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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: karantakiar

amazing nd superb part...
totaaly rocking part dear.
plz plz cnt soon
luv u
vritika


Thanks Vritika for reading n liking the update😊..we will b updating the teaser very shortly😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

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Hey My very good friends S3-Soham,Swati,Sonia OMG!! Wow!! What a fabulous Totally outstanding and Just rocking Part 25-. part-26 , part 27 and part 28...👏...Awesome work 👏...just Fantabulous
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The title given By you for this update BLACK MONDAY is totally appropriate title...👍🏼...It was indeed a Black Monday for all the characters..especially Gunjan😭...Her hurt and her tears bought tears to my eyes also😭😭...U wrote each character thoughts and feelings so well that I was visualizing and feeling each characters pain and anger...especially Samrat n gunjan's pain and feelings made me emotional😭😭...both were in pain in a different way and u showed Samrats pain anger thoughts feelings and Gunjans intense pain and emotions and rahuls anger and even Monish anger at the way rahul treated him when he visited Rd home ..U described each characters feelings really well...Awesome and GR8 work Soham,Swati,Sonia 👏...
.U r mind blowing writers👏..Ur writing skills are Par excellence...Just OUTSTANDING👍🏼👏👏👏

11/10 and 5 stars-⭐️ for Ur excellent writing skills and ur awesome talent...U r EXCELLENT S3-Soham,Swati,Sonia👏

Man!!😊I am getting more n more impressed with Ur character Gunjan...She is such a sweet and superb Girl...👏...Even though she was hurt by samrat's behavior still she did not let her hurt, sadness and fear show on her face at all in front of samrat or anyone else.she kept a smile on her face in the conference room through out..she just concentrated on her work and worked hard and completed her work with perfection ..her face only showed confidence in herself...WOW!! what a Superb and Gem of a person Gunjan is ..So sweet so hard working so pure👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼..Why cant samrat see this that Gunjan is such a pure and sweet person?😕...he didnt even praise Gunjan 4 her excellent work..why cant he see gunjan's awesome nature??😕...

U showed & described Gunjan's character n feelings really well through Ur each dialogue thoughts and scene ... Good Work S3 👏

Samrat wants to stop Monish and Gunjan meeting and it effects samrat if gunjan knows monish Wow!!😉...this proves that samrat likes Gunjan very much but he is so stubborn and so egoistic that he will try his best never admit to himself that he is in love with Gunjan and never to let his feelings 4 her show on his face...

Samrat each thought and action proves that he is trying 2 hide his feelings for gunjan that's why he is thinking worse thoughts about gunjan ...S3 U showed Samrat feelings and thoughs really well ..Awesome work 👏...

Rahul is so sweet he loves Gunjan truly with full heart..he loves her 4 her pure n beautiful nature ,her simplicity ,awesome personality ..he is truly in love with her...But why doesn't he tell his parents about his love 4 Gunjan??😕..why is he hiding his feelings ..😕he could atleast tell his Mom...I feel that Rahul's mom will be very happy 2 know he loves gunjan...RM n Rahul conversation was interesting ...when son is going out of station 4 work every mother is concerned whether packing ho gayi and if she can help ...U showed this thru RM words she is also like every Mother who is concerned for her children and happy for them also...her words Gunjan neh packing ki then sab kuch theek hoga shows her deep love n trust for gunjan and how proud she is of Gunjan...😊... These words of rahul-
Toh PINKI tum saath nahin aa rahi toh kya hua,tumhaari tasweer toh mere saath aa rahi hai...Why does it make me feel that Rahul ke paas uski Pinki ki Photo hi reh jayegi as pinki ie Gunjan will become somebody else wife?? Am I Right ??? Rahuls thoughts and feelings are so sweet and he is so excited to see gunjans reaction when he will tell Gunjan his feelings But BUT Will rahul be able to tell gunjan his feelings at all? I think something will happen due 2 which rahul feelings will remain hidden in his heart and Gunjan will never know ??Let see whether Me Right or not? ...

Excellently shown rahuls true n sweet feelings 4 Gunjan👏...But why is rahul so sure Gunjan will say yes ? and why does he think Gunjan feels the same 4 him?😕😕😕😕...


Oh!yeh Samrat bhi na 😡... poor gunjan she has not eaten since morning and Samrat knew that...Couldnt he give her little time atleast to eat something ? he is being so mean n rude 2 gunjan...😭😭...😔...Oh! gunjan thought that resignation kal he dena pade ...Ussey kya pata tha yeh baat true ho jayegii😭...These words of Gunjan
----Ab aur nahin...aaj toh already mera quota full ho gaya hai,,,Kahin aisa na ho ki,1 month ke baad dene waala Resignation letter mujhe kal hi dena... pade... .U know S3 when I read Gunjan these thoughts At that time I had not read rest of the update And I thought 1 thing something is gonna happen due to which Shayad yahi honey wala hoo ...Poor Gunjan didnt knew this samrat bad mood had just started😔...OMG!! Samrat is being so rude an harsh n so mean calling Gunjan lazy knowing that she has been working so hard and so perfectly since morning...These words of samrat are really rude and yelling 😲..Samrat😡...couldnt he talk politely ?? and meeting ? Flunging the glass OMG!!😲😲😲...ITNA GUSSA???????😲...Samrat wanted Gunjan to attend meeting with Him when he knew before hand that gunjan is not allowed to work after 6...I know Samrat he is doing this 2 Stop Gunjan to meet Monish...Samrat is so stubborn ...he thinks he is always right...But He can be wrong also ..But will he admit this ?? will his BIG Ego let him Admit he was wrong? Or will he keep on accusing others and give excuses for being so rude?? Let see If samrat ever will change??..I know 1 think this is height of rudeness ...😡..Noone has the Right 2 behave with anyone this way Not even an employer...POOR Gunjan she had tears in her eyes and was thinking what has she done 😭.she has not done anything still she has to beer the brunt of samrat anger because Samrat was Jealous ...OMG!! gunjan was hurt thinking Samrat will not miss her if she left work..😲...that means Gunjan is fallen in love with samrat but doesnt realize it yet.😉...

S3 u showed gunjan hurt , her feelings really well thru her tears and thoughts...👍🏼👍🏼S3 thru samrat actions thoughts and words U showed Samrat insecurity , ego, jealousy , anger and stubbornness n I am always Right attitude really well 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...

Rajan conversation was interesting...Rahul man he is so sweet and cares 4 Gunjan so much ..I am liking this rahul more n more😊😊...he immediately knew before Gunjan even spoke that it was His Pinki ON the Phone and he knew something had happened thats why Gunjan was calling him and samrat has scolded her...

The way gunjan hid her hurt feelings from Rahul and handled Him so that his temper doesnt flare up and he does something and the way she calmly handled rahul even though she was afraid inside and took permission from him all this was excellently and interestingly shown By U all S3 soham Swati sonia👏....and Rahul is right Gunjan is too top too too innocent and a duffer 😉😊😉Rahul said so clearly in a different way that the girl he is searching 4 he has found her and Its Gunjan ( tum ho na) 😊 and Gunjan didn't understand😲😉...WELL S3 rahul ko clearly kehna hoga Gunjan sey That HE Loves her ..he has 2 say I LOVE U words to Gunjan...😉😊..BUT will rahul be able 2 say them? will he get the chance?...excellent rajan conversation 👏👏👏...wasey Rajan part is my most favorite part bec rahul genuinely and truly cares and loves gunjan..and always thinks about Her happiness...😊..But Will he be able 2 tolerate if gunjan loves someone else? Will he let Gunjan marry the person whom she loves????😕😕😕...


I Wonder if rahul had come 2 pick Gunjan up and seen samrat behavior n rude attitude towards her and that other person behavior towards gunjan..What would he have done at that moment seeing sweet innocent Gunjan in such a bad condition??...I think he would have beaten and Killed the other person and Samrat both ...and Gunjan wouldnot have been able 2 stop him ...

OMG!! samrat didnt even call gunjan when he was leaving 4 meeting😲... S3 When Samrat left 4 meeting and was waiting 4 gunjan in his car and didnt bother 2 inform her that time Thru Gunjans thoughts U superbly showed gunjan hurt feelings and sadness...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...

Samrat is behaving like a JERK😡...he is so wrong he is thinking so bad of gunjan😔...and he is doing all this 2 hide his feelings which he has 4 gunjan from himself...that's why he is making it heard 4 gunjan so that either she quits or he gets a chance 2 terminate her😲😔...I donot like this behavior of samrat...😔.But
I accepted this kind of attitude from Samrat as the way character Samrat nature has been shown like a person who is full of Ego,attitude, rudness towards middle class people and Now jealousy has been added also So I accepted exact same kind of reactions from Samrat...and U S3 showed exactly the way I thought Ur Character Samrat will react 2 such situations..though i didnt like samrat behavior But U wrote and showed it properly and in an awesome way ...Good work S3 .👏.....Samrat doesnt realise he is so wrong his behavior has made gunjan think samrat wouldnot want to sit with an employee and thats why she sat in front But Samrat reaction was 😲 I thought he will tell gunjan to come n sit in back with him But the way he thought and reacted taking keys from driver and driving himself thinking now gunjan would have 2 sit with him ...this reaction from samrat SHOCKED Me 😲😲......OMG!! Samrat Samrat...on 1 side he wants to keep Gunjan away from him also yet on another side He takes it as an insult when Gunjan sat in front and drives car Himself so that Gunjan Sits with Him😉...KYA HOGA SAMRAT KA??😉...He is So confused about his feelings...S3 My dear friends What an excellent way of showing samrat confused feelings ...his anger his ego his attitude his jealousy everything every emotion of Samrat, Gunjan and Rahul and every character was excellently shown ...SUPERB WORK SOHAM SWATI SONIAie S3👏...

U all r really MARVELLOUS writers...Just FANTABULOUS...👏...I AM PROUD that I am your friend S3-- Soham , Swati , Sonia's fr 😊...U 3 ROCK👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...

Thanks 4 being my very good friends Soham, Swati , Sonia ie S3..🤗🤗🤗...

Love your good friend
Gunjan😊😊...






Thank you Gunjan for your reply.😊

Black monday it was for Gunjan... a long day that left her broken. Emotionally abused and physically hurt. Agreed that no one has a right to treat their employees such, Samrat himself is a hurt individual. His problem is that he weighs everyone according to their financial status and you do have to agree, that the real world is infested with such people.


Gunjan is a soft hearted girl... Thank you for liking our portrayal of Gunjan.

Rahul is Gunjan's best friend. He knows her well... and also knows that even if she is hurt, she can hide the pain so as not to give tensions to her family. So prodding her gently, he manages to get her to talk. The story will move at it's own pace. When the time is right, he will speak up.

Thanks for liking our work Gunjan.



Edited by SwaNia_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Hi S3 !! First,I want to say BIG Sorry,😳 for my very very late Reply😳.Guys,you know naa...reason so...😳 😳 😳 Ok...now..come to the point...means Update😊.As usual another Fantastic and Fabulous Part.👏 👏 👏.I loved this part...A last day in Office scene😭...it was so touchy n Outstanding Part👏 👏 👏. Guys,I know you all are Master in dealing in Human emotion feelings,Part-25/28 is Perfect example for it...Superb written Parts Guys.👏 👏 👏.

And,Now...My favorite Part... Forthcoming Scenes/Tracks😊.Its so so interesting... Actually,I am also unaware with some points so,more curious about read those parts😊.Please Guys update soon naa... 😊

Joseph.❤️

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Not a problem, Joseph. We do understand.😊

Glad that you liked the last office scene. These scenes were emotionally sapping for us too. And Thank You for your words of appreciation... they do mean a lot to us.

Posting the teaser soon.😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys u all r mindblowing👏
loved your updates😛
plz continue soon n plz add me in ur pm list
Twinkle
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy i really love 28 part C u 3 guys are soo awesome love every part u guys wrote
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: snowwhite28



i am tanu...i regularly read yur updates via mobile b'coz my lappy was not working..now it is fine... i will try to comment regularly...waiting for the "teaser"...😃



Thanx TANU for liking our story n Updates😳 Thank God,now..your Lappy is working B'coz, V really want to read your regular feed-back about our upcoming Updates😊.V will B post 'TEASER' part on Next Day morning.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess009

Hi guys u all r mindblowing👏

loved your updates😛
plz continue soon n plz add me in ur pm list
Twinkle



Thank You Twinkle for your reply.😊 We have added you to the PM list. Posting the teaser tomorrow.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

heyy i really love 28 part C u 3 guys are soo awesome love every part u guys wrote


Thank you Shafoo for your regular, encouraging comments on our updates.😊 Posting the teaser soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
A word of THANX to our esteemed readers :

Thank you readers for your overwhelming support and encouraging and regular comments which have helped us improve in every update.

JOSEPH... thank you buddy for having faith in us and handing over your most Awesome and amazing creation to us.V R enjoying writing this story.

V would like to Spl. thanks the following Readers for regularly Commenting on our updates, there by encouraging us to write better...Guys,Your all words R very-very precious for us :

Gunurlove (Rija), Gunjan, Gnaneswari, Aashi, Joseph, hbkumar, Amira, Aamirkhanfan, Saduf, 358674, Tanzeel, Tasnin96 (Nilu), snowwhite28 (Tanu), Ammykhan, PINK (Linu), Koolgurl (Hameeda), Preety, Shafoo, Monaya_Sajan, MARS14 (Merri), Lekshmic7, Kins103, Tuli, Lakshmi_SG, Fend, PrincessBushi (Bushara) , Roknstarz_mjht (Neefa), Kritika, Karantakiar (Vritika), Twinkle, starasdf, Sajanrox (Nivriti), Anjali, PragyaluvsSajan (Pragya), Ambika, Swaatii, Mukitzz, Aditi, MoNaYaRoX.

sorry If V have missed any name.😳


With LOVE,
S3😊


Edited by SIZZZLER - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]



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Hi Friends😊,

Finally,V R posting the TEASER of this FF.😊 V R ready with all these parts. These parts R not posted in sequential order (B'coz, V don't want to reveal story,so easily😳.) Which TEASER preludes which... to know, Wait n Watch.😉 Hope V have managed to kindle curiosity among our readers.😊

V would like to remind our readers here that as mentioned in the character sketch and the NOTE in the first part, all 3 characters R in the Gray shade. None is the conventional 'HERO ' and none the obvious 'Negative Character'. So, what each will do to outdo the other to win the girl of their dreams is unpredictable. Please ! do not read this story with a pre-set mind...

V request our lovely readers to take some time out of their busy schedule to give their opinion about the TEASER scenes... which scene appealed to them so much as to kindle their curiosity?? This would help us improvise that scene better to make for an even entertaining reading for U.


A Special NOTE for 'New Readers' :-

It is an earnest request to our NEW Readers to read this FF from the start as further updates will contain certain references from earlier updates. RaJan past,the Engagement Ring sequence, Confusion in 'The PARADISE', the revelation about SAMRAT's Parents, just to name a few.

Thanx,
S3😊

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