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Posted: 14 years ago
u n ur frenz r always amazing, nidhi...👏👏👏
n even my princes'sur'...😛😛
loved it...i read 5 chapters in one go...OMG...1 of my biggest acheivements...😆
i wrote a poem...inspired by nivedita, u knw...n she liked it...😳😳
heehee...😃😃
nice chapter...update asap...!!😊
Edited by MikanSakura - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza both the installments are good...
Meri dresses dekh kar mujhe itni sharam aa rahi hain😆...
Hum logon ne kuch pehna bhi hain ki nahi😆...
Tit for tat was good...
But the guys are not going to get us so easily...
Plus a lots of conflicts are going to come between vampires and werwolves,witches...which will be a treat
Kudos once again👏...
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊 Both the parts were intresting. And tit for tat wow to good, guys wore fuming in anger. 😡 😡 .
Shabd and anu are wizards, nikki is witchy, Abhay is 200yrs waiting for there fight. 👏
Edited by Cuty16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love both yaar...nice..really nice
Edited by cblover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter- 34
Wow...Fiza...loved it Anu and Shabd are witch...now girls also have three powerful persons including Nikki with them apart from the boys...The boys were fuming on seeing other boys with the girls...it was cool... Abhay had given breakup party for him and Aysha but it seems all boys hearts are breaking on seeing girls in such cool outfits but other boys hands on their waist...it was just superb...
Edited by sur001 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter-35

😆😆😆😆...Throughout the update I was just laughing...gosh it was just superb...poor boys ...they lost the game...nazar hati aur durghatna ghati...so i think from next time they will concentrate on game more than looking at girls but the best part was the extent of their jealousy when they finally came in action ...Poor guys I don't think now they gonna dare to ask the girls for date next time or gonna come on their invitation...one thing I had missed ..in last I almost called Ji (jijaji) to jay or was that j...Nidh(bhabhiji) yaar always keep ice with you who knows when it will be needed...
The field is getting set for war ...vampire,wertewolfs..witch everything is there and no to be forgotten AFSAANS are together for each other and with each other...right😉
P.S-
For dress I second Nidh's words..
Meri dresses dekh kar mujhe itni sharam aa rahi hain😆...
Hum logon ne kuch pehna bhi hain ki nahi😆...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza U have blwon me away. The swimwear was a perfect touch personally i'd never wear such a thing lol but its good to image huh.
The fun and frolicks was a brilliant touch. Very playful. I'm glad the boys were all jealos. Serves them right. I was drinking my juice and almsot ckoked by laughig so hard.
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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:::Chapter 36:::Stroll in the Moonlight:::

After all the dancing and grooving the boys decide to take the girls individually for a one on one session alone in the moonlight. Abhay and Armaan had engineered all this with heavy back up plan B. They hadn't expected the girls to bring thier rivals for a party in full swing making them all seeth with anger. Jay took Nidha away from the crowd.
Jay was contemplating on what to say to Nidha. For some reason he was always tongue tied with her and knew she loved watching him in this way. He hated this vulnerability he had whenever he was with Nidha. She made all his insecurities come out. But she also made him feel alive. Like he'd found his match. He admired her for her strong stance against him and actually matching him every step of the way even challenging him with her words.
Jay sat down and Nidha joined him-Nidha why are U doing this to me? I am trying to keep away from U but U won't let me.
Nidha carefully watched Jay'seyes-Doing what?
Jay heard Nidha's voice had a hint of playfulness in it-Oh U know very well what U are doing. U know i don't like seeing U with Virain. He is a family firend of ours. Well he is Neels friend. I don't like the way he looks at U. The way he keeps touching U. I hate the way U both bounce off of each other. Do U know the agony i go through watching U with him. I'm not a jealous guy never have been but i don't know why i get like this with U.
Nidha smiled at Jay's acknowledgement-Good. I want U to feel jealous Jay. I want U to really feel somethig for me at least i know U care. But its not enough. I want more from U. Just beacuse U have the green eyed monster isn't going to make me stop talking to other men. If U want this to stop then U have to do something about it and fast.
Jay's eyes darken-Oh the jealousy card trick always works but U don't know me Nidha. U are so beautiful. Any man would be crazy not to fall for U but not me. U deserve better than Me Nidha.I will only complicate your perfect little life. I can't be with U but i can't see U with anyone else either.
Nidha reached out to hold Jay's hand squeezing it lovingly-Jay these past few months have been very dreamlike for me. U go your way and i'll go my way. Lets see if we are really meant to be. Because i am not waiting around for U Jay Khurana. U want me then fight for me. I assure U i'll get my way with U eventually. I'm not going to make this easy for U. Do U hear me? I'll do whatever it takes just try to stay away if U can? I dare U.
Sur with Neel splashes her bare feet in the water watching him open and close his mouth-What game are U playing Sur? I tell U not to have any contact with Virat and there U go U do the opposite to what I ask U.
Sur giggles-Oh come off it Neel. Like I care about what U want me to do. U don't own me. I'm an independant girl and i like my freedom but U just want to control everything from who i talk to to what we do. Its rediculous. I like U a lot but sometimes it gets a little too much. I miss all the fun like today. It was so cool with all of U boys.
Neel nodded-I know. I'll try to be a little more outgoing for U and give U your space.U are someone i never want to lose Sur. You're young and don't want to be tied down i get it but i'm warning U now you'll land me in prison soon with your flirtatious antics with Virat.
Sur pushed Virain over landing on top of him with both their eyes locked-Then its a good thing. Means U really like me. No more of this staying away routine Ok. U want me then U have to be around me. I am not going to date Mr Invisible. Now this is a threat.
Aysha and Abhay sat quietly as she glared at Abhay angrily. Abhay tried hard to reason with her but Aysha would not listen to a word he was saying to her. It was too difficult for her to firgive his betrayal. Aysha didn't want to give Abhay an easy way out. Making him jealous only meant he cared a little or maybe he was playing a bigger game only this time he was out to destroy her for good. No Abhay was going to pay big time. Aysha had no time for him even though her heart ached to be with him. It was her punishment for falling for him. Her trust was broken. Aysha thought he looked so gorgeous and reprimanded herself for melting away at his icy blues.
Abhay read Aysha's mind-This isn't another bet Aysha. I am hand on my heart very sorry and want U to forgive me. What i did was stupid. It was unfirgivable just give me another chance. (He tries to hold Aysha only for her to back away)
Aysha syells-Don't U dare touch me with yout hands. Your words mean nothing to me. They are empty just like U. I don't understand why U made a U-turn Abhay? I don't want anything to do with U.
Aysha looks down getting lost with the waves of the sea ignoring Abhay and waiting for her friends to come back. Jay and Nidha arrived to help Aysha stay away from Abhay. Nidha wasn't allowing her friend to be heartbroken again. She knew how much Aysha loved him. Actually still loved him which is why it hurt.
Abhay packed up the treats away putting out the fire-Jay I hope this was fun for U. I know we had a few teething problems.
Jay watched the moon call to him reminding him of his personal issues he was dealing with. He could feel his skin feel like it was about to rip. The time was near he could feel it in his waters-Yeah bro. Thanks for a good party. Have U seen Neel anywhere?
Abhay heard Neel from afar-Yeah he is with Sur. They are on their way back.
Jay put his hands in his pocket watching Nidha hug Aysha protectively.
Sur comes running to her best friend Nidha for a girly hug-Comeone girls we'd better make a move on. We have College in the morning and these boys have worn us out.
Sanjana arrives with Shaurya giggling away-We on our way yet?
Sur nods-Just waiting on Fiza di and Anky. They are taking a while. I wonder if they've killed Arman? From the way she was looking at him i wouldn't be surprised. Abhay U are lucky Aysha isn't any where near as fiesty as Fiza Di. Then you'd know what payback was really about.
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...i felt for Jay today...dude he love Nidh so much but his changes are making him insecure...He wants Nidh to be away from him but can't see someone near him...serious problem...Nidh can't be blamed like any girl she wanna hear those three words from his mouth...Sometimes more than actions words that assures is needed and now the ups and downs gang is facing ...they surely needs assurance from their partners...Poor Neel but no problem dude I am not in a relation with you so now I am a free bird but Aysha you scared me you had said I will be in trouble coz of my rebellion attitude...*sniff* whats the plan
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg guyz👏 ... u all r amazing , amazing fiza ... boys were going dead seeing girls in such constumes , their jealousy was at highest ... i felt really bad fr boys though they deserved it, dunno why??... the update was amazing ... love the ff and continue soon🤗

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