Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5) - Page 44

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanksss Rakhi...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

As usual a wonderful update pri !! Thank you mana...

bike racing ke baaremein main bhi jyaada nahi jaanti( except what i saw in movies like DHOOM)...but haan...padhke maza aaya ! mujhe bhai se puchna pada tha ke...bike jump kaise karrti hai...!!! phir bhai ka xpression dekhne layak tha ha ha ha...😆

N then that whole Rajeev prisha scene(flashback waala)...too good ! thank you...

mujhe toh pahle hi andaza ho raha tha ki woh prisha ki maami hi hogi...ab kya kare...hum dono ek dusre ka dimaag jo hijack karte rehte hai...😆 aur tune yahan mera hijack kiya...par koi na...main toh hamesha ki tarah spl scene ya toh spl song hi tere dimag se hijack karungi...😆

Yeh Rajeev kya jab dekho tab drink karte hue glass ke uss paar se Free ki movie dekhte rehta hai?😛 ab free ki movie hai toh dekhne me kya jata hai uss ka...😆
Kisi din prisha ko pata chal gaya na... ! 😛 khush ho jayegi...😆

N dat car scene...well...achanak se woh khadoos itna romantic ho raha tha...mujhe toh pata hi tha jaroor woh chudail kahise dekh rahi hogi... oye...jyada bhav matt kha...maine tujhe iss bare me pahle se hi bata diya tha...😆

aisehi achchi bachchi bani reh balike...aur jaldi jaldi update kiya kar... mera aashirwaad tere saath hai...😛 isi baat ka darr hai yaar...ki tere aashirwaad ki wajah se main kahan se kahan pahunch jayungi...😆

update soon...😊

Thanksss Mana...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

oh teri 😲 mathur saab good to see u back soon 😆😆 raat ko to hi mile the TV pe ☺️ 😍 ... main bhi mili thi...😃
on a serious note 😊 thanku for an unexpected early UD 😃... isi liye iss baar late update karr rahi hun...😆

Raj on bike 😍 ...😆😆 ek film yaad aagayi 😉😆... the cool rider 😳😳...
Raj won ... yippieee ... maine nahi dekhi yeh movie

Ashwin 😡😡 how dare he 😡 Raj ki trophy todi 😡😡... villian hai yaar... apni duty toh karrta hi rahega na...😆
but good Rajeev gave him back . ...my hero 👍🏼...& brave boy too 😳😳 he saved aunty's life 👏 👏👏...beech mein prisha ko heart attack zaroor de diya 😆😆😆😆 "ear rings nikalo " 🤣(sorry emotional scene mein i am laughing)😆😆 main likhte waqt hass rahi thi...toh tum padhte hue hassi...toh kya ho gaya...

such a small world.😛😛..aunty toh prisha ki mami nikli 😆...thank god she is fine 😃... ab Raj ne bachaya hai toh fine toh hongi hi na...

Rajeev-prisha first hug 😍 😆 ...Flashback mein 😛... present situation i think it will be a little later 😛😛 pata nahi...

just a wild guess... it gonna be happening party at club 😛😛...since mitali is there too 😆😆 aage aage dekho hota hai kya...😉

continue soon 😃



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Thanksss Purnima...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanksss Monika...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

arre yaar..sharam karo tum dono... waah...kya kahne tere...kiya-dhara tera...aur sharam kare hum dono...

paraayi jagah mein tum dono mil kar meri buraayi kar rahe ho..iss me kya hain...hum girls hain...aur woh bhi DDPA ke...hum toh kahin bhi kabhi bhi suru ho jate hain...😆
kam se kam meri fic ke thread mein ghus kar buraai karlo agar karni hai to...free mein meri publicity kar rahe ho yahan par😆😆 yehi toh hum DDPA memb ki speciallity hai yaar...😆
matlab agar main ye padti nhn to mujhe kabhi pata hi nhn chalta ki tum dono mere baare mein kitna acha acha sochti ho😳 hum sab ke bare me achha achha sochte hain...kyoun ki hum schhe bachhe hain...subut toh tune dekh hi liya...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

comments part 7...

So prisha is in Chandanpur... yupe...n for Rajeev only...😃
Loved the way Arjun talked to Ashwin and Prisha was even better... Prisha to Ashwin ko sabak sikha rahi hai...

Hated the way Ashwin was looking at Prisha thank God Rajeev nahin tha warna uski pitai pakki thi i am sure... ha ha ha...sahi hai...tabhi morcha Prisha ne sambhal liya...😆

Loved it wen she damaged Ashwin car... bass trailor dikhaya Prisha ne use...😆

Prisha is crying wen she finds out abt Dev and Raj was observing her carefully... She is too shocked that Dev committed suicide... Arjun n Prisha relationship is sweet...sayad raj ko ye dekhna tha ke Prisha abhi bhi wohi hai...ya badal chuki hai...

liked it wen Raj tells Arjun to call him rajeev... Best was wen he asks him to talk to Ashwin the way Prisha talked to him... Rajeev bass ek game khel raha hai...samne koi bhi ho...wo use maat dena chahta hai...n personally wo Arjun ko pasand karrta hai...

Prisha is crying for Dev... and Rajeev sees her and complains to him why he left him... Both of them were really close ... Rajeev ki life me Dev kafi mayne rakhta tha...

So Rajeev can watch Prisha wenever he wants to thru the glass window... tabhi toh apne bagalwale room me rakha hai uss ko...

Felt bad for both Rajeev n prisha both are sad for Dev but unable to share there grief with anyone... ab rajeev yehi nahi chahta toh kya karr sakte hain...

So Mohitjee has found someone to whom he can talk as 'SUPERBUG' ie Rajeev is to busy... loved the name... 'SUPERBUG'...name...maine yun hi likh liya tha...par chalo...yeh sab ko pasand aa gaya...n hit bhi ho gaya...😛

Mitali thinks Rajeev is hers and someone will take him away let her live in her fantasy world... As Rajeev hates her and Ashwin he is only pretending to be close so that he can find out abt Dev's death... Hmmm...abhi toh baht kuch baki hai...

So mitali has arrived... yupe...aayi hai toh kuch na kuch toh baht hi achha hoga uss ke sath...😛


Thanksss Dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Priya Hiieee Suhana...

Update was really gud.👏👏👏 I am loving this story like anything.😊 Thank you...😳

Dev ki emotionla blackmailing kaam to aa gayi but Raj ke ek punch ke baad😆😆😆 dev ko her baat ACTION me samjhani paddti hai...😆he loves him so much that he can't even bear the thought of loosing him.I can very well imagine that how Raj must b feeling after Dev's death.and that is the main reason why he wants to punish his murderers at any cost. Raj ne apni zindagi me Dev ko ek baht hi ahem role de rakha tha...tabhi wo Dev ka uss se yun bichadna bardast nahi karr pata...
Bike race to Raj ko hi jeetni this..I knew it from the start.😃😃 obvious hai yaar...writer jo Rajeev ki suppoter thi toh race toh use hi jeetni thi na...😆
Ashwin really deserves to b in jail..How cud he behave like that but phir tabhi to tumne usko gorrilla se compare kiya hai😆😆 haan...ab ja kar tum ne samjha...sahi reason...😆
Khair Dev ki izzat bach gayi Nupur ke aage😆😆😆 haan...ye bhi hai😆...vese Nupur bhi toh yehi chahti thi...
Ashwin ki wajah se Prisha ki mami ka accident ho gaya par Raj ne bahut intelligence dikhayi.he not only admitted her in hospital but also bought her medicines and injection so that her treatment can start.. aur uss ke liye uss ne sahi jagah se udhar liya...😆
Prisha was so shocked when Raj asked for her ear-rings😲😲😲 bechare ko woh khud hi utrane bhi pade..😆😆 aur nahi toh kya karrta...Prisha toh use bass dekhne me hi busy reh gayi thi...😆
Raj was a bit shocked to know that the woman he saved was infact Prisha's mami. ab use pata pehle se hota...toh fruits n Horlicks ke sath unhe ghar chodta...par afsoos use baad me pata chala...😆
Mohitji was so proud of Raj and Dev...😃😃😃 ab aise bachhe hain unn ke toh proud feel toh karrne hi chahiye...
That hug was so cute between Prisha nad Raj..she was greatful to him for saving her mami while Raj was a littele speechless coz he didn't knew how to react.😃😆 aur iss hug par uss ka reaction bhi padh lena...next part me...😆
Prisha was not happy at the idea of going to the club but she had to obey Raj's orders. ab kya kare...bichari deal jo sign kiya hai uss ne...
Raj was busy drinking and looking at her.I think he defintely has some feelings for her..😊 ab yeh toh SAYAD next part me tumhe thoda sa jhalak mil bhi jaye...😉
Prisha was not happy to see Rj drinking but uske answer ke baad usko kuchh na kehna hi theek laga.😆😆 ab raj agar aise rply karega...Prisha ko toh chup hona hi hai na...😆
I think Raj ne intentionally car mein Prisha ke sath itna intimate behave kiya.he knew that Mitali was watching him..he wants to torture her and he is definetely succeeding.😊😊 yupe...raj ne intentionally ye kiya tha...
Pls continue soon
Bye

Thanksss Suhana...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

For Part # 6

Uff...wid each part I am feeling more n more for Rajeev...now its quite clear that Dev died becoz of those two...😡...am too angry to even name them. From now on...I'll try not to take their names...😡😡😡😡 I am just too disgusted!! okay...😆...matt lo unn ka naam...kisi aur tarike se baat karrte hain...'Maan lo Ashwin X hai aur Mitali Y'...ab thik hai na...😆

And I just cant feel enough for Rajeev...main to imagine bhi nahi kar sakti usse kitni takleef ho rahi hogi...😭😭 ye toh ho hi nahi sakta...rajeev ko le kar ke tum kuch imagine na karooo...NOPE...possible hi nahi hai...

Arjun ke sath uska flashbak achha tha...am slightly happy that Arjun is there wid him...thought he might not be the frnd Dev was...he is still a gr8 support for Raj...😊 And at the end of that drive...I smiled knwing that Rajeev had a smile on his face...😊 chalo...aap ke chehre pe mushkaan dekh kar hum bhi bade khush ho gaye...

And Rajeev ke Prisha ko laane ka reason kaafi hadh tak clear hai...at least we can see the relevance...😳... ha ha ha...tumhe toh sab pata hota hai...

Aur haan...the flashbak wid the bike scene...again a hearty one...loved it..😳...Rajeev is just too awesum!! Dev ko bike chalane diya...😆😆...and then Mahatma Gandhi...😆😆...even Yamraaj ke paas to Gada bhi nahi hai...😆😆...all the lines were cracking me up...A lovely part indeed Priya...thanks!! 😃
Thank you sweety...😛

Thanksss Sumi...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

For Part # 7

I am loving this Rajeev-Arjun thing...😊...kaafi sweet hai. Dev ki kami to puri nahi kar sakti tum...but u being the frnd of an Acchi Bacchi (ahemz)...brought in Arjun to reduce the sorrow a lil bit...😳 gud girl...😊 arey waah...aaj kal sab mujhe 'good Girl' keh rahe hain...me sooo happy...😃

And talking abt Prisha's entry...well its sad that bechari ko ate hi ek bandar se milna padha...😡...but usne jo kiya badhiya kiya!! 😆😆 Rajeev's reaction to that was a treat to imagine...😳😆😉 rajeev jo chahta tha wohi ho raha tha...😉

Waise I understood ki tumne mirror and glass se kya samjhaya...hehe...I guess sabhi samajh gaye the...😊...& yeah...I like the song u used...in fact...it had been my fav for a while..😳😳...actually na...wo song toh the greatest serial kissier Emran Hashmi par picturised kiya gaya tha n kafi steamy scenes bhi the sayad uss me...mene nahi dekhi thi...bass trailor dekha tha...n pura song suna tha...aur mujhe iss ka lyrics sunn kar laga yeh song yahan thik baithega...par pata nahi mere readers kaise react kare...😕U described the scene really well...and like the connection btwn Rajeev-Prisha!! In fact...I like the subtle connection btwn them...😳 dekha 'achhi Bachhi' se dosti karrne se mera kitna faida hua...meri sari batain woh samajh jati hai...😆

And wo dono nonsense ppl...I wud so love to see them in agony...I really hope...Rajeev unhe bahut tarpayega...😡...as aaj bhi Rajeev jab Dev ki tasveer se baat kar raha tha...I felt so damn bad...😭... raj ki life me wo kafi mayne rakhta tha...aur aaj bhi rakhta hai...

Wud love to read the next scene...lekin tym is betraying me...der baj gaye hai raat ke...so me leaving now...😳...kal phirse aaungi...😆😆... arey tum roz itni raat tak jaagti ho kya...???

P.S. Sorry for the awfully short comment...cant help it...😳Confused arey na... MAST tha ek damm...😃

Thanksss Sumi...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

amazin fic..read it today ...lovin every bit of it...Thank you...😃

m just curious abt one thing tht in d end of first or second chapter u mentioned raj villain bhi hai...coz d hints u r throwin in d story is a bit predictable nd i hav read all ur fics...u r never ever predictable ur stories r full of turns nd twists...coz acc to d hints u r droppin ashwin nd maitli r d reason for dev's murder yup i knw its a murder nd not a suicide ...but d villain lyn is creatin havon in my mind... okay...ab main sab kuch clearly bol rahi hun...!!! jaisa ki aap ne padha raj thoda sa argnt type ka hai...!!! par wo iss fic me villian hai ka matlab yeh hai ke...wo thoda grey shade me hai...!!! uss ki puri life gussa n nafrat se bhara hua hai...!!! isi liye uss ka character thoda alag likhne ki try karr rahi hun...aur maine iss fic me Villians ko jyada scope nahi diya...!!! isi liye maine wo lines likhe the ki Rajeev iss me main villian hai...!!! hope ki aap samajh gayi hongi...!!! n agar phir bhi kuch doubt ho...toh bindas puchne ka...😃
nd i luv d humor in ur writin...i literary laugh out loud nd ppl arnd me thinktht m mad ha ha ha...Thank you...yeh toh mere liye compliment hi hua na...bhale hi log aap ko mad samjhe...😆😃

ps updt soon

Thanksss Tina...😃

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