Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5) - Page 45

Originally posted by: spvd

part 9
hello GG (good girl) Priya... par iss baar main late hun...SORRY...😔
nice part...Thank you...😃
so much past in this... yupe...
Ashwin and Mitali a piece of advice, GET A LIFE... par unhe acchi batain sunayi kahan deti hain... woh toh raj se peet karr hi maanege...😆
Raj taught a good lesson to Ashwin... aur bhi kuch lessons sikhayega...kyoun ki apne rajeev sir ko sabak sikhana achha lagta hai...
how i wish he had sent Ashwin to jail then itself... hmmm...aap ki dua sayad kabul ho jaye...😉
so Mitali is having a watch on Raj and Prisha... yupe...uss ki nazar hamesha jo raj par rehti hai...aur raj...jo hamesha...Mitali ko acche acche scenes bhi dikhata hai...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

For Part # 8

Once again a beautiful part...😃...its actually incredible that u manage to bring in such beautiful light moments in this fic which is rather tragic...😳 Thank you...

Firstly, Rajeev...❤️...I love him!! 😳😆 le...iss me naya kya hai...😆

Haan...abhi UD ki baat karte hai..😆😆toh ab tak kya baat karr rahi thi...😆...unn bandaro ko pareshan dekh kar mujhe thodi khushi hoying...Prisha achha attitude jhaad rahi hai...😳...aisi ladkiyan mujhe pasand hai jo apne hero ke alawa sabko attitude dikhaye...😆😆 Rajeev ko bhi wo kuch dikhane wali hai aage...!!! arey na attitude nahi...kuch aur...😉😕

Arjun's character is really nice...liked his scenes wid Prisha...😃...and so he loves Nupur...😳...his dialogues were really funny...😳😃 & Nupur is a police officer...nice!! Suits to her persona..😆 Arjun n Nupur ki ki train abhi tak chali nahi hai...properly...par jaldi hi unn ke scenes bhi aayenge...😆

And well, my fav flashbak...😆😆...shuru me hi hassa diya...Bike ko baccha hua...😆😆😆😆😆...🤣...chalo me eager for the race...hope tumne next part me include kiya hai...😳 ha ha ha...bachha wala scene toh maine avayi add karr liya tha...par yeh scene toh hit ho gaya...😆

And yes...its a very well written part...Rajeev ke character ko achhese depict kar rahi ho tum...me loving it...😳😃... thank you AB😃...sab aap hi ka aashriwaad hai...😆

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

For Part # 9

Hehe...finally I am here for the last updated part...😳 he he he...haan finally...

Pehle race ki baat karte hai...Rajeev ke logics achhe the reagrding why he doesnt want to participate in the race...😆...lekin phir Dev ki wajah se usne hissa liya and jeetna to usse tha hi..😉😃...rajeev ka toh sab kuch achha hota hai...sirf logic hi kyoun...😆

But then gorilla ne apni aukad dikha di and caused that accident......achha hua Rajeev ne apna dimag chalaya and sab kuch sahi ho gaya...😳 Usne Prisha se ear ring bhi le li..😆...achha kiya!! 😃😆 Didnt I say he is SMART!! 😳😳 ab main kya karun tumhara Sumi...!!! Raj ne zabardasti Prisha se ear rings le li...tumhe thoda shocked hona chahiye tha...par tum uss ki iss me bhi tarif karr rahi ho...meri tarah...😆

And well...Prisha ne usse hug bhi kiya...ahemz...😳...lekin Priya jee jealous ho gayi and scene rok diya...😆😆...abhi jaldi se continue karna...😳 nahi karr payi...mere sir ne mere sar par Hindusthani classical music ka concert rakh diya tha...so main late ho gayi...

And talking abt present...😳😳...I loved the line "tum mere sath nahi...tab main tumhare sath rahunga"...😳...and car scene was nice...Rajeev in fact complimented her...😲😆...mujhe to yakeen nahi ho raha tha...😆 aage aur bhi baht kuch hai...sayad wo bhi tumhe yakeen na aaye...😆

And yeah...Rajeev and uska ulta jawab...awesum hai. Even I find it hard to answer any1 when asked how far is sum place...😆😆...abhi Raj ka jawab pata hai na...wahi kahungi ab se...😆😆 main toh yehi kehti hun hamesha se ki...'apni wristwatch par nazar rakho...jab hum pahunch jayenge toh main bata dungi...tum apni ghadi dekh lena...phir tumhe pata chal jayega ki kitna time lagta hai'...😆

Do continue soon...😳...& thanks for the lovely part!! 😳 Thank you...

Originally posted by: tina_1234

plzz try to updt sooner

Originally posted by: danish1

nice update

Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome part

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Comments part 8:

Dear loved the part... thank you...

Best was the way prisha talked to Rajeev in front of Mitali loved her attitude... Mitali needs this treatment... yupe...tabhi toh prisha ne apni zuban saaf ki...😃

Loved the way Rajeev defended Prisha ... This is the reason he has called Prisha here to get back at Mitali and Ashwin so that he can take revenge from them for what they did to Dev... rajeev ke dimag me kya chal raha hai kisi ko nahi pata...par mujhe pata hai...😆

So prisha has started her work... She too understands how much Rajeev is missing Dev... haan...wo janti thi ke rajeev ki life me Dev kitna imp tha...

so both Ashwin is planning to hire a detective ... He doesnt know rajeev is much smarter than them... par yeh baat unhe abhi tohde hi na pata hai...!!! unhe toh abhi bat kuch pata chalnewali hai...😉

I dont know Mitali ko apne aur rajeev ko lekar itni bari galatfahmi kaise hai... wo bass hasil karrna chahti hai raj ko...aur iss k liye wo kuch bhi karr sakti hai...

Loved Arjun and prisha's conversation regarding Arjun's love ... So he is in love with nupur who is a cop... haan...aur unn ki love story abhi tak patri par aayi nahi...😛

So rajeev is in touch with Nupur... I can understand what prisha must be feeling seeing her friend and unable to meet her... Prisha ki apni mazburi hai...

Arjun is so sweet the way he makes Rajeev eat his food... Arjun baht care karrta hai rajeev ki...

Flashback was fun... thank you...😃

loved Dev's dialogue 'Hamari bike ko bacha hua hai'... So nice of mohitjee to get Dev another bike... Dev hamesha se ek fun loving guy tha...n Mohit jee use bhi raj jitna hi pyar karrte the...

mohitjee telling them not to fight and Rajeev answer was superb ... Hum sab bahar hee nipta kar aayenge... he he he...rajeev bhi kuch aisa hi tha bachpan me...😆

So Dev wants Rajeev to participate in the race against ashwin uff gorilla.. Ashwin's name is too good Gorilla... rajeev ne diya hai toh achha toh hoga hi...😆

Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

hey prii...Hiieee...arey yaar...apna bhi naam batane ka zara taklif karr do...😃

nice update...parh k maza agya.. Thank you...😃
oh dev bhi na...itni senti dialogue mrta hai...acha kiya raj nai jo aik punch mara...😊😊😊 senti dig bolta hai tabhi toh raj use punch marrta hai...😛
dun know much about racing but raj ki entry bht achi lagi black t shirt wah wah n helmet uff just imagine k wo helmet utar rha hai...oh woww kitna handsome lg rha hoga😍😍😍😍...wo toh hai...infact uss scene ko type karrte waqt main bhi kuch yehi imagine karr rahi thi...😉

wah jee kia baat hai raj ki...n ye to hna hi tha gorilla ko o harna hi tha 👏👏👏👏 ...but ye nupur jo keh rhi thi k mje to raj ki jeet dekhni hai...to ab kia aik aur scene to nhai haina?😕😕😕 arey na...aur koi scene nahi hai...Bass Raj race jeet jaye...yehi chahti thi Nupur...😃
and the way raj helped prisha mami was too good...how he use his mind in hospital just to start the treatment... 👏👏👏.. Banda intelligent hai toh kaam bhi kuch waisa hi karega na...😃
plese next part main flashback wala scene complete ke daina...adha adhora chor k curiosity barh jaii hai...😛😛😛 thik hai...pakka...next part me wo scene complete karungi...😛
n ye raj ko koi aur kaam nahi hai...bus prisha ko dekhtahi rehta hai...kisi din ghortai hortai mirror main hole na hojai 😆😆😆😆 nahi hoga...wo raj hai aur uss ki ankhen masaallha...subhanallha...baht khubshurat hai...par pakki baat yeh hai ki wo laser machine nahi hai jo hole ho jayega...😆!!! haan uss ki nazar jarur hai...jiss ki wajah se wo her kisi inshan ko achhe se pehchan ne ki koshish karrta hai...
the car scene was a cute one...ye inqilab kaisai aya...zaror metali ko dekha hoga raj nai... haan...tabhi toh inquilab aa gaya...😆
kafi bak bak hogai... arey na...aur bhi chaho toh karr sakti ho...mujhe maza aata hai...😛

now cont soon

take care

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hi priya😊 hiieee Shreya...😃

wonderful update👏👏 Thank you...😃

and a very awesome flashback👏 😊 👏 Thankss again...😃

dev ka aisa emotional blackmailing dekh ke to mujhe laga ki agar thodi der bhi usne ye blackmailing ki to raj ko to koi asar nahi hoga lekin mujhe rona aa jayege😆 😆 😆 tumhe kyoun rona aa jayega...wo toh rajeev ko senti karr raha tha...😆kuch bhi karke usne raj ko bike race ke liye mana hi liya aur raj jab maan hi gaya tha to uska amar se harne k to koi sawal hi nahi uthta hai😉 😉 😛 Amar nahi yaar...Ashwin...

aur dekha na raj race jeet bhi gaya 👏 👏 👏 aur wo gadha amarachcha hua haar gaya 😡 😡 😡 lekin apna gussa aur khunnas bechare dev aur us trophy per nikali usne😡 😡 🤢 usko chot bhi aayi aur wo ttrophy bhi toot gayi 😒... idiot amar😡 🤢 🤢 wo bracelet le ker bhi bhaag raha tha achche hua raj ne usse leli😛 😉 😛 raj ko toh leni hi thi...akhir wo uss ne Dev ke liye jeeti thi...

but iss sab chakkar mein prisha ki mamiji ka accident ho gaya raj se 😔 Raj se nahi Ashwin se accident hua yaar...!!! lagta hai kafi disturbed ho...tabhi tum kuch ajeeb sa likh rahi ho...baat kya hai...sab thik toh hai na...

lekin wo log nahi jaante the ki yehi prisha ki mamiji hain😕 😕 😕

lekin hospital mein raj ne sabkuch bohot achchi tarah se handle kiya👏 😊 😊aur apna dimag zaada lagaya jisse ki medication jaldi shuru ho jaaye mamiji ki 😆 😛 👍🏼 ab raj dil ka bhi toh achha hi hai na...

prisha sach mein kaafi sad si lag rahi thi jab use sabkuch pata chala jiski wajah se raj ke bina kuch kahe hi apni feelings ko uske saath share kiya usne😔 😔 😭 prisha bass...kisi se apni baat kehna chahti thi n use laga Raj sahi inshan hai...

ab present mein aate hain😆 😆 😆 kyoun nahi...aa jayo...

smart boy side glass mein se prisha ko dekh bhi raha tha aur sunn bhi raha tha ... thodi si naaraz prisha ko bhi dekha hoga usne aur suna bhi hoga tio i am confused ki wo uss time kya soch raha hoga jab prisha apni badbad mein busy thi club mein jaane ke liye 😉 😆 😕 confused toh main bhi hun...😆

ab mujhe samjh mein nai aa raha ki kaun sa emticon use karun jab usne suna hoga wo sab 😆 😆 😆 waise bhi abhi bohot saare use kar liye nahi 😆 😆 😉 raj ke emotions toh waise bhi kamm bahta aate hain...kyoun ke use apne ander sab kuch daba kar rakhne ki aadat hai...toh tum koi bhi emoticon bhej sakti ho...

mujhe samajh mein nahi aata jab raj ka nature hi aisa hai matlab shaant aur alag rehne waala to wo kyun use akdu , ghamandi and etc etc kehti hai wo to jaantu hi hai ki raj kaisa hai phir use kya problem hai yaar raj to raj hai na 😆 😉 😆 par uss ladki ko kaise samjhaya jaaye 😆 😕 😆 Prisha aisi nahi hai na...toh use lagta hai ki raj ko normal logo ki tarah behave karrna chahiye...par raj normal inshan thode hi na hai...wo spl hai na...😉😆

last waala scene to ... haaayyy 😳 😍 ☺️ atleast kuch to phir se feel hua dono ko itne saalon baad 😳 😊 😊 picture abhi baki hai mere dost...😆

lekin madam ji sorry sherni ji last mein uss bewakoof mitali ko ghusaane ki kya zaroorat thi achche scene mein ye jhatka dena important tha kya 😡 😆 😆 yupe...tabhi toh raj ne wo scene kiya...!!! kyoun ki uss ne Mitali ko wahan dekh liya tha...😉

chalo ab jaldi aur achcha waala update likho jisme sirf prisha aur raj hon aur wo bhi bina unke differences ke ... understood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😉

hmmm...samajh gayi...infact next part me jyada scene sirf unho dono ka hai...😉

chalo bohot saari badbad ki maine ab tum shuru karo... are nahi badbad nahi apne update ko post karne ki baari 😆 😆 😆 bass rples khatam hote hi update post karungi...aur uss me tumhe Prisha ki badbad sunayi dene wali hai...😆

byeee😊 and take care😊

shreya😊

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Comments part 9:

Flashback...

Dev forcing Rajeev to participate and he refusing... reason was too good he doesnt want to compete with an animal... Ab rajeev her kaam bina kisi reason ke toh karrta nahi...aur race...aur wo bhi ek animal ke sath kaise karr sakkta tha...😆

Rajeev was so right Ashwin toh naa dosti naa dushmani ke layk hai ... Koi standard toh ho na chahiya for dosti and dushmani... yupe...tabhi wo Ashwin ko koi value deta hi na...

Dev emotional blackmail se Rajeev ko convince kar hee liya...
In the present wen rajeev would think of this dialogue he must be feeling so sad... He misses Dev so much... Dev...uss ke liye sirf ek dost nahi tha... use wo apne bhai se bhi jyada chahta tha...

Dev takes nupur to watch the race... But she doesnt want to watch Gorilla's circus...too good...He doesnt tell nupur that Rajeev is participating in the race... Dev use surprise karrna chahta tha...

The way Rajeev won the race was superb... thank you...

Rajeev is going to receive the winning trophy which every time goes to a chidiyaghar... pri u r too good loved this dialogue... he he he😆...thank you...😃

Ashwin is too bad... he hits a lady and runs without being bothered ... the way rajeev handled everything was very smart... telling the doc she is his mom so that doc admits her and the seeing prisha and asking for the ear rings as he needed money... and she is prisha's aunt... sahi waqt par jo raj ka dimag khub chalta hai...😛

Prisha makes a nice bahana that she has given her earrings to nupur... see...kahin na kahin wo bhi care karrti thi raj ki...😉

Mohitjee rewarded both rajeev n dev... Rajeev dev n nupur go to prisha's house... i think rajeev is hiding prisha's earrings in his jacket... yesss...😛

Prisha gets emotional seeing raj she tells raj abt herself ...the best part was rajeev saying nothing has happened to ur aunt she is fine and prisha hugging him... thanks aap ko ye scene achha laga par yeh scene Rajeev par bhari pada...kaise...ye aap ko next part me pata chalega...😛😆

Present...


the project he has asked her to handle is bcoz he knows she can teach ashwin a lesson as she shares the same feeling as him for mitali n ashwin... tabhi toh Raj use yahan le kar aaya hai...!!! jab ki wo prisha se actual me kya karrwana chahta hai...yeh abhi tak kisi ko nahi pata...😃

so rajeev has taken prisha to the club so that he could make mitali jealous... so he ties her laces ... hte best dialogue was wen he says would u like to go inside like this... he he he...ab Prisha kuch jyada hi sharma rahi thi toh wo kya karrta...😆

Pri dear u r too good the concept and the story we all love but the dialogues u write r just fantastic dear...Thank you...😳 😳 😳...kuch jyada hi tarif ho rahi hai meri...par pata hai na...her ladki ko tarif sunn na achha lagta hai...😆

Waiting for u to cont soon