..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![2] {New LINK add} - Page 35

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Edited...😉

Hey S3 and Joseph.

Okk Guys now i m going to unres my comment...is bar S3 kitne impatient ho rahe na mere comment k lye..😆...Sonia ek din ruk nai sakti thi..mai karne hi wali thi aj...😆

or haan madam ye jo punishment di he mujhe...iski mujhe samajh nai aa rai..kya yar me ek sath kyu nai kar sakti...ok fine..ab mene jo b write kia he usko break kar deti hun into 2 parts...

Actually This time I was the first to comment...but unfortunately it became again I think in last ones...Sorry guys for late editing..bcoz I have to be work hard na..on my comment on your SS...as much as you have to work hard on your SS...😉😆

Okk now come to the point...then Again it was the wonderful and mind blowing update.👏👏

Each scene was Perfectly written..again I visualize the whole Story...whole situation in front of my eyes...the very First scene Between Gunjan and Rahul was very well written ...Rahul always understand her so well na..as like our Original Samrat had understood his Chashmish very well without telling him anything.😳...And poor Gunjan can not hide anything...as her face and eyes are open book for Rahul...Rahul reaction was expected...but thank God he did not refuse to go for singapur trip...somehow gunjan did manage to convince him...i know he is very possessive for her..😊...but jahan baat Sajan ki aye wahan bech me koi tolerate nai hota na...thanksfully Gunjan went alone to office..but just for one thing I was praying that its bettr to go with Rahul..as in that case she have not to sell her locket..but alaasss😭😭😭...from starting to end..the way you have written this scene with each n every line was Superb... ...👏

Gunjan's condition her pain thought...everything was very touchy...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...Very Very Well written

Then came Samrat...So as usual daai maa and his scene was also very Well written...Convo between Daai maa and Samrat of talking abt Sam's childhood..his naughtiness..mischieves...and then everything turned into rudeness...loneliness...harshnese...the way both were disscussing this whole thing..and their changed circumstances...was presented very well guys...👏👏👏

Poor daai maa ...she was thinking ..the girl to whom she always desire for Samrat..is finally came in his life...n somewhere she was ryt...but kon Samjhae Daai maa ko ..k unka grandson..allow hi nai kar raha usy apni life me ane ko...

Most touchy scene of this whole SS ...which brings tear in my eyes

😭😭😭...

was...

I know u would be understand...😉

Okk it was the conversation between Samrat and Daai maa..in room...when sammy said..no one loves me..kisi ko fark nai parta mere hone na hone se..etc etc...😔

Ohhh I was feeling very bad and very sad for our Hero...😭😭.Gunjan karti he na...😳

But its very natural yaar...when someone has passed through such rough phases of life..he became rude and harsh person.....so that none can dare to hurt him again in life

And the time when unknowingly he spoke out Gunjan's name awww I was so happy...😛😊...and Daai maa was also...after that he again unknowingly said...😛.mai us se pyaar nai karta...I feel like laughing on this line...😃...but look at his ego ma...'he was so sure yet...that Gunjan will come to say Sorry to him...

this A-B parts were really very nicely Written..and yes guys...you have taken so much time to update the C part...to kya mera thora sa b haq nai he k mai zra late comment kar doon...

ab Sonia ka order mante huw abi itna hi comment...agle comment k lye wait kijye...😉

thank you...😆

Originally posted by: gunurlove

OK S3 and Joseph...😊

now im editing rest of my comment...Starting with Office Scene...uknow this Office scene has been always my fav since the day when Gunjan had joined the Shergills first time..and today shez leaving the place..with heavy heart and numb eyes...mine tooo...😭😭

Office scene was mind blowing'Awesome'and Superb'''''.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Gunjan finished her all pending works'.and feeling very sad'..such that her eyes were again n again brimmed wid tears''.She will definitely miss this place..her cabin very much'most of all that I think u have not mentioned was'Samrat Sir''.😉😆

Resignation scene was Awesome'what a full of attitude resignation it was...😲...

Haayeee my heart was also pierced when she entered in her cabin after coming to the market''...Guys mene kaha than a k koi or rasta dhoondo par usko locket na becho'par tum logon ne nai suna na'.😭

...i truly did not want to sell this locket '''..but now I think when she had left from her cabin'.the paper was may be the receipt of her locket'.later Samrat might b get that and buy locket again for her'ahhh I hope soo it happens'😍...n if it will then it should be soon..'lets see..this thought made me again happy.😊'.but I remember one thing now'..that u S3 are perfect for let my all hopes down'meri sari achi achi imagination ka satyanaas mar dete ho''

no doubt in your own style you always give the perfect update'''.but meri imagination to barbaad hojati he na'.

Ok now the time of Samrat Sir'..he was so happy when he came to know abt her presence and eagerly waiting to meet her'😉...but alaasss uski b imagination or wish ko is baar S3 and Joseph ne pora nai hone dia''..This whole scene was my Fav'all the dialogues of Gunjan..which she said to Sharma ji..and then Shrma ji conveyed her msg to Samrat'..and then his reaction'.everything was Superb.mind blowing guys''first time Samrat felt sorry and guilty for his mistake''.Samrat has definitely misunderstood her...shez so determined and self respectable girl...she has done nothing just for the sake of money...u know which was my fav line...when he heard to Mr sharma...that. "mene kabhi koi kaam peson k lye nai kia"..ohaaa this line made me so proud of her...😳👏⭐️

And that letter was too Gud'very touchy...'.for sometimes he really felt bad at his behavior...but then again his manly ego came back...last paragraph was really admirable...that..tum kya jatana chati ho..tum kitni sahi ti mai kitna ghalat

Window scene was my fav'😳'i completely felt the whole situation'''and loved it a lot''hatts of to u guys for writing this so much beautiful update'''.

Plzz now update soon the next part''eagerly waiting for it''.😳😛

thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: snowwhite28

awesome update...sry i have never replied before...thanx for the pm
coming to the update...it was quite touchy and sad...feeling sad about sajan...both have bad childhood...that is effecting there present maybe future too...

wen sajan will confess there feeling to eachother??
and wat is this dark night is all about?? yar jaldi suspense khatam karo...aur yeh samrat kab sudhrega...??update soon...aur intezar nahi hota..😉

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER

Hey Thanx 4 your sweet Reply 😊(Sorry,Don't know your name😳).And,Don't feel sorry for Reply things.V understand very well,some problems of Readers so,Its Ok.😳 Actually,JOS told about U so,V can't forget to sending PM 2 U regarding Updates.

Yes,SaJan's childhood was not good...Its reflects on their today personality. Now,story turned in a new way... some things very interesting coming very soon.First,read forthcoming TEASER...uske baad kuchh guess karna😳

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey my very good friends S3--Soham, Swati, Sonia...Hi guys🤗...Finally I am commenting😉😃...I will try to keep my comment short😊 ..Me a short comment😆...Actually I don't promise that it will be short comment But I will try..😉...

Wow!! guys what an excellent and totally awesome Part 24th...👏.really Gr8 and mindblowing...Bahut mazza aaya read karkey...It was a very good , amazing , fabulous, fantastic and Rocking update...👍🏼...U showed each characters feelings,emotions and thoughts in a super way.👍🏼...each scene and every dialogue was beautifully written...Superb work Soham, Swati Sonia ie S3👏...

U know whenever I read ur updates I feel like the show is On-air before my eyes....U desciribe each scene so amazingly and each detail in the scene is shown properly that u feel that the scene is being played right in front of U... everything is so amazingly described that We feel each characters emotions and feelings ...mazza aa jata hai read n imagine karkey each part of update...U r very good and out-standing writer Soham, Swati n Sonia ie S3👍🏼...U 3 rock👍🏼...

this update was also fantabulous...Nanda family scene is my most favorite scene.I just love reading nanda family scenes..their rapport and love-trust for each other and their Bonding is just awesome...I just love their superb bonding and respect they give 4 each others feelings...their family scene brings a huge smile on my face😃...Nanda family scene was rocking👏👏...Mr&Mrs nandas conversation was interesting...they were only thinking about their children convenience that if they shift 2 New flat it will be easy 4 Rajan 2 go 2 their respective work places ...Like Nandas Each parent in day 2 day life also think 1st about their childrens happiness and convenience then their own .U showed this very well👍🏼 ...Dining table breakfast scene was just awesome👏..rahul is just too much😆...he is so funny...I couldn't help but smile when asked what did he do in kitchen and answer he gave was just too funny...😆OMG!! cooker ko shelf se utara gas slow ki etc 😆😆....WOW!! awesome👏...loved the way RD Rm N gunjan teased rahul.....😊and Rahul man he is so sweet and so good He did all this just to see his family laugh and 2 bring smile on their faces..WOW!! 👏...U showed rahuls sweet nature and deep care 4 his family beautifully S3...👏👏...Rahul buying flat was shock 4 me also...I didnt realise he was going 2 say this...but I think it was a superb idea now they nanda wouldnot have 2 shift 2 new flat offered by Monish...😊...But why do I feel That they will shift to Monish wala new flat😕...I think Monish is cooking up some plan due 2 which in rahuls absence they will have 2 shift 2 new flat....😕..Lets see if i am right or not??...Gunjan supporting rahul during this flat talk was sweet ..loved it😊....Rajan have such a Gr Rapport....😊...Rahul decided Gunjan gonna quit her job with samrat and join him in his New company after 1 month was very shocking😲.He took that decision without bothering 2 ask gunjan what she felt about this😲....i think rahul should atleast ask gunjan's opinion...and gunjan is so sweet that she just said yes even though she was feeling sad 4 this decision and didnt like it but she respects and trust rahul so much that she respected the decision he took 4 her without asking her and said yes herself...Gunjan is really a very sweet simple person she can never think bad of anyone whether its rahul, Samrat, or Monish..she is so positive that even if other person is wrong then also she will think that other person scolded her or took this decision 4 her just for her benefit...WOW!! what a sweet and very honestn so caring n so gentle lady gunjan is👏👏👏..I am loving ur Character Gunjan more n more each day S3👍🏼...Superb n lovely character Gunjan S3👍🏼 ...

Samrat is thinking about Gunjan and missing her on sunday wanted to hear her voice Wow!😊...U showed Gunjan feelings very well when she came 2 office..she was full of thoughts...she was Sad that she has 2 quit he job she was worried about whether samrat will be happy with her work, samrat moods were also worrying her at the same time and how will she tell samrat about resign matter and she was happy that she has completed her work and doing whatever work assigned 2 her with enthusiasm... you showed very well Gunjan emotions her feelings during the whole scenes..when an employee does good work he/she just wants little appreciation for work and when an employer doesn't appreciate him/her and doesn't even bother 2 go through his/her work that time an employee becomes sad disappointed and hurt..U showed all these emotions in gunjan superbly ..👍🏼.Gunjan is so innocent, so gentle ,simple hardworking person who doesnt expect anything from anyone and when whatever little she expects from someone and when she is not even given that though she gets hurt but she hides it and still forgives that person and moves forward postively in life...Such a sweet character Gunjan..just awesome.👏👏👏...though samrat is very rude n harsh with her but yes I know behind the facade of harshness he is just hiding his true feelings so that gunjan n noone else knows about them and S3 U showed this very well thru samrat's thoughts and his feelings bad about his behavior...

OMG!! this MONISH is so IRRITATING...I donot like him at all...😡...he just came 2 meeting so that he could meet Gunjan...😲...kal he toh woh mila tha Gunjan sey..gunjan entry in conference hall was superb 👏 the way u described her sweet beauty was awesome👏...and Monish and samrat couldnt stop staring at her..and this monish he is so irritating he was flirting with gunjan couldn't he see she was feeling uncomfortable and embarrassed...this monish na😡...and he asked her 2 meet him in canteen 😲...why doesn't he understand this was Gunjans work place....Monish😡mera maan kiya Monish ki lappy mein guss kar pitai kar doon..😡🤢....But what I loved most in this scene was the way u showed Samrat's jealousy when Monish was staring at gunjan and flirting with her.. man he was so jealous...😉.....I knew Samrat will never let gunjan have lunch with Monish
... poor Gunjan she bore the brunt of samrats anger n jealousy...he became more harsh and rude with her started treating her badly and he started thinking worse of her...Till samrat was jealous till then it was fine little rude be okay But after this samrat became extremely harsh with Gunjan and very very Rude...I didnt like it at all..IS This the way to behave with an employee??..😔...All this because of stupid Monish😡...Rahul call was a suprise for me as well I didnt knew he would call..But rahul understands gunjan so well he understood something was wrong and gunjan tears made me sad too😔....In the end the way gunjan handled herself and Samrat when he asked her u can have lunch now.. she didnt show her saddness but just smiled and replied politely was amazing and awesome part 👍🏼...her polite answer made samrat feel guilty that he had not let her have lunch...Loved this amazing Gunjan...👏......It is indeed a black monday for Gunjan...as she didnt knew what was going 2 happen...a monday which will change gunjans life n other character life forever ...But As this is Black monday a title u gave this update is totally appropriate title S3👍🏼...

In the end I will say S3 Soham Swati n sonia u are all GENIOUS ...👍🏼...U wrote part 24, 25 , 26 , 27 . 28 all parts really well..good work S3👏👏👏👏...

COMMENT about PART 25- part 28 on page 40...😉😊...I hope comment this one short hai😉😆..I know I know long hai but kya karoon I couldn't stop typing😛...Have a nice time reading Soham, Swati, Sonia...😉😊...and SORRY SORRY SORRY 4 commenting so late...

Love Ur good friend
GUNJAN😊😊...
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Originally posted by: PrincessBushi

lovely part 👏

can't wait for the next part