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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin
Weee you updated!!! I loved the way how Riddhima expressed her emotions to Armaan. And Riddhima's past makes me curious. Armaan is actually kinda getting attracted to herrr😆.
Waiting for update and you wrote lovely!👏

Well about the 'attracted to her' bit, you'll have to see. But there's definitely a few cells of his being which have become intensely protective of Riddhima, you'll see it as we go ahead in the story :)

Originally posted by: BeautyfulDesire
The chapter was outstanding!!! I love how you explain everything and express their feelings. I'm glad everything is better between Armaan and Riddhima. I hope everything stays well between them. Riddhima was deeply hurt by Armaan :( This FF is like a lesson to everyone who feels this way.

I'm glad you feel that way. I hope it helps people who do feel this way in life. Helps me sometimes :)

Originally posted by: Sanaa629
EEEKKK!!! You updated!!

And YEAYYY!!! I made it online to read it!!

Shru I Missed you sooo muchh!!!! Like tonnes and tonnes..!!! I LOVED the part!! LOVED it sooo much..!! Ridz is REALLY brave for being able to spill all that out to Armaan..of all people..and Armaan..oufff...I'm falling in love WITH HIM!!! And even though I know what's gonna happen..I really really really wish it didn't because I love BOTH characters SO bloody much!!!! I hate you shru for doing this..!!! I'll try and disect the whole part some time later today..or if not then by phone when I get internet again..

Miss you!!!

Sanaa

At least you remember my stories. And I just noticed your very many few reserved posts in this thread. Late lateef. I can't even complain, because I know I'm way worse. Ha. But I think we both are past that stage of commenting on each other's things, we know what we're going to say anyway. LOL!

Miss you!

P.S. Sshh, there are people who don't know the story, so shut up!

Originally posted by: rockstar_kajen
Omgieee finally I read all the parts...u r like brilliant at writing :D though I've told u before...I m telling u again...u make everyone fall for ur ff 😳
The way u portray the characters and their feelings needs to be facilitated 👏
U make it look real
Continue soonish :)
Love

Thank you, thank you for reading and coming back to comment!

Originally posted by: Die_hardfan_KSG
OMG OMG OMG!! Can you PLEASE GET THAT PENDANT FOR MEEE?😒 I WANT THAT FOR MYSELF! Eeekkss the way you described it looks like the most pretty pendant Il ever see! And OMG ONE DIRECTION KE TICKET? And Its none other than Armaan who did all this? I JUST HAVE ONE THING TO SAY NOW! SHRUU YOU BETTER FIND ME A GUY LIKE HIM <33 I sooo wish there are guys like him in real world too.. He is sooo cute! I can't wait to see Riddhima's reaction to this now! She is gonna be stunned :$
Fantastic sneak peak!! Its sooo fantastic that i want to read the whole part right this moment! 😳
update soon xx

Uh, you could have it if i knew where you got it, the pendant. Kabhi dikhega toh I'll send you a picture. LOL!

And yeah man, Armaan's a sweetheart. Bloody One D tickets cost 43 quid minimum. I don't have that kind of money. Concert's in April. MUJHE JAANA HAI! Argh. Wish I had an Armaan too, you know.

Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin
WOW!! Kya sneek peek. Ohh i love the pendent and the text on it. And ONE DIRECTION asdfghjkl cool!! 🤣 And yes Armaan no one can beat him in romance and surprises . Waiting for updatee^^

DON'T LAUGH AT ONE D. Touche topic for me. Hahahaha. But yeah, wish I had someone who would give me that. Siiigh.

Edited by Munchkin. - 12 years ago

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: Aanya.
Asdfwkjkj Armaan is so adorkable :D the gifts sound lovely :D

Also I just read your hny note and pshh you don't have to thank me lol :$

UPDATE SOOON because I can't wait to read more <33

And and and HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO 🤗

xoxo

Thankings <3

And I need better comments when your 12th's over babe. So says the hypocrite me. Ha!

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy
Could it be any more cheesier? *Chandler Bing Style*😆

Not that I am complaining 'cause I am all for a cornball fest! 🤣 I got over the 1D mania though, still listen to their songs. Kiss You comes out in 3 days!

This scene reminded me of The Perks of Being a Wallflower. I know, I know - You don't like Logan Lerman. But have you seen the movie?

Before I go off to a way more tangential topic, lemme just say that I can't wait to read the adorable, mushy stuff lying ahead? My senior year is so traumatic that I'm hoping some happiness - even fictional - may get my spirits high!😳 And just so you know - Even if Armaan would have gotten her One Direction in the box, he wouldn't have beaten Peanuts. Just sayin'.

And I read the note - Awww. YOU THANKED ME? :O I'm sure that your mind has gone haywire sitting at home without doing anything for the past two weeks because seriously YOU say something nice about ME...am I in parallel universe?? 🤔

Thank you anyway! I <3 you missy..I know I'm not active and stuff, but don't ya think that Imma not reading your work, 'kay? :)

Update soon. (Feels so good to be able to say that!😆)

xoxo
NeNe

Man, long comments. i'm gonna edit this again and reply to your's. Plainly coz I'm sleepy. And I love being mean to you. HA! Your fault you commented late, it took the energy out of me to reply to so many comments. I know you're killing me in your head. Know that I'm doing it deliberately just to piss you off. HAHAHAHAHHAHA.

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: smarty94
res.

*EDIT*

i'll be very honest with you. I usually do not read others character's fan-fins apart from ArHi (yes, i am quite their ardent fan), I came upon this thinking the same, but I absolutely wholely and solely fell in love with your writing, trust me I am pretty choosy when it comes to fics, but laaaveeed laaveeddd lavveddd your writing mate. I read all the chapters till now, also the sneak peek 😉

getting back to the chapters, he acted like an absolute A** with her in their early days. I can imagine the whole scenario, credit goes to your writing, and well considering I went through something like this, but well my *ahemm* story wasn't *exposed* like this, the guy was a pretty good friend of mine and he came to personally tell me about it😳 i felt like drowning at that time, so I can imagine KHUSHI's feelings as well. 😳😳

her changing herself for better is what i support, sometimes such incidents give people confidence to build themselves up😃

and really glad that they have changed for better😊 and she has forgiven him for what he did😊
although how he was treated in the beginning was what he really deserved and i think a little more would've put ME personally to rest, but after his outburst at her for acting like a self-centered freak, felt bad for him as he was trying his best😊

and ohhh!! totally forgot MUSKAAN and RAHUL😆 he left her because he wasn't himself sure about his feelings about this😆 confused guy that he is😆 glad they are back😊

and about the sneak peek i was left hayee-ing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sachi!😆

oh btw, I imagine SHILPA ANAND and not any other RIDDHIMA cuz well, I only got to watch DMG till she was there usske baad meray ghar mein channel bandh hogaya😆 told you so to let you know, you can absolutely ignore this part😆

take care and update soOn😊

i'll reply to your comment soon :) Gotta go at the moment.

Everyone else - thank you for the comments. Need to scan back and reply to a few more I think! Will get down to it soon-ish. Thanks again x

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: Munchkin.
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Uh, you could have it if i knew where you got it, the pendant. Kabhi dikhega toh I'll send you a picture. LOL!

And yeah man, Armaan's a sweetheart. Bloody One D tickets cost 43 quid minimum. I don't have that kind of money. Concert's in April. MUJHE JAANA HAI! Argh. Wish I had an Armaan too, you know.

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Haha you are in line babe :$ You Gotta find me a guy first who is a combination of Peanuts and Armaan in this FF and if still there is another guy like that, then you get him! 😆 OMFG :| Its THAT expensive? Man, another criteria, that guy needs to have that kind of money too to buy me a ticket :| 🤣

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SleepingBeauty.

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Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

And Ohh you putting up another sneak peak right now? :D

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

I love you and miss you.

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shivanisaur

@shivanisaur

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

Happy New Year everybody and all the best for 2013! May it be filled with lots of joy of prosperity!

OMG I just read this whole ff so far and it's actually amazing!
I have never seen dil mil Gaye but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this ff!
Your plot is really interesting and well planned and the style is amazing such that it is an intriguing read! Seriously it is one of the best I have read so far and it is evident that much though has gone into writing this..
As well as creating a great plot and some complicated and realistic character you have manage to put in quite a few philosophical thoughts that actually make the reader start thinking.. I enjoyed reading these part especially!
All the chapters have been absolutely fantastic but my favourite section in this whole ff (the part I have read to all my friends!) is 'But what her thoughts centred around, was that how everyone she had known had their own baggage. Their own secrets, their own problems, their own miseries. But amidst all of that, in between all the hurdles, all the sorrows, and all the deep shit that life put you through, they still managed to smile. People had their share of drama, their own sad soap-operas. But she guessed life was just like that. No one's life could be forever perfect and ever filled with smiles and happy meals. Life wasn't a party everyday. And just because life was never fair to you, it didn't mean you contempt anyone who smiles throughout the day without a care of the world - you may never know how they cry themselves to sleep every night.'
This was very thought-provoking, sweet and true..
The character are absolutely amazing! None of them are perfect but that makes them even more admirable and realistic..
I truly think this is an amazing ff and one of the best I have read from Dil Mil Gaye..
Thanks for giving us the opportunity to read it!
It's absolutely terrific!!
Loved it!
Thanks

Edited by shivanisaur - 12 years ago

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#808

-Sneak-Peek-

Tragedies are regarded to be some of the worst moments of your life. Moments you never want to recall. Moments you never want to relive. Moments you want to erase with every cell in your being.

Especially in a life like her's, there had been such moments. Moments she could call her personal tragedies. Moments she could call agonising catastrophes. Moments she could call devastating calamities.

And yet, her greatest tragedy had been the one moment her eyes had locked with his. The one moment she had noticed the specks of grey pearls in his aquamarine blue eyes. The one moment she knew she had fallen. He had been her greatest tragedy.

But it had been years, years since that tragedy had passed. Years since she'd moved on. Or she thought that she'd moved on.

As she looked up at him, her gaze falling on his eyes again, she knew it was coming. She knew it was coming all over again. The tragedy, the calamity, the devastation of it all. Him.

-x-

So, I haven't managed a whole chapter yet. Nor have I given you a sneak-peek which is going to come in the near future. This is something that's not going to happen for a very, very, very, very, long time. Add a few more 'very's there. Anyhow, it was just a thought, and I thought it would torture you guys till I got down to writing a chapter, so eh. Posting it anyway. Hate on me all you want. LOL!

I repeat: this is not happening anywhere in the near future. At least not in the next 10-15 chapters. Maybe 20. Depends on how and at what pace I write the piece of crap which is this story.

Buh-bye xx

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rockstar_kajen

@rockstar_kajen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#809

Omg 😲 u atleast managed a sneak peek :P. I m happy with that. :P I guess this part is gonna be the confession part 😳 can't wait for this part...but but but I know it's really far...so I manaofying my dill 🤣
Anyways an awesome sneak peek 😃 nice way of convincing our dills with small sneak peeks 🤣 stop convincing our dills 🤣 nd update the part soonish 😳
U know what? This is my longest comments amongst all the ff's I read 🤣
And the biggest thing is I'm the first one to comment

Edited by rockstar_kajen - 12 years ago