Chasing Shadows - Chapter 6-Pg118, NOTE-Pg120

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smarty94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

res.

*EDIT*

i'll be very honest with you. I usually do not read others character's fan-fins apart from ArHi (yes, i am quite their ardent fan), I came upon this thinking the same, but I absolutely wholely and solely fell in love with your writing, trust me I am pretty choosy when it comes to fics, but laaaveeed laaveeddd lavveddd your writing mate. I read all the chapters till now, also the sneak peek 😉

getting back to the chapters, he acted like an absolute A** with her in their early days. I can imagine the whole scenario, credit goes to your writing, and well considering I went through something like this, but well my *ahemm* story wasn't *exposed* like this, the guy was a pretty good friend of mine and he came to personally tell me about it😳 i felt like drowning at that time, so I can imagine KHUSHI's feelings as well. 😳😳

her changing herself for better is what i support, sometimes such incidents give people confidence to build themselves up😃

and really glad that they have changed for better😊 and she has forgiven him for what he did😊

although how he was treated in the beginning was what he really deserved and i think a little more would've put ME personally to rest, but after his outburst at her for acting like a self-centered freak, felt bad for him as he was trying his best😊

and ohhh!! totally forgot MUSKAAN and RAHUL😆 he left her because he wasn't himself sure about his feelings about this😆 confused guy that he is😆 glad they are back😊

and about the sneak peek i was left hayee-ing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sachi!😆

oh btw, I imagine SHILPA ANAND and not any other RIDDHIMA cuz well, I only got to watch DMG till she was there usske baad meray ghar mein channel bandh hogaya😆 told you so to let you know, you can absolutely ignore this part😆

take care and update soOn😊

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Asdfwkjkj Armaan is so adorkable :D the gifts sound lovely :D

Also I just read your hny note and pshh you don't have to thank me lol :$

UPDATE SOOON because I can't wait to read more <33

And and and HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO 🤗

xoxo

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Aanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Also put the page number in the title bey

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Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Could it be any more cheesier? *Chandler Bing Style*😆

Not that I am complaining 'cause I am all for a cornball fest! 🤣 I got over the 1D mania though, still listen to their songs. Kiss You comes out in 3 days!

This scene reminded me of The Perks of Being a Wallflower. I know, I know - You don't like Logan Lerman. But have you seen the movie?

Before I go off to a way more tangential topic, lemme just say that I can't wait to read the adorable, mushy stuff lying ahead? My senior year is so traumatic that I'm hoping some happiness - even fictional - may get my spirits high!😳 And just so you know - Even if Armaan would have gotten her One Direction in the box, he wouldn't have beaten Peanuts. Just sayin'.

And I read the note - Awww. YOU THANKED ME? :O I'm sure that your mind has gone haywire sitting at home without doing anything for the past two weeks because seriously YOU say something nice about ME...am I in parallel universe?? 🤔

Thank you anyway! I <3 you missy..I know I'm not active and stuff, but don't ya think that Imma not reading your work, 'kay? :)

Update soon. (Feels so good to be able to say that!😆)

xoxo

NeNe

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-AK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

that was such a really nice sneak peek and the pendant u described was really nice its soo thoughtful and rahuls thoughts on one direction are lol :P
I just loved the whole sneak peek now plz plz plz give us a part :D

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Nice preview! Everyone said you described the pendent perfectly and you did. You are good at describing things and I'm a mess at it. LOL! One Direction tickets!! Wee! I didn't like them at first, but now I have started too. Can't wait to read what happens next between Armaan and Riddhima :D

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Munchkin.

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Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Wowie so many comments to wake up too! Replies will come soon.. Thanks xx

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vidu87

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

OMG awesome precap

hayeee yeh 10.1.2013 kab aaegi

waitn for d update

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#799

Since i'm such a loser, I'm gonna comment on the comments after the sneak-peek. Its the same people anyway. LOL!

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: Ethereal-Path
OMG, you're back! 😳

Chasing Shadows - I likey! Its very appropriate and more central but then I loved "Behind the ..' too...that was so Armaan-ish 😳 Aah! So Armaan on a stalker spree. LOL

The outburst in the end was natural.. there's only to a limit a person can handle ignorance. I know its not easy for Ridz to forget everything. It hurts. But then she's not a teenager too anymore. Until and unless she lets go of the past, she won't be at peace herself. I won't say she should forgive Armaan now coz that will come when it has to but the least she can do for now is to learn to adapt to his presence around her. Friendship and companionship will come eventually. Armaan also needs to stop pestering her and give her time until it's all okay.

Continue B soon. Night out sounds ... promising?!

-V-

Hiyyyaa :D

Okay, first thing - 'BTHE' was for Riddhima's eyes, not Armaan's! LOL!

And thank you! Hope you've read the next parts, it answers your questions!

Originally posted by: Die_hardfan_KSG
Res. (:

*EDITED*
I have read the part just now, will give you my comment in a while! Anyways I AM SUPER HAPPY THAT ME IS FIRST IN COMMENTING! YAYY <3

*EDITED*
PHEWW.. Finally i get time to edit. LMFAOO how much ever you would like beat me for this, mera mann hi nahi ho raha to edit. LOLL i was like << Il do it in a while and then forget. LMFAOOO But then now i finally went like I HAVE TO DO IT. 🤣

SO FINALLY IL GET TO THE PART. Aah this was the much needed part! And Shru this was written beautifully! People might not agree with me but this was your best writing in this FF till now! The pain and hurt you could manage to make me feel was commendable! I WAS TOUCHED TOTALLY.

Liked how you used alcohol for all the things that followed! Riddhima getting insecure, walking out, Armaan noticing her, she throwing up and Armaan helping her out, then Armaan dropping her back home, Riddhima confessing how she is all alone, Riddhima not in her senses requests him to stay back with her, and Armaan without any question does!, then in the morning how Riddhima reacts to Armaan there and THEN THE PAST FOLLOWED. << all of this WAS AWESOME. YOU DID A SPLENDID JOB, LOVE! <3

Finally Armaan realises what led to just that one moment. And how everything just changed after that! The way you described Riddhima cutting her wrist -

"I stared at it for the longest time, and I kept
telling myself to just do it, end it all." Riddhima
whispered, feeling a lump choke up deep in her
throat. Clearing it, she continued, "Finally, i just
picked it up and placed it on my wrist. It was cold,
the steel. So cold. I kept pushing it tighter against my wrist, slowly. I was so scared. I was terrified'"

It felt like i was going through that. I felt like i was cutting my wrist. I could feel that i went through that pain and i felt like i had blood all around me!

How much ever i felt Riddhima was wrong in troubling Armaan and behaving like that, now that all just vanished. It just reminded me on wrong i was. Though Armaan never meant her to go through all that. He would have never let all this happen if he had the slightest idea about this. I don't know what to say :(

Even though Armaan was not at fault, i could feel how hurt he was! How guilty he was! I hope he makes it up to her somehow now.

Whatever said and done, Shru you were amazing in this part! And i loved it! <3 Write more of these kind of parts! I would Love to read them :D OMG! I managed to write that long comment! 😲 << how proud of myself i am! :D Anyways now i can ask for the next part since i edited :D
ILY <33
XX

P.S. - sorry for any repeats in the above comment. Lol or if i am just writing the same thing again and again but i ain't doing any proof reading LOLL i am like really really busy today! 😳

Thank you for the colorful comment, colored my entire, dull day when i read it. LOL!

Thank you! This part is especially close to my heart because it covers a subject I feel very strongly about. Personally, I think suicide's for losers and cowards, but there is always such a moment in every person's life where they contemplate over it. Its how you come out of it which counts in the longer run.

Thank you again!! xx

Originally posted by: Rhea.KaJen
Okay! I couldnt help but comment on this chapter!
I loved it Shruu!! :D
The way you expressed her feelings.. The way Armaan took care of her.. Her past.. Everything was written so well..
You know when you started this FF, I used to wait eagerly to read the next chapters..
And now, i'm glad that you're writing this one :)

Btw, its a request..
My birthday is on this saturday.. can I expect an update for AWOTB?
Please? :)

Love,
Rhea

Aww Rhea, sorry I missed your b'day! just been hell busy past 3 weeks, finally got 5 days to breathe now, then its back to Uni.

Hope you had a good b'day. Tell you what, the next time I update AWOTB, its going to be dedicated to you! And thanks for the comment, babee, hope your exams going well xx

Originally posted by: teenorchid
Miss MP shru.. Mera b kal bday hai... Plz update thattt. Btw Shruu have u changed the name of ths ff???

Happy Birthday to you too! I'm sorry didn't get time to update, but like I said, next update of AWOTB all for December and January babies :) x

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