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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

TEASER : [1/3]

[A]

The smirk on MONISH's face ensured that SAMRAT totally lost his cool... he blasted at MONISH...

S - Now...U can go...from my Office...

M - (His smile getting all the more sarcastic, he settled even comfortably in the chair, showing no signs of leaving...) Chill Dude...! Chala jaaoonga...Itni jaldi bhi kya hai...? main bhi yahaan iss chhote se office mein apna ghar basane nahin aaya...Just Relax..

S - Achha hoga...tum abhi chale jaao...warna,main kya kar doonga...yeh main bhi nahin jaanta...

M - Ok.As U like It...Par,mujhe pata hai mujhe ab kya karna hai...Maine toh socha ki,apni 'purani' dosti ki wajah se tumhein 1 chance de doon...Lekin,koi baat nahin...Its your choice...main ab kya kar sakta hoon... He stood up and pushing the chair behind a bit aggressively, he smiled and turned to leave. But before he could reach the door, he heard SAMRAT's voice stop him...

S - Ruko...!!

MONISH gave a slight laugh... as he turned to face SAMRAT, victory all so evident on his face... "I knew it...Yeh awaaz aayegi...par,itni jaldi aayegi...yeh nahin socha tha...Thank God ! Tumne time se pehle hi situation ko samajh liya.

S - (looked angrily n yelled) Really, Maine jitna socha tha...tum uss se bhi zyada 'Kaminey' ho...

M - (smiled softly n said without any shame) Thanx for compliment Dude...! I M so,touched...Yaar,itni taarif toh aaj tak mere baap ne bhi nahin ki...Thank God ! Kisi ne toh mujhe pehchana...!! Par,Dude...kabhi khud ko dekha hai...? 1 baar khud ko bhi dekho...phir,aaram se judge karna..kaun kitna...

S - Just Shut-Up...! (Yelled) Main tumse bekaar ki baatein nahin karna chahta...Mujhe kuchh waqt chahiye...sochne ke liye...

M - Oh..sure,Please take your time...Main kahaan koi zabardasti kar raha hoon...Hum dost hain...ooppss sorry 'the'...Hum dost the toh, apne purne dost ke liye itna toh kar hi sakta hoon...but,problem is...mere paas time hi toh nahin hai...toh woh main tumhein kahaan se doon...?? par,agar tum itne request kar rahe ho toh...chalo aaj shaam tak ka time diya...Ab tumhaare liye itna toh kar hi sakta hoon... (smiled with teasing way...this smile was indicating his victory)

SAMRAT looked at MONISH in anger... If only...If only, the offer made by MONISH was not beneficial to him, GOD alone knew what SAMRAT would have done with MONISH...

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[B]

As they left , MONISH could not stop gawking at her. She looked amazingly pretty... They reached the car and MONISH held the door open for GUNJAN. Giving him a smile, GUNJAN seated herself as MONISH shut the door and walked over to the Drivers side. As he settled to drive, he glanced at GUNJAN ...she seemed oblivious to his stares... she was adjusting the seat belt. As she finished, she looked up and realized MONISH was staring at her. She felt weird and looked away. MONISH too realised what he was doing, and he started the car.

With soft music playing on his car 'Music System', the drive was very pleasant. The night was clear, the stars twinkling down on them as he opened moon roof of his car. He looked at GUNJAN , who was looking out of the car, enjoying the music and the slight breeze that was caressing her face... stray strands of hair kissing her cheeks as she tried to push them behind her ears. MONISH was unable to keep his eyes on the road. He knew he had to stop the car and speak up... today he would have to speak. As If he had made a decision, MONISH stopped the car. The jolt made GUNJAN look at MONISH, worried. Why had he stopped the car?? She asked him...

G - Aapne car kyun rok di?? Kya car main kuch problem hain??

MONISH could not help but smile at her innocence. He spoke in a soft tone...

M - Nahin, woh... (He was hesitating to speak) Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...

G - Par woh toh aap car drive karte huye bhi keh sakte the...

M- (with a smile on his face) Haan, keh sakta hoon, par chahata hoon ki jab main woh baat kahoon, tumhara chehra mere saamne ho...

GUNJAN looked at him, with a surprised look. Definitely, something was different. She kept looking at him questioningly. He said nothing more and got off the car. He walked over to the Passenger side and opened the Door. GUNJAN was not feeling OK... She felt weird... This kind of behavior from MONISH... She undid her seatbelt and got off. She moved towards the Passenger Door at the back, while MONISH almost slammed the Door shut. GUNJAN was startled on hearing this. She looked at MONISH... His stares were getting weirder... She looked downwards...

He came closer to her and keeping his hand on the car, he said... in a gentle tone... " GUNJAN... ab main hamari friendship ko next level tak le jaana chahata hoon..."

She was shocked by these sudden turn of events. What did MONISH want to say??

She stared at him as she said... "Main... main samajhi nahin Aap kya...

But,she could not complete her sentence. MONISH silenced her as he kept his finger on her lips. He moved his hand on her shoulder, his finger tracing her face... He was moving his fingers on her lips... GUNJAN shuddered...with fear... and she pushed him away as she tried to get away. But,strong arms held her... and pinned her against the car. GUNJAN looked at MONISH... Love, Respect...all seemed to have vanished... She said in very worried tone... "MONiSH...yeh aap kya kar rahe hain...? Please...Aap...

He said nothing. He just cupped her delicate, pretty face in his hands and moved his lips closer to her lips...

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SIZZZLER

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

TEASER : [2/3]

[C]

GUNJAN was upset... mighty upset. She entered the kitchen and picked up the chopping board. She took the knife and was about to cut the onions when she mumbled to her self...waving the knife as she spoke.....(( Samajhte kya hain woh khud ko...?? Yahaan,bhi koi unka intezaar nahin kar raha...Mujhe koi farq nahin padta...woh jiske saath chahe Dinner par ja sakte hain...mujhe kyun bura lagega...?? Mere paas aur bhi kaam hain karne ko... suddenly remembered evening incident ...aur,woh SHALiNi...kitni besharmi se...par,uski bhi kya galti...yeh bhi toh usse kiss karne se rok sakte the...par nahin,Yeh kyun rokenge...? show toh aisa karte hain,jaise pata nahin meri kitni parwah hai...Aur,1 baar phone kar poocha tak nahin ki,ghar pahoonchi hoon ya nahin...aur Phone kiya bhi toh,sirf ZOYA ko...woh bhi Dinner Date ki information dene ke liye... Ok...Fine...ab main bhi koi parwah nahin karoongi...jiske saath jaana hai jaayen...mujhe kya...Main thik hoon...Kuchh hi dinon ki toh baat hai...yeh din bhi guzar jaayenge...))

And she started cutting onions...her mumbling continuing. She knew this was 'The Reality'... though hard to face, the earlier she realised It the better It would be for her. Her eyes brimmed with tears as she remembered the incidences of the day...

ZOYA entered the kitchen and was surprised to see GUNJAN cutting onions and muttering to herself. She walked towards her... and tried to look at GUNJAN's face... trying to catch her expression.But, GUNJAN was totally lost in her thought. She did not realise when ZOYA stood next to her and stopping her from cutting the onions, She turned GUNJAN towards her and asked her... R U Ok...? Kya main kuchh help karoon...?

GUNJAN was startled. ZOYA... she quickly wiped her tears and smiling fakely, she said... "No,I'll manage."

ZOYA gave a smile...which indicated that she had understood what was bothering GUNJAN. She asked in a caring tone... "Tumhein bura laga...ki woh...?? Tum uss se keh kyun nahin deti ki...?

G - KYA ?? Kya kahoon...? aur,Mujhe kyun bura lagega...?

Z - Yeh tum mujhse better jaanti ho...Tumhaari aankhon mein yeh aansoo sab bata rahe hain...Tum hurt hui ho...

G - (smiled fakely) Nahin...aisa kuchh nahin hai...Pyaaz kaatte hue aansoo aa hi jaate hain.. Mujhe really bura nahin laga...

ZOYA wiped her tears, that were resting on her cheeks... and looking at her, she said in a caring voice... "Main samajh sakti hoon yeh aansoo Pyaaz kaatne ke wajah se hain yaa kisi aur wajah se...Achhi tarah janti hoon tumhein...tum mujhse kuchh nahin hide kar sakti...kyunki,tumhaari aankhein sab kuchh bata deti hain...Tum pyaar karne lagi ho uss se... Uski life style tum par asar karti hai... Woh jab tumhaare paas nahin hota...tum usse miss karti ho...bas yeh accept karna nahin chahti...

Ok...Fine..mat karo accept...par,main abhi usse call karti hoon...woh kahin nahin jaayega...Jab bataoongi ki,aaj ke dinner mein tum 'Biryani' bana rahi ho...Dekhna woh kaise aa jaayega...aur,hum sab aaj ka dinner saath mein hi karenge...

As ZOYA turned to leave, GUNJAN stopped her by holding her wrists... her delicate fingers holding ZOYA's wrists gently... "Nahin ZOYA...tum aisa kuchh nahin karogi...Kyunki,aisa kuchh bhi nahin hai...Really,aisa kuchh nahin hai...Main unki life-style mein interfere nahin karna chahti...main khush hoon...agar upset hoti toh room mein jaakar ro rahi hoti... (smiled fakely) Yahaan aap sab ke liye 'Biryani' nahin bana rahi hoti...waise AATiF Bhai kahaan hain...? Woh time se aa toh jaayenge...?

She hoped that ZOYA would leave it at that... the topic would get changed. But ZOYA knew better... she came closer and said... "AATiF se kahoon...? Woh 1 bar uss se baat karke dekh sakte hain... Woh donon kaafi achhe dost hain...

G - Nahin...Kisi se kuchh kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai...Kyunki,really aisa kuchh hai hi nahin...tumhaari imagination ko agar unhone sach maan liya..toh,mere liye nayi problem create ho jaayegi...(smiled) aur main ab apni life mein aur koi complication nahin chahti...so,forget it...aur chalo ab thodi help kar do...Kyunki,agar yeh 'Biryani' kharab bani...toh at least hum proudly keh toh sakte hain...ki,isse hum donon ne mil kar Kharab kiya hai...

She smiled at ZOYA. Amazing... thought ZOYA... How does she manage to hide her pain behind that bewitching smile??? ZOYA returned the smile...

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[D]

SAMRAT turned to GUNJAN side and said in very caring tone, "Arre,Tum aaj kuchh bol kyun nahin rahi...? Koi problem hai...? Kuchh hua hai kya...?

G - Nahin...nahin toh...

S - Good...toh phir chalo pehle,mere liye Suit select karne mein meri help karo...Mujhe coloring samajh nahin aati sabhi 1 jaise hi lagte hain (smiled)

GUNJAN smiled back and said gently... " I'll try...B'coz,mujhe bhi Gents new Fashion Trend ka koi idea nahin, kabhi kisi ke liye aisi shopping nahin ki...toh..."

S - Koi baat nahin... (smiled) dheere-dheere habit ho jaayegi (little-bit whispered) Ok..tum sirf yeh bata dena ki,kaun sa color aur design mujh par zyada suit kar raha hai...I mean,tumhein sirf yeh batana hai ki,Main tumhein kaun se suit mein zyada achha lagta hoon...Main wohi select kar loonga ,simple naa... (asked with smiling face)

GUNJAN was getting more tensed... but she nodded in positive... one thought worrying her... ((WHAT ?? Kya yeh meri choice ka suit pahnenge ??))

S - (smiled) Yes...tum bilkul sahi soch rahi ho...Main tumhaari choice ka hi suit pahnoonga.

GUNJAN looked at SAMRAT... with a baffled look. How did he know what she was thinking ??? She smiled and lowered her gaze, but the blush that tinged her cheeks to a perfect shade of pink was not missed by SAMRAT. After a lot of trials, discussions and changes... GUNJAN zeroed down on 3 Suits... SAMRAT was elated to see the suits chosen by GUNJAN... exactly the ones He had wanted...

SAMRAT looked at her...she was looking at him, hoping that SAMRAT would also have liked her choice and say something. The look on SAMRAT's face said it all. His smile answered her questions. She felt relieved. SAMRAT was enjoying these moments with her... As she started walking towards the exit of the store...she heard a familiar tone...that of an order... "Wait...where are you going?? Now,Its my turn naa ..."

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SAMRAT said in very normal tone... " Ok...As U wish...well...tum mere Suits ke Bill ready karne ko kaho...aur jaa kar 'CAFE' mein wait karo...main bas abhi aaya...

G - Par...Main...?? Aapke bina...?

S - Don't worry... (smiled) Tumhein ab chod kar kahin nahin jaaoonga... Bas,Kuchh 'Personal' shopping karni hai...bas thodi der mein aaya...

He left from there without waiting for her to say anything. For a moment, she stood looking at him. SAMRAT had changed so much... but for the better. She was glad. She went to the billing counter and asking them to prepare the bill, she obeyed her BOSS's order.

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Just then...

S - How sweet...!! Kitne pyaare lag rahe hain donon 1 saath...SAMRAT's sentence broke her thought process. She glared at him and simply started walking away from the CAFE. SAMRAT picked up the shopping bags and followed her. When they were out of the cafe, SAMRAT stopped her... He held her wrist... and in a very soft and casual tone, he asked her...

S - Hey...! Wassup...? Kya hua...? Naraaz ho...?

G - Haan...aur bahot zyada naraaz hoon...Mujhe aap se baat hi nahin karni... (and again turned)

S - What...? Par,maine kya kiya...? (asked innocently)

G - Aapko nahin pata...? Aapne abhi andar kya kiya...?? (asked angrily)

S - Oh...! Woh...!! Woh toh main waise hi joke kar raha tha...Tumhein mera joke pasand nahin aaya...

She did not why, but when she heard the word 'JOKE' she felt bad... She should have expected this, but still...It hurt her. The hurt reflecting in her voice, she said...

G - What...?? sirf 1 'joke'...? Yeh sab aapke liye ek joke tha...? Par,aapne 1 baar bhi socha...ki,woh kya soch rahi hongi...?

S - (Innocently) Kya...? Kya soch rahi hongi,woh ?? Ab humne aisa bhi kya kar diya...?

GUNJAN gave him a disgusted look as she started walking away... but, SAMRAT was not letting her leave so easily... He stopped her again...

S - Wait...wait...Par,apne suits ke bag toh le lo...Main all ready apne suits ke bag carry kar raha hoon naa...Yeh kaafi bhaari hain...mere haathon mein dard ho raha hai... SAMRAT SHERGILL ne kabhi apne bags nahin uthaye...aur tum...tum mujhse kitna kaam karwa rahi ho... (said like a poor guy with puppy face)

She turned angrily...

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#363

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

TEASER : [3/3]

[E]

SAMRAT was grief stricken as he saw GUNJAN's condition. He could not bear to see her like this... He was yelling hysterically at the Doctors and Nurses... "Aap log kuchh kar kyun nahin rahe...? Aap logon ki der ki wajah se agar usse kuchh ho gaya...toh main tum sab ko nahin choodunga..." His grief...His anger...spilling out of his eyes as he spoke...

A Doctor spoke in a worried tone...He was scared seeing SAMRAT's anger...,"Sir ! Please,try to understand,Her situation is very critical...Unka kaafi blood ja chuka hai...Hum abhi kuchh nahin keh sakte ki..."

But, before he could complete his sentence, SAMRAT clutched his collar and almost threatened... "GUNJAN ko kuchh nahin hua hai...aur naa hoga...aur,agar usse kuchh ho gaya toh uske baad tum logon ke saath kya hoga...tum sab yeh soch bhi nahin sakte...

One of the Doctors rushed to his colleagues aid... He freed his colleague from SAMRAT's clutches... SAMRAT let go of his collar...pushing him back... The other Doctor said in a calm tone... "Sir ! Please hamari baat samajhne ki koshish kijiye...Humne unhein OT mein shift kar diya hai...Operation ki saari preparation bhi complete ho gayi hai...Hamare Hospital ke saare Senior Doctors operation ke waqt OT mein hi rahenge...but,jab tak unke kisi Relative ki permission nahin mil jaati...Hum yeh Operation start nahin kar sakte.

S - What...? Uski aisi condition dekhne ke baad bhi aap log kisi aur ka wait kar rahe hain...?? Main keh raha hoon naa...Aap operation start kijiye...

D - Sorry Sir ! Par,aapko pehle papers sign karne honge...Waise,Aap patient ke kya lagte hain...? Humein other formality puri karne ke liye yeh information chahiye hogi...

Now SAMRAT was quite. This question was unexpected...He had no answer to this question. Who was he?? How was he related to her??? He sat on the bench... lost in his thoughts,when the doctor asked him again...

D - Sir,Papers par unke kisi relative yaa...

Just then,A strong n confident voice came... " Husband ka sign chalega...?? "

A familiar voice shook SAMRAT out of his thoughts. He looked towards the direction of the voice and was shocked. What was 'HE' doing here??

The Person rushed towards the doctor, worry writ large over his face. He spoke in a concerned tone... "Aap bataiye mujhe,Kahaan sign karne hain...? I will sign...B'coz,She is my WIFE... I M her HUSBAND...and I think,Yeh rishta kaafi hai aapki saari formalities puri karne ke liye."

This statement by him and most importantly his presence had shaken SAMRAT. What was happening?? ((This can't be true...Aisa nahin ho sakta...Yeh jhooth bol raha hai.))

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[F]

An angry RAHUL stormed into SAMRAT's cabin. He had with him the bouquet of red roses and pieces of what was once a card. Flinging them angrily on the floor, he looked with blazing eyes at SAMRAT. His voice in the highest decibel he thundered... "Mr.SHERGILL How dare U...?? Tumhaari himmat kaise hui yeh sab cheezain mere ghar par bhejne ki,woh bhi sab kuchh jaanne ke baad...?? Lagta hai seedhi baat tumhari samajh mein nahin aati..."

SAMRAT looked up as he heard RAHUL speak. As his eyes traveled from RAHUL's face to the Bouquet and Cards pieces flung on the floor, He lost his temper and he yelled back..." Aur, tumhaari himmat kaise hui iss tarah bina meri permission ke mere Cabin mein aane ki...aur mujhse itni unchi awaaz mein baat karne ki...? "

RAHUL walked closer to SAMRAT's desk and menacingly waving his index finger in SAMRAT's face , He said in an angry tone, his eyes spewing venom as his words did... "Abhi tumne meri himmat dekhi hi kahaan hai...Jab main khud par aaoonga...tumhaara pura SHERGILL Empire bhi tumhein mujh se nahin bacha paayega."

S - (made a scared expression) Oh Really...?? Main toh darr gaya... smiled and said in a teasing tone... Don't worry,Tum jaisoon ke liye main akela hi kaafi hoon... (saying this he leaned backwards in his chair and relaxed, looking at RAHUL sarcastically...he said in a calm tone...) kyunki,shayad tum bhool rahe ho ki,main kaun hoon..? SAMRAT SHERGILL ko kabhi kisi sahare ki zaroorat nahin padti...Yeh tum kabhi mat bhoolna...

R - No...I have not forgotten, forget that who U R...? Lekin,lagta hai tum apni hadhh bhool gaye ho...warna,yeh harkatein nahin karte.

S - (smiled teasingly) Oh ! Par maine toh yeh harkat kar di...ab tum kya karoge...? By the way,for your kind information...Main yeh 'harkatain' ab roz karoonga...toh, tumhein jo karna hai kar sakte ho...I don't care.

R - I know it...Tum jaisa gire hua insaan aisa hi kuchh karega... Main kya kar sakta hoon...? yaa,kya karoonga..? Yeh tumhein bahot jald pata chal jaayega...par,kuchh bhi karne se pehle...tumhein 1 last warning dena chata hoon...woh yeh ki, Mere aur GUNJAN ke beech aane ki koshish mat karna...tumhaare liye yeh zyada better hoga...Kyunki,GUNJAN mere liye yaa meri Family ke liye kya hai...yeh tum soch bhi nahin sakte...toh achha hoga tum uss se door raho.

S - (said with smiling face) WoW ! same opinion...!! Believe me...Main bhi tumse same yehi lines kehna chahta tha...par,koi baat nahin,tumne bhi kaafi good tone use ki... par,agar main GUNJAN se door na jaaoon toh...? Toh,tum kya karoge...?

R - (Glared to him very angrily) Wait n Watch...!! RAHUL banged his fist on SAMRAT's desk and turned to leave. But he did not even reach the door of the cabin when he heard SAMRAT's voice stop him..."1 sec. Dude...! Meri Cabin mein aakar...mujhe itna kuchh kehne ke bad bhi agar tum yahaan apne pairon par khade ho...toh sirf aur sirf GUNJAN ki wajah se ...warna,Itna kuchh kehne waale ko main sirh apne Office se nahin...iss Building se dhakke maar kar nikalwa deta...Par,nahin...main aisa nahin karoonga...Tumhein Kuchh sochne...kuchh karne se pehle...tumhein kuchh dikhana chata hoon (smiled evily) ...I think,uske baad tumhaari kaafi 'Misunderstanding' clear ho jaayegi...

Slowly RAHUL turned ariund to face SAMRAT who had the smile of victory on his face. He flung a envelope on the desk and said... "Kuchh kehne ya karne se pehle...isse 1 baar dekh lo...tumhein iski zaroorat hai..."

RAHUL looked at the Envelope, his face expressions changing from anger to worry... He looked at SAMRAT who smirked and nodding his head asked RAHUL to pick up the envelope. A dazed RAHUL walked slowly towards the desk and his hands shivering, He picked up the envelope and opened it. His face was drained of color as he saw what was in the envelope...

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[G]

The Elevator door opened and GUNJAN entered the empty elevator. She was about to Press the Ground Floor button as she saw the door close,when suddenly... someone forced the door open. GUNJAN moved her hand back... and looked in surprise... this look turning to fear as she saw the person who had entered the elevator...SAMRAT... She was scared. She moved back... without looking at her, He pressed the 15th floor button and did not face her. She saw this and in a tone which reflected her fear, she said...

"Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain...Mujhe Ground-Floor par jaana hai..."

He said nothing...simply glared at her... She was very worried. gathering courage, she said again... "Please stop on the next floor...Mujhe jaana hai..."

He pressed the 'STOP' button...Elevator stopped...He turned to look at her. She moved another step backwards. SAMRAT moved towards her, his eyes blazing with anger... As he moved closer to her, she moved back... till she could no more move back... she hit against the hard cold steel wall of the elevator...

She looked downwards as SAMRAT came very close to her. In a tone that not only reflected his anger, but also his pain, he said... " Kyun jaane doon tumhein...? Kyun manoon main,tumhaari baat...? Kya tum mujhe jaanti ho...?? Kya hum ek dusre ko jaante hain...? Tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti ho...? Main... "

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Pheewww !! Finally END of TEASER-1.Hope U like it...Thanx Guyz ! For bearing us...

With Love.
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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

teaser 1 was niceee i love it i hope samrat gunjan ko save kar lay monish ka trap se

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

awesome teasers...but its quite confusing...eagerly waiting for new update.

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

what to say i'm so confused which teaser to view first...mindblowing teasers, ek se badkar ek...don't feel bad but i don't like monish at all...sometimes i'm thinking to see the lift scene between sajan first...then thinking what must be in that envelope that samrat gave to rahul to see...wanting to see the light moments of sajan while shopping, samrat teasing gunjan...1 thing is for sure i wud love anyone scene with the exception of monish and gunjan scene...plz plz update fast

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gurpreet

@preety88

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

wonderful teasers...they all are soo interesting...cont soon

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358674

@358674

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

omg 😲

its awesome

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Lekshmic7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#369

OH my GOD,so much hpng here! awesome teaser guys. sam-monish DEAL????Hmm smthng fishy is der. NOOO monish going to kiss gunjan.. eeekksss!! sajans shopping , unbelievable!! y gunjan is hurt by sams JOKE? gunjans accident.. nw who d hell is gunjans HUSBAND? may be its rahul. sam-rahul confrontation.. wt s in dat damn envelope? gunjan- zoya scene ..confusing one. the final one the lift scene superb.i loved every part except dat ugly kissing one. i dont want to read it.poor gunjan she is d victim of all des stupid guys egoistic deeds. ds story is so unpredictable and it s going such an amazing way. well done guys thank u so much 4 giving us such a beautiful and passionate story. waiting eagerly continue super soon. once again thanks 4 d pm.