happen. if maan would have trusted geet and believed her innocence, it woulnd have happened aggain. so we cant say that one of them is innocent and the other is the only one at fault.

that geet isnt telling maan about riya is right from her piont of view, but not the right thing for riya.
its a bit like when a married couple with kids are divorced. everyone thinks, pour soul, your husband/wife isnt with you any more and you are all alone. but the people who are realy suffering are allways the kids. they have to decide with which of their parents they want to life. but they deserve it to be with both of them. just because the parents dont get along any more, why do the kids have to give up on one of them??
to be one week with the one and the other is no option. if they are with their mother, they miss their dad. if they are with their dad, they miss their mother. that ist the way for a child to be happy. it will for sure also leave some psychical demage for their whole life.

the same is also for riya. if maan gets never to know about her as his daughter and if they will never have a father-child relation very soon, she will always have in mind for the rest of her life, that her dad never loved her and that could also make later problems when she is old enough to sttle down with an own family.

the solution is actualy very easy to settle everything right, but its also as hard for the involved to do it.

if everyone would sit together and talk about everything in a calm athmosphere, the problem would be solved in a metter on few minutes. but noone is ready to listen or to answer to anyone, and at this moment, it looks like impossible to sort it out.


ok, ok, i talked tooo much and that also just rubbish!!

just my pov. dont want to attac anyone with my words, so pls any one who reads this, dont be angry on me.

and nina, after this long comment, im waiting for a maha update!!

so, continue soon dear!!

will be waiting,

Bushra


Eid Mubarak to you too;D;D
Thaankyou for ur comment;D
I really appreciated it;D;D
I agree with you at many points;D
Glad you got the time to read;D
hope i didnt dissappoint you!!!
Love you loads;D;D
Hope you had an amaazing EID;D;D
Love you;D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shimmerr

dear nina,
first of all, eid mubarak!!

finaly, i was able to read the ff and i have to say, its fabulous!!
the subject of the ff is very different to other ffs which i ever read. in this story, so many people are living a life like hell, lonelyiness, beteyal, pain and wlmuch more. one missunderstanding has cost the life of so much people. everyone has a part in the story which leaded to this riff in their lifes. if they would have spoken about everything openly at the beginning, nothing like that woupd have happen. now, after five years, everyone leads a life on their own and try to forget the past and dont be affected by it. but if you love someone truly, deaply and madly, you cant forget the person your whole life. and if that person is the course of your pain, forgiving that person is much harder.
everyone can make a mistake in a relationship, but if you broke one of the main rules of a relationship which is based on honesty and trust, than it is very hard to forgive. maan and geet have done this big mistake. its both their fault that a relationship of 16 years broke in few seconds. if geet would be honest with maan at the first place and would have told him, that they shared a intimade situation when he was drunk, nithing like that would have happen. if maan would have trusted geet and believed her innocence, it woulnd have happened aggain. so we cant say that one of them is innocent and the other is the only one at fault.

that geet isnt telling maan about riya is right from her piont of view, but not the right thing for riya.
its a bit like when a married couple with kids are divorced. everyone thinks, pour soul, your husband/wife isnt with you any more and you are all alone. but the people who are realy suffering are allways the kids. they have to decide with which of their parents they want to life. but they deserve it to be with both of them. just because the parents dont get along any more, why do the kids have to give up on one of them??
to be one week with the one and the other is no option. if they are with their mother, they miss their dad. if they are with their dad, they miss their mother. that ist the way for a child to be happy. it will for sure also leave some psychical demage for their whole life.

the same is also for riya. if maan gets never to know about her as his daughter and if they will never have a father-child relation very soon, she will always have in mind for the rest of her life, that her dad never loved her and that could also make later problems when she is old enough to sttle down with an own family.

the solution is actualy very easy to settle everything right, but its also as hard for the involved to do it.

if everyone would sit together and talk about everything in a calm athmosphere, the problem would be solved in a metter on few minutes. but noone is ready to listen or to answer to anyone, and at this moment, it looks like impossible to sort it out.


ok, ok, i talked tooo much and that also just rubbish!!

just my pov. dont want to attac anyone with my words, so pls any one who reads this, dont be angry on me.

and nina, after this long comment, im waiting for a maha update!!

so, continue soon dear!!

will be waiting,

Bushra



And plus after your Maha comment..Im deof going to give you a MAHA update;D;D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Danina




And plus after your Maha comment..Im deof going to give you a MAHA update;D;D




will be waiting dear;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome ff dear...
loved it...
read all parts in one go...
simply super...
plzz add me to ur pm list...
continue soon ...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 14:
Their lips were inches away...when Geet's cell rang..her eyes immediately opened..she pushed Maan away and got up..her face was flushed as she answered her phone:
G-Hee..Hello
B-Hello Geet..
G-Brij?
B-Haan aur kaun?
G-Stop calling me..
B-Im coming to meet you..
G-Dont you dare...
B-Too late...turn around..
Geet turned around and her jaw dropped..she saw Brij standing there...
G-What are you doing HERE?
B-Well...I have a contract with KC to work on THIS project...
Geet looked at Maan with accusing eyes and asked:'Is this true?'
M-Yes..Mr.Brij here has offered us a very nice deal..so his company will be working on this project with us...
G-Then im not doing this project...
M-Geet what is the problem?
G-I am cancelling this deal...
B-Oho..Geet aur should i say Mrs.Singhania...whats happened to 'I dont mix personal and proffesional'
G-Brij dont cross your limits...
B-Geet come on..we can have this talk over a cup of coffee...
G-Over my dead body..i am cancelling this deal..and that's final..
B-Geet think before saying something like this...where is your daughter btw?Where is RIYA haan?Im sure she would love to meet me..
G-No..dont Brij...dont..
B-Riya...Maan...Daughter?
M-Mr.Brij what are you saying?
B-Mr.Maan i was just saying Riya is here..you are here...
M-What about the daughter?
B-Well...
Geet saw the glint of evil in his eyes...which scared her to no extents..she knew for the sake of Riya keeping his mouth shut she had to keep this project going...
G-We will discuss the details after lunch..what say Mr.Brij?
B-Sure Mrs.Geet..Will see you both soon...

Maan just started at the both of them..he didnt have a clue of what they were talking about..but he could sense Geet's restlesness when Brij mentioned Riya..he saw
fear in her eyes when Brij spoke..he knew something was wrong..that they knew each other from before but how?
All these thoughts raced his mind...but what ate him up most was the feeling that Riya was in danger due to this man...he saw Geet numb out of fear when Brij took
Riya's name..there was something fishy going on and if it was related to Riya..Maan would find out for sure...
M-Geet you better go have lunch..i will see to some designs then we will discuss the project okay?
G-Hmmm..
M-Geet can i ask you something?
G-Hmm..
M-After lunch can Riya spend some time with me?
G-Why?
M-Well i've promised her something and...
G-Okay..
Maan's heart fluttered in joy at the thought of spending time with Riya...
M-Thankyou..
G-Hmmm...

Geet didnt know why but when Maan asked her to spend time with Riya...she was very happy...her heart jumped in joy..at the thought of Riya spending some time
with her father...but the next moment her heart sank...but Riya would never know Maan was her father...her phone rang once again bringing her out of her thoughts...
she picked it up..
G-Hello..
A-Hello...
G-Haan Arohi bolo..
A-Di..woh i have something to tell you..can you come home early today?
G-What is it?
A-Something important please...
G-Hmmm..i will try okay?
A-Okay...
G-Where are you now?
A-College...
G-Okay..i have to keep bye..
A-Bye...
Geet cut the call and walked to the cafe where she saw Riya sitting...she went and sat beside's her daughter and asked:'Baby what do you want to eat?'
R-Maammaa mujhe chocolate cake khana hai..
G-Baby...you have to eat something healthy na?
R-Hmm..okay i have will a sandwhich..
G-Theek Hai..i promise when we go home...we will have proper lunch okay?
R-Okay mamma..
After having their sandwhiches...Geet said to Riya:'Baby aapko Maan ke cabin ka rasta ata hai?'
R-Haan mamma..ata hai..
G-Okay then you go there i have some work...I will be there in 5 mins okay?
R-Okay...
G-Go baby..
R-Mamma can i ask you something?
G-Hmmm...
R-Maan is my father's name right?
Geet got shell-shocked...she didnt know what to say to this...
G-Ummm...haan woh same names...there are so many people who have the same name..that's it..
R-Mamma..papa se acha toh Maan friend hai..atleast he spends time with me...
Geet's heart broke...tears stung her eyes..she had never wanted her daughter to think like that about her father..but how could she tell Maan about Riya..he would never
believe her would he?If he didnt believe her 5 years ago how would he believe her now?Even if Geet wanted she couldnt forgot the words he spoke about her daughter..
**Flashback**
M-This child is nothing but dirt...this child has no right to live in this world...the child who's father is unknown has no right to come in this world...Just kill the child
you will have a better life without it!!!No one will accept this child...this child is just going to take up space!!
G-Maan...you have said alot about my child...dare you utter another word...
**Flashback ends**
But Maan hadnt stopped there had he..no he had said words such that her heart burnt just by thinking about them...no she couldnt do this..she couldnt give up..she
had decided something and would stick to it...Maan is nothing my life now...nothing...Riya would just have to understand...


Maan was pacing the room waiting for Riya to come...when his cell phone rang...he looked at the caller ID and saw it was Arjun..he picked it up:
M-Hello
A-Hey bhai..
M-What happened?
A-Woh bhai i wanted to talk to you about something...
M-What?
A-Abhi nahi..later
M-Then why did you call now?
A-Woh to tell you to come home early coz i wanted to talk to you..
M-Is it important?
A-Duh bro...
M-Okay i will try..
A-Okay
Maan saw Riya enter and he smiled...Riya rushed to him and said:'Maan friend meri ice-cream?'
Maan handed her the ice-cream and her eyes lit up...seeing that Maan's eyes twinkled..the twinkle they had lost returned...
R-Yayy...this is chocolate my fav!!!
M-Fav??
R-Haaan fav!!
M-What does this mean?
R-Arey buddhu..this is faviourate ka short form..has no one ever thought you this?
M-Where did you learn it from?
R-Rahul uncle...
Maan's blood boiled hearing that guy's name...he was the one who had the audacity to touch Geet..but then he thought Geet is married..if her husband doesnt care who
is he to care?
Riya finished her ice-cream and went to wash her hands and Maan sat there in anger at the thought that Geet had moved on..How?Why?He was seething in anger...thats when
Brij entered with Geet behind him...


Arohi paced the room..thinking how she would tell her Di about Arjun,..how would she react..should she even tell her?Yes she should..but how?Thats when arms encircled her waist
and said:'What are you thinking about?'
Aro-Arjun what are you doing?Someone will come..
Arj-Arohi..this is my room no one will come...
Aro-Nahi Arjun chodo na...
Arj-Nahi waise what were you thinking about?Or should i say what were you worried about?
Aro-Woh...how to tell Di about us..
Arj-It may be easier for you...i have to tell the 'MSK' that i am in love with the sister of the lady he hates..
Aro-Aise maat kaho..
Arj-Kyu doesnt he hate her?
Aro-I dont believe it..
Arj-Why?
Aro-Arjun..woh Di still loves bhai..
Arj-WHAT?
Aro-Haan...she just pretends not to love him but she still does...
Arj-Even bro still loves her..i mean..
Aro-I know what you mean...
Arj-Its all our fault..
Aro-OUR?
Arj-Okay mine...i convinced bro that Geet was hiding something..but i didnt know what she was hiding..
Aro-You put doubt in his heart...
Arj-You could have explained it to Geet right?
Aro-Excuse me..after all that Maan bhai said about Riya how can you even think about that?
Arj-RIYA?Who's she?
Aro-Di's daughter...
Arj-What Geet's DAUGHTER??WHEN?HOW?
Aro-Arjun you dont know Geet Di and Maan bhai had a child?
Arj-WHAAATTT????
Aro-Calm down i will tell you the whole story from our point of view..
Arj-Okay..
And Arohi started the story...


Geet saw Maan sitting on the sofa..he was not at all paying attention to the details...he was just staring at her with blazing eyes...she could feel his gaze burn her but
she kept quiet...she was very nervous as to what Brij would say to Maan...she didnt want him to say anything but?When she heard Brij say:
B-Geet...how old is Riya?
Geet gulped she knew what he was asking and why he was asking...
G-4 years..why?
B-Nothing just like that...did you have her after or before your marriage with Yash?
Geet gulped she felt like killing this guy but she had control for her daughter's sake!!
G-Mr.Brij this is a buisness meeting not a personal meeting...
B-Oh yes ofcourse...but i was wondering what is Riya's passport...or birth certificate name?
Geet's eyes widened in fear..did he by any chance have a copy or something...shit she thought she should have put Yash's name as Riya's father but no she had to go and
put Maan's name..and if Brij showed Maan anything what would she do??
B-Geet..what happened?
G-Umm..not..nothing..

Brij smirked evily..his plan was working..soon Geet would be so angry she will herself spill the beans...
And then her life will once again be destroyed..and then after a few years he would come back again to tell Maan the one secret that would finish Geet Handa...

Maan was getting frustrated at the scene infront of him...he saw the fear in Geet and he saw the evil intentions of Brij but what he didnt uderstand was what was going on?
All he knew it was related to Riya..his princess...his thoughts stopped..HIS PRINCESS?What was he thinking?He had grown too attached to the kid...

Geet's anger and fear was rising by the minute...she didnt know what to do..she was just thinking all this when Brij asked her:'What is Riya's full name?'
G-Riya Sighania..
B-Riya's full name please?
G-Riya Sighania...
B-Riya's full name?
Geet's anger was over the top and she didnt realize what she was about to say..
G-Riya Sighania..
B-Riya's full name please...
Geet stood up in anger and screamed:'RIYA MAAN SINGH KHURANA'
G-HAPPY?YES THATS HER FULL NAME...SHE IS RIYA SINGH KHURANA DAUGHTER OF MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!

Precap-Riya gone?
Maan..Riya woh..
I love you Maan...


Okay guys suckish?
Big time right?
And guys when i wrote this it looked so looonggg..hope it is long...but im sure longer then before..
so did you guys like Geet telling Riya is Maan's daughter?
Well..dont get too happy...we still have to see what it shapes out to be!!
well jope you guys like it;D
Do give me your feedbacks...would love to know what you think;D
Please ignore any spelling and grammatical errors...
Enjoy..and
dont forget to press the LIKE button and COMMENT
and all my readers a HUGEEE THANKYOU..
I love you all;D
and i read and appreciate each and every comment;D;D
Sorry for late update was busy!!!
Edited by Danina - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
atlast she couldn't stop herself to say that riya is her daughter continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved riya with maan
poor geet
h8 brij
biy sooo happy bcuz of him da truth is out
cant wait 4 more
interesting precap
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late reply
read all the missing updates in one go
awesome
thanx for pm
continue soon

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