Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prologue...
She had left him today..after 16 years of being together..she had left him..that
too with a huge responsibility...what would he do now?

She stepped in her new life today...she walked in the city..the city of dreams...
From today she had a new life...a new start..she breathed in this air..this was a
breath of new air for her...


Okay guys tell me if i should continue...plus character sketch will be coming up soon but first tell me...should i continue...and yeah i know i already am writing an FF...but i promise i will update both of them regularly...this story is nothing like my other FF...
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Prologue and CS-Page 1
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Sorry guys the links are messed up..the page numbers are correct..but the links are kinda screwed!!
sorry!!


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MystiqueDew thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
Congrats on new FF🥳

nice ...do cont.

PS: between update & note do leave some space.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great prologue plz continue i think that both were childhood lovers and she left him when they grew old
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -dia-

Congrats on new FF🥳


nice ...do cont.

PS: between update & note do leave some space.


thankyou...
okay:)

and sorry about that..i write it all together..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Character Sketch:

Maan Singh Khurana-26 years old'.He was an angry young man...and the owner of

The huge business empire Khurana Constructions...He was a rude'.emotionless man'..due

to bitter past experiences...He only cared and loved his family'his brother...and

one of his best friend's:Armaan Malik...Whatever he wanted he had got'.but only using the right way'.his rules were never to be broken not even by him and his number 1 rule was:

Women are useless'.never care for them!

Geet Handa-23 years old'just finished her degree in architecture'Had a very fun and loving nature until one bitter experience turned her into a ruthless young girl'who thought only with her mind'.she just cared for her family and friends only'.for others she was a heartless lady'.

Her morals and values were everything for her'but she had one rule...:Never trust men'.they only meant pain and betrayal..She only trusted one man in her life'her best friend:Rahul Garewal'

Arjun Khurana-23 years old'he was a man with no emotions'.just like his elder brother'he just hated girls''he worked with his brother as the CEO of KC'.he loved and respected his family very much'.his elder brothers words were an order for him'..For him girls were just pain and hurt'..but he had one best friend:Shilpa Malhotra

Arohi Handa-She was 20 years old'currently studying at Delhi Private'.She was a girl who believed in love'.and its magic until what had happened to her sister'.which made her believe love was nothing except what caused pain'..she still was loving and caring but had made a barrier around her which only one person had been able to cross all her borders:Siddant Malhotra'..her best friend'..

Siddant Malhotra(Sid)-21 years old'a fun loving guy'.he was a huge prankster'.but he was good at heart'.He was the best friend of Arohi'..he really cared for..but he was one guy who would never fall in love'coz the perfect girl was just not there''for him'.He had one sister who he loved till the utmost core'.

Rahul Garewal-A chilled out guy'who was good at nature but a huge playboy'.he didn't believe in the stupid emotion'.LOVE'he had only one best friend:Geet Handa'..

He was the MD of Garewal industries'.

Armaan Malik-26 years old'.Senior Doctor at Sanjeevani currently married to Shilpa Malhotra..he was a good natured ..funny guy'.loved his wife to bits'best friend of Maan'.but a huge flirt..

Shilpa Malhotra-Married to Armaan Malik..senior doctor at sanjeevni'24 years of age'She was a sweet girl'she was a non-stop chatter box'.but she loved her husband like anything'.Best friend of Arjun Khurana'

Okay guys here was the character sketch'more characters will be introduced as the story goes on but these are the main characters here'.

This is a story'..Betrayal and Hurt can change a person's life'.but when love enters a broken friendship...how it all changes'.

It is a journey of people'from friendship to hatred and then to love'

But life doesn't always give a second chance'and when it does'how will they know?

Will these people grasp the happiness which is knocking at there door or drown in the pain which has overtaken their heart?

Guys this FF will also portray the feelings of all the characters mentioned above but the main focus will be Maaneet...

Should I continue?

If yes plz to tell me...

Edited by Danina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Brilliant Character sketch!!!

nice intro

cont. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great concept
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love d it
😛 😛 😛
can continue writing
am waiting for ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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on your new ff
love the prologue and character sketch
looking forward to the first part
cont soon please
thanks for the pm!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CONGRATS on the new FF.,...🥳

loved the prologue n character sketch...

amazing...

do continue soon...

waiting to read their story...

thnx for PM...

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